Mym8te
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Oh the joy of intimacy and pleasure. What a lovely scene you have written for us all to enjoy. If this is the start it's going to get better and better. Whoopee! I'm so excited to see how this love story unfolds and for the pleasure to come. Don't keep us waiting too long please! Jake and Andy are likely to become so strong together and yet they are still so young. Wonderful.
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And here endeth the lesson! The truth is out there and there are witnesses!
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I can feel the tension rising between these two, in a good way. There's going to be some fun coming along soon, I can't wait. Not sure who's going to get in the sack first Ian or Paddy! Bring on the next chapter soon please.....
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What a storyline! I've laughed and cried and loved these characters on this journey. They spread warmth and happiness to all they meet. There is no end to their talents and enthusiasm for life and each other. I was in heaven reading this story from start to finish. Thank you for writing this captivating story. I'm sure there is more to come in due course.
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These characters were really easy to relate to and journey with. A happy ending is always a bonus too! Perhaps there could be another chapter involving a photography exhibition, a job promotion, a dance school and a new puppy? Keep up the good work, it must be good because all the reviews are positive. Well Done.
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It's good to mix things up a little bit! Keeps it fresh. I like the idea of family protectors, and perhaps the 'bonus' is having to be quiet in the bedroom, when your Bruv's next door! What's going to happen next I wonder? Bring on the next five chapters please and soon!
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You had me gripped on this story from start to finish. You really captured the sincerity of their love and what it means to love. Just a shame that we didn't get introduced to Daven's mum. You should be proud of this story and for sharing with so many grateful people. Bravo.
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I'm liking the little 'spars' between them. It's building up nicely to something.....
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This story is only just beginning there is so much we have yet to learn and experience on this roller coaster journey. Will Adam use Ian as a confidant in his line of work? Will Ian embrace change in his life and help Paddy set up home after Uni? Will Anna's baby be deaf / autistic / super bright or HIV positive? can't wait for the naughty bits of romance too!
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This story keeps getting better and better. I am so consumed by this story, it seems pure agony to have to wait for the next installment. Keep them coming Paul, you're a natural. The more romantic the better too!
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Some very interesting writing has created a wide ranging set of circumstances capturing the imagination and willing us to read on. Romance is certainly not dead, and I'm sure we would all like a Sam in our lives as a friend, or as a life long partner!
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the plot thickens and I can't wait to see what happens next. Liked the reference to the opticians questions in the bedroom - very appealing!
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Who knows where this is heading? So much to do in such little time available. Here's hoping for some interesting further reading.
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Chapter 8: A Stranger in our Midst
Mym8te commented on Amikawrite's story chapter in Chapter 8: A Stranger in our Midst
There are so many different scenarios for this story to follow. I think there could be some healthy rivalry between companies to come, and some wonderful connectedness too! Let's see what the future holds for these adorable people. -
The sex in this story is going to get seriously interesting, if not eye wateringly painful! Bring it on real soon! Can't wait for more of this.
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This reads like an autobiography. I hope you got your life on track, and Terry found some peace and a meaningful relationship?
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I can't believe there isn't more, it's so enthralling. Loved the first kiss scene, and Matt is such a key player in this story too! You're really not allowed to sleep until the next chapters are finished. Bloody brilliant writing.
