Laura S. Fox

Thank you for all the support and your comments! I'm glad you think my story would be good for a TV series, but clearly not one for prime time :)) I hope you will enjoy my next story just the same. Cheers!

Ah, thank you so so much for the beautiful lyrics ... what song are they from? And thank you for all the beautiful comments throughout the story, they kept me going. As for children, he, he, I have yet to write an Mpreg story, never tried before LOL, but yeah, if it was possible, they would make such amazing kids together. Just imagining an unruly boy with Jake's skin tone and Klaus's amazing eyes ... ah, mothers can dream, right?

Thanks a lot for your kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed all this rollercoaster!

Thank you for reading!

Ah, thank you so much! The boys did deserve their HEA and I couldn't keep them away from each other for much longer!

Ah, sorry for making you sigh ... But if I was to continue it, it would have turned into Days of Our Lives, and it's just my thing that I believe stories should have an end, eventually. Thank you for all the support!

Hey, Sweetlion! So glad you liked it! Your comments often made me laugh and challenged me, and I am really happy I had you as a reader!

Ah ... thank you for all the lovely comments you wrote along the way, and this one just comes to round them up nicely. It feels awesome to have someone praising not only the story, but also the craft and you really did encourage me and helped me have more faith in what I do. All the best!

And I must thank you for all the awesome support! Cheers!

Ah, thank you so much for all the support, your kind words and your patronage. I am cooking intensively the delicious bit promised to patrons, and I'm even learning - at your suggestion - some naughty German phrases, hi, hi! I can barely wait to finish so I can post it there! Just that, when I try to end it, there are other ideas popping into my head, and I just have to add and add more. I just hope it doesn't turn into a book-length story (just joking).

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story till the end! I tried to offer a proper response to your beautiful review, too, but I just get an error when I hit submit

Thank you, Carlos, and I really appreciate you taking the time to write a review. It means a lot! Hugs!

Thank you so much Wes! You've supported the story since the beginning, and you were always the first to comment, so I can say, hand on heart, that your enthusiasm kept me going!

He went to his office, without even wondering whether he was supposed to search for Jake or not. If last night had been any indication, the ball was in Jake’s court now, and he only had to be patient and wait for events to unfold as the new master of the game desired. But waiting was torturous, he thought, as he carefully arranged the papers on the desk. The rest of the house was bustling with activity, with his personnel busy with putting everything back together after the party. There

He, he, I understand your impatience, but I will have to beg for your forgiveness for a few more days. As things stand, I have to be mindful of other writers and of their hard work, too, by not posting more often than it is polite. But your impatience is much appreciated! It shows how much you love the story

Very, very late to this topic, but yes, I played it. It was lots of fun, I had my character go on many Brofinder dates, but once I finished the true love route, I found it hard to pursue other characters by starting it again. Ian was always there, to look at me with his sorrowful eyes, while Mike talked of other guys. Although I wanted my Mike to get with that hunk of a teacher, and somehow I didn't make it.

Since this is a fanfiction piece, it was written as if people would know the characters, so first of all my sincere apologies. As there are people who seem to be interested in the story without knowing the original story behind it, I will do my best to make an introduction to the characters and their situation. I will reply first to you here, in the comments section, and I will see what I can do to properly explain the entire setup. That being said, in the original story, things are as follows. Mo Guan Shan is a bit of a punk and gets into a nasty fight with one of He Tian's friends. Things end with that guy in the hospital, but Mo Guan Shan doesn't exactly escape unpunished. After the fight, a few days later, He Tian finds Mo Guan Shan as he exits a supermarket, while musing over how much he hates to eat packaged meals. For reasons that are not yet clear in the original story, He Tian lives on his own, in a vast loft apartment with very little furniture inside. Hence, he has no one to cook for him. It is made obvious, at some point, to the readers that Mo Guan Shan's family had a restaurant, so Momo knows how to cook and He Tian is aware of that. So, that day, he grabs Mo Guan Shan and drags him home so the guy can cook for him. Momo is a bit afraid of He Tian, so he obeys. As the story in the comics progresses, the readers witness how He Tian saves Mo Guan Shan from becoming a drop out. He Tian also seems to enjoy Momo's services very much and not only. However, since he doesn't want to humiliate the boy by paying him to be his 'maid', he finds work for Mo Guan Shan at one of his family's friends. There is quite a bit of drama there, as Momo's father is in jail, and we're not told what for, and Momo acts like a punk because he feels angered and helpless about what happened with his dad. He Tian basically tries - and succeeds so far in the original story - to save Momo from a life of crime. I hope this clarifies the entire situation a little. If not, feel free to ask more questions! Thank you for reading!

His head was hurting. He didn't want to think about it. He Tian had looked upset when he had left. And all day, in school, he had been an asshole. And by that, Mo Guan Shan meant He Tian totally ignoring him, and acting up towards anyone who tried talking to him. He had even brushed off his female fan club. And that He Tian never did. But it wasn't Mo Guan Shan's fault, was it? Just when the guy was starting to act more like a human being. He fiddled with his phone. No new messages. No 'bri

Thank you for the nice and long comment! But reading it and connecting the dots with what others have said, I start to realize that one thing I failed to make clear. Hans has already married his fiance. Where I live, the wedding party takes place after all the ceremonial aspects, and, at the end of the night, the couple lives for their honeymoon. And, while it was Hans's and Stephen's wedding night, so to speak, I made it special for Klaus and Jake. So a double wedding is simply not possible now, due to this timeline. So, so sorry I mislead people with this chapter. I am obviously very much a work in progress as a writer. As for the sub/dom dynamics, again, I personally think that it's just bedroom play. And, of course, some people find it hot, while it's not others' cup of tea. Yes, your observation is correct. Klaus has yet to admit it As for Diaz, you will find about him in the last chapter. Thank you for reading my story and for this interesting comment.

He, he, you've read exactly into Jake's behavior and his way of thinking. Yet, the conversation in question will take place, whether he wants it or not. (I'm so glad that you find Jake to have it all figured it out, you definitely make a case for him). Thank you for the awesome comment!

Thank you for the enthusiastic comment! He, he, you really do like Jake to torture Klaus! And Jake in control, yes, that was bound to happen

Ah, sorry for being evil. I feel like I must repent! And, yes, that was the point I wanted to make

Ah, so good to be understood ... And thank you for the compliment!

I promise the next chapter will solve everything! And maybe serve as a bit of a bandaid, :))

Ha, ha, I managed to leave you without words! I love your long comments a lot, but this, this just says it all. As a writer, I could not feel more rewarded.