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This was a bittersweet moment - it was a beautiful epilogue to wrap up the story, but I'm sad it's over. As I read the last few chapters I thought we won't be hearing any more about Noah since Lauti has all but forgotten him, but this was a very fitting conclusion considering how the whole story started with the two of them. Also, it gave some kind of closure to Lauti. I thoroughly enjoyed every word of the story and I'm glad you were able to finish it despite less than ideal personal circumstances. I'll definitely be looking forward to more stories from you!
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Another lovely chapter! I have to say, this is the best story I've read in a long while. You've created such a wonderful world and a cast of characters, and your writing style is so satisfying to read. I hope we get to see more from you! Lauti and Valen are so cute and quite mature for their age. They have definitely grown since they got together. I enjoyed the truth or drink scene a lot too, and I have to say I'm going to miss the gang. Can't wait for the epilogue!
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Lying in bed, in his cozy bedroom above the shop, Edwin stared at the ceiling, sleepless. Outside, the sun was slowly setting on the horizon, painting the cloudy sky red and purple. Inside, three candles placed on a nearby wooden table cast warm light on the old wooden dresser and shelves stacked with books and crystals. Feeling nostalgic, Edwin shifted his gaze to look at the flames dance as the wax slowly melted. As he got lost in thoughts of his childhood, spending time with Marcella an
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How inspired was that We'll learn more about Edwin's background later for sure! Thank you for reading & commenting!
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Thank you! I think you might be right.
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Looking up from the amethyst necklace in his hands, Edwin took a deep breath as a refreshing gust of wind came through one of the cracked windows of his little trinket shop. It was another pleasant, chilly spring morning, which was quite usual for the port town of Ossvale. The young man gazed out the window, as if trying to predict the weather. It certainly seemed like it would be clear and sunny, which was just what he wanted. It was much less fun walking around town with his best friend in the
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Edwin is a young shop owner living a quiet life in the kingdom of Wisian, but that peace is shattered when his best friend vanishes without a trace. Desperate for help, he meets a mysterious man offering his assistance - a seductive demon named Lothar. As attraction between the two men grows stronger every day, Edwin finds himself getting entangled in a conflict between demons and angels. Will Lothar be able to find Edwin’s friend in time, and what will be the price of his help?
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Hah, seems like Jason is not getting rid of Jon that easily (and he doesn't seem to mind it, as much as he may be pretending). Also, it's nice that he's got at least one family member who cares about him, even if he lives in Scotland. Just like with Jon's company, I have a feeling Jason enjoys the summers with his uncle more than he is letting on. I don't know how to feel about Jenna going out with Mark... Jason doesn't seem to mind it, but I definitely would if I were him. So Mark outed him in high school - no wonder Jason wants nothing to do with him. Really great story so far!
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Wow Jason leaving without saying goodbye really hurt Jon. He is very smitten with the guy. I like reading from his pov too, I didn't see it coming. I agree with the other guys, Jenna is kinda bugging me. I personally don't like people with such a personality, and she also doesn't seem like a friend Jason needs. It seems like Jon could be a much better influence. (Although I guess it helps that she's always taking half of Jason's cigarettes, so he smokes less because of her )
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If it Means A Lot to You
ObicanDecko commented on Frank K's story chapter in If it Means A Lot to You
Just started reading this, I'm loving it so far. Really interesting characters here, especially Jason and Jon! I'm curious how things develop between them. Jason is obviously damaged and very stubborn, but seems like he's met his match in Jon. I'm also really curious about what happened with Mark since Jason seems to hate him. -
Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
ObicanDecko commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
So Matt is now Aidan's parent, even though not biological, and Seamus is now basically Matt's husband, even though not official. Also, Aidan is turning out to be the luckiest baby in the world.- 40 comments
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This was a pleasant chapter, and I'm pretty sure it has something to do with the absence of a certain character. Also, nice to see Richard supporting Devyn about the job. It was high time he stepped up instead of letting his wife make all the decisions! I gotta say, I have no clue what Jason, Dylan and Brienne are doing with each other. One moment, Jason and Dylan want to date her, then the next they want the other guy to have her. And Brienne seems to be into one of them, then the other, then both (or maybe she's shipping the two guys) and is dating them alternately. Whatever works for them I guess
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I have to wonder why Margaret even decided to adopt a kid if she can't even be a proper mother to her biological son? Maybe it was Richard who wanted the adoption more. I'm loving this story as much as I hate Margaret. Also poor Dylan, he's sweet and doesn't deserve to be treated like that just for being a calico. Good thing he has good friends to support him.
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Well you got me there. I came into this fully prepared for it to be the last chapter and almost threw a fit when I saw how it ended! So glad we're getting another one (plus an epilogue)! Valentín is so lucky to have Lautaro by his side. The love confession in the end was super sweet and spontaneous. Even if Lautaro didn't mean to say it, it was what Valen needed to hear - and it's obvious the feeling is mutual.
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Another great chapter! Yeah, hooking up with your boss is not a good idea, but I feel like it's gonna happen sooner rather than later. I just wonder which of them will be the one to make the first move? My guess would be Matt, but you never know...
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Ooh I'm all caught up now, looking forward to the next chapter and Sergio's reaction to his son's coming out!
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Whew that was a rollercoaster! Once again, I have to say I really enjoy your writing, the story flows so smoothly and it's a pleasure to read. I'm eager to read what happens next and how the rest of the crew will react to the big reveal.
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I'm enjoying this story a lot, and I love your writing. Valentín is definitely intriguing, I feel like there's a lot we still have to learn about him. I also enjoy the flashbacks depicting Lautaro's friendship with Noah. Also, most of the stories here seem to be set in the US or UK, so it's nice to read one set in another country with a different culture.
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You can always count on Mrsgnomie to write a great story! I'm loving the premise and all the characters so far. Also I want a turn at holding Aidan, he seems like a sweet little bundle of joy! ❤️
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Yes that was him!
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Well it definitely didn't take long for the rotten apples of the school to rear their ugly heads! Ugh bullies are the worst. I love Billy so much I just want to give him a hug! ❤️ I like how he goes into detail describing everything, his thought process is so fun to follow. But I'm afraid he's going to have a hard time in school, it's such a massive change for him, and at the most vulnerable age. Also, I'm intrigued by the tags for this story! Can't wait to see what else is in store. I am enjoying it so much!
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Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
ObicanDecko commented on Black Paper's story chapter in Fallen Apples ~ Fallen Angels
Aww I love this chapter, it sets the story so well (tho it is quite sad but of course, that was necessary at this point). I actually really enjoyed all the narration and descriptions, it reminds me of Charles Dickens and Mark Twain. I can totally see Billy hanging out with Tom Sawyer! On second thought, Billy is probably too good for him. I'm a sucker for sweet country boys, so I can already tell I'm going to have a soft spot for him! -
Aww we love our little cutie Kit! And Tyler too ofc. Whoever came up with those lizard names is a proper LEGEND! For a sec I thought you were referring to actual users here on GA lol xD But who would you root for in a Marcus versus Sanders scenario?
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So true! We are equally big on spicy food, so I would def be tempted to answer all questions just to avoid getting my mouth burned. That gif tho!! xD Thank you frend, I'm keen as a bean for you to read the rest!
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It was homecoming time for Samson Flynn. After months of travelling around the globe, changing time zones and cities, the singer and his entourage were finally back in the United States. With all of the legs of his nearly sold out ‘Night Calls Tour’ successfully finished, the singer was ready to once again settle down at his New York home. “Finally,” Anna sighed as the plane touched down in Chicago, where Samson had a TV appearance scheduled. After hours in the air, they were finally back on
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