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You did an incredible job taking us on a unique journey in “A Tattoo for Lex” and are doing an equally good job in “A Decision for Jarren”. I can’t say I’m happy about Nash losing his foot but it is a realistic circumstance of the accident, bad things unfortunately happen to good people. Jarren and Nash are perfect for each other and you have provided the perfect setting for them discovering their love. I look forward to how you will take Nash through his latest challenge and how you will add him to the loving family of characters you’ve created. In case you weren’t certain, I think you’re doing a fabulous job. You are a great writer.
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I’m going to miss Danny too. “Bye Danny” 👋 Hope his new relationship can survive long distance. I like the ease of normalcy that has quickly been established with Jarren and Nash and already view them and Liam as a family unit. Looking forward to Lex, Cassie and crew meeting Nash.
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SOOO CUTE!!!! That was a nice, teasing build up to the kiss, looking forward to more. Thank you for taking your readers into consideration with the timeline.
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Yep, Aubrey’s interested. I’m curious about Aubrey’s boyfriend and how happy they are with each other. It’s clear Andrew has a chance and Aubrey’s fighting it, lol.
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This is really cute!!!! My eyes started to glaze over during the limits explanation, lol but I like the vibe between Tyler and Sean. Sean’s crush on Tyler is adorable....guess we’ll find out if Tyler has any interest, too.
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Nice. Andrew needs some maturity and Aubrey needs some fun. That jolt seems to indicate they can find exactly what they need from each other. I think Joel’s husband is the leak, lol.
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So Cutie Pie is a pyromaniac, interesting.... When I saw Asher referred to as “hot”, I thought that was referencing his looks, guess it meant a little more.
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Andrew needs some humbling, actually it seems like they both could. Let the meeting begin....
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Wow. ☄️ 🔥 Everyone’s first time should be memorable (in a good way), Jarren definitely got that. It was a first for Nash, too, his first time with Jarren would’ve been special no matter what, having it be erotically hot is a bonus, lol. Well done.
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Nice setup and engaging characters to support it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Chapter 4: Car Problems
FanLit commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 4: Car Problems
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Well that seemed to go pretty well! 😆 LOL!! I’ll say. Sometimes it just needs to be all about sex.
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What a lovely, poetic comment.
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I didn't feel it happen. It's like it has always been this way."...”Somewhere along the way, somehow," Wren swallowed and forced himself to say the words, "I fell in love with you." W.T.F. with the big turnaround with Wade?!?! Wow. Rachel is laying down the law and letting Casey know if she can’t accept her gay son, she can’t accept him; good for her. Looking forward to seeing how you’ll wrap this up.
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I actually meant to say that I don’t recognize Wren from the beginning of the story, not chapter but unseen layers of Wren were indeed bared in this chapter.
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You humanized the uncles(mostly, lol ) reminding us that being a sinner doesn’t erase the saint; Thank you for that, Wayne. "I don't belong here. So, I'm gonna go. But, before I do,"....”Yer daddy was a good man. We didn't agree on much, but that don't mean I didn't love 'im." Wade’s devotion to Adam is hugely redemptive. Maybe realizing what their greed truly cost might have Wade and Kyle change their ways (maybe?); Jason showed his way, not by accidentally killing Adam but by trying to frame Kyle for it, so while I don’t write Jason's humanity off, I really don’t care. I don’t even recognize this Wren from the one in the beginning of the chapter, lol; He is truly where he belongs, with people who love him and where he can be his best self.
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When Nash described being the officer at Lex’s beating, I thought that would be the biggest surprise but him losing his precious JuJubee was devastating 🥺. I’m surprised Nash’s mother was able to get to Kyle and glad that he was able to be a protective father the whole of Julia’s life. Jarren and Nash are both exactly what the other needs right now, I hope they get serious enough for Nash to make a trip to Massachusetts to meet the family and be reunited with Cassie and Lex. Speaking of....how’s Lex’s twin, I mean father? 😊. Tell him I said “hi”.
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I’ll bite, what would WC stand for?
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I thought it was all of them involved with Adam’s death, instead it was only Jason, son of a bitch. Its shows how far he has gone that Jason would frame one brother for the murder of another. I suppose there is some consolation that Wade and Kyle are mean, greedy, heartless assholes who didn’t commit murder but that still leaves them as mean, greedy, heartless bastards. You had me going tho, Wayne, lol. I thought of “Guarded” when Kyle was believing Jason's red herring that sheriff Keen killed Adam so I didn’t dismiss it right away. Will Jason allow himself to be arrested, or will there be another Hambrick brother deceased before this is over?
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Jarren isn’t the only one who needs to figure himself out, Nash can’t think he’s doomed to an emotionally solitary life forever. Those two definitely need to have a talk when Jarren gets back. Btw, did Jarren let Danny know he was leaving? When you’re blunt like Cassie, you have to expect that everyone won’t always appreciate that approach; The time to check Jarren on his personal issues is not before a big work presentation, she shouldn’t have been hurt, she should have been more considerate. AND....approaching someone who is having identity issues with “So, are you done running away yet?” is not the best way to want to make them stay or open up. I love Cassie and I know she does what she does from love but she needs to soften those edges.
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Chapter 3: The end of the trip
FanLit commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 3: The end of the trip
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They have amazing sexual chemistry. It’ll be interesting to see how they navigate working with each other and if they revisit being lovers. I think there is more there than sex.
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Chapter 1: New Orleans
FanLit commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 1: New Orleans
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He surely has, lol. He’s all but peed on that man, LOL!! (Who knows if that might not come later....) Nash notices Jarren’s attitude toward Mandy and I think he knows it’s because of how she treats him, what’s his feeling about that?
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Regarding the chapter content: Will Jarren have second thoughts in the sober light of day over what he did with Nash? Does Mandy have an attitude with Jarren? (I know Jarren has an attitude with Mandy, which tickles me no end, defending his man before he’s his man) What’s her problem? “....wait, what? When did it happen? Oh fuck.” I can only hope someone isn’t hurt.
