FanLit

Here you go, getting my food mojo on again: first the pho in the last chapter and now the pepperoni, basil and goat cheese pizza in this one (I don’t know why that sounds so good, but it does). You are bringing out a foodie in me I didn’t even know I had, lol. 🍕 🍜

Them big, thick....personalities can be very distracting. Even small and thin ones....😉 Gotta love the variety of personalities.

YAY!!!! I marvel at the palpable love between these four (and Specter!!) that exists in their various angles with few words being used to express them. This story showed it through their actions and the actions said a lot. The slight detente between Desmond and Daniel was nice, too. I am all for a happily ever after with this trio (well now quartet) it is well earned. I wonder if Sam would ever heal enough psychologically to ever let Blair top him. An intriguing universe you’ve crafted. Thank you for sharing.

WHEW!!!!

I had to stop reading at chapter 26, the suspense was getting to me so much; Now that the story is completed, I’m reading it all the way through. While I’m glad the guys are working together and putting the pieces in place, my heart is breaking over Desmond and his guilt. I’m also wondering if burning the tattoo off now was wise, if it might not be a link of some kind to Sam.

It’s plain to see With each new task, Poetry is a genre Your skill can surpass. Limitless, are you In storytelling, too. Waves of emotion At sea in your words. Surf go your readers On sensitive turf. Guided by hands That till literary earth. My amateurish attempt at saying your poetry rocks as well as your stories do.

Thanks for clarifying; I just finished chapter 2.

“He wanted him so much he was willing to try being another person for a while.” It’s sad that Justin can’t believe that this is who he is underneath all the attitude and damage, that he has to pretend to be someone else to be liked. Like drpaladin, I too dislike medicating children, tho I recognize it’s necessity in extreme cases. Justin’s case didn’t seem extreme, it seemed like the medication was given to him because nothing else worked.

There are no words to describe Desmond’s depths of self flagellation when he realizes his part in this. In a previous post, I said he would kill himself before he allowed himself to be used to harm Sam, I fear the action he will commit to himself upon discovery after the fact of all this, that is unless She-Who-Shall-Remain-Nameless-Until-She-Gets-Her-Ass-Handed-To-Her has fixed it so that Blair destroys Desmond in his attempt to protect Sam. 💔

She-Who-Shall-Remain-Nameless-Until-She-Gets-Her-Butt-Kicked 👍 👏 Yes, it doesn’t even deserve to be mentioned anymore.

This story went from chapter 1 to the currently being edited chapter 3. Could this be chapter 2, by any chance?

‘Sluts doan’ complain. I can keep it up like I eat Viagra sandwiches.’ What a funny, memorable line, lol!! The boisterous boasting of an angry, traumatized and confused young man. Justin’s denial of his sexuality resulted in him being a careless man whore and his attraction to Nathan manifests itself as “Fuck off” being the only reply to any statement made by Nathan. Interesting start.

No. No. No. It’s that fucking tattoo. NO!!!! 😢 I don’t want anything breaking up the family Desmond, Gabriel and Sam have made with each other. Seems Specter has some special abilities if he was able to be in the dream to try and stop this from happening, wonder how he’ll treat Desmond when he wakes up; Actually I wonder why he didn’t try to stop them in this dream, too. This development makes me very sad.

Hunger (especially for umm, “more”) is a very good thing indeed. 👍 🤨 Chups (that is my onomatopoeia for sucking teeth)

❤️ Simply perfect and perfectly simple. 🍻

They respect each other and they both love Sam. Peace will reign as long as Sam is safe; I fear how long that peace will last when it looks like Desmond has an unwitting part in Sam’s preparation for this “sacrifice”. Desmond would kill himself before he allowed himself to be knowingly used to hurt Sam in any way but it doesn’t seem he knows.

How sweet, the peeks at new love, as well as love that could be. It seems like sheriff Keen is keen on Ms. Rachel and Ms. Rachel might not mind. I’m glad to know Casey had his own suspicions about Adam’s disappearance, he will definitely respect the evidence given to his care and see if it can further the path to justice. Wren and Caleb’s date was so sweet, a heartfelt effort doesn’t have to be expensive or outlandish, simple can convey so much. The song was an oldie but a beautiful, moving goodie. You truly whet my appetite (for food 😉) with your delicious menus, that meal sounded delicious. I’m waiting on those boys (cause they sure as hell ain’t men) to show their ass again because I know they aren’t done; I hope they recognize they can’t make Wren disappear like Adam did without bringing suspicion down on them like a blazing search light.

Bittersweet chapter. Desmond’s dream concerns me but the fun is just beginning with the twins separated at birth!! 😆

I’m sorry you experienced that and am glad for your recovery.

The slice of happiness that Lex deserves. I cant wait to see the rings Cassie chose for the guys.

That dinner is going to be WELL DONE.

While contentment and a very regular, smoking hot sex life (yes, I’m jealous, lol) can dull sharp edges, I think Desmond fell prey to that concocted accident Eve created and did something to him and Sam in that incident. Desmond may be too worried about Sam in this prophecy thing to even consider that he might have a part in it other than to stop it; Had both Desmond and Sam spoke up about dreams that can’t be remembered afterward, it would perk up something in Desmond.

Looks like Donny may want to give Seth some angst at some point....

Seth has met his match. The mysterious Chip’s the one holding all the cards right now.

Interesting main character and locale. I like the banter between Seth and young’un with the green eyes. Looking forward to more.