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  1. Hellsheild

    Chapter 9

    I feel that Miss Montgomery is a mother with her hands tied in regards to caring for the boys. We get to see the soon to be sow slop next chapter. I hope she doesn't wear too much jewelry...I don't want the pigs to choke.
  2. Frustration with cliffhangers. That's the only thing I can say about them.
  3. Hellsheild

    We Need a Hero

    Please sir may I have some more? I'm loving the story and I think that Liam and Noah getting together is the perfect post mortem slap to the face of Hannah that will have morticians questioning WTF happened to the body. Lol. Glad Liam got out unscathed and with at least someone beside him.
  4. Dfhhcddgggjikkmvddjudefhihrdradggyhkkjgdvgjhdddwdgjiokgedvmksxturhn! Gtgdfghefgiikohvsgsadqsfhjhbczxbjgvxfihsdhj! Cliffhanger.
  5. They are going to be the couple that will fight with each other and then say fuck and carry the other to the bedroom to have their wicked ways. Then come out all lovey dovey until the next fight.
  6. Hellsheild

    Chapter 29

    I'm mostly phone based. So spell check and auto-correct are a bit of a hassle and I just copied pasted from the previous post. As for my notebook computer it's a love hate relationship. I don't have a desk for it and I don't have enough sit time to use it fully. I prefer physical books as well. I find it a bit of an obscure word like referencing Old Scratch or Goodman Brown.
  7. Hellsheild

    Chapter 29

    I feel like I was just scolded by a school teacher. Sorry I have never read the word chicanery before, hope my knuckles didn't leave a mark on that ruler of yours. Lol. Honestly thanks for the lessons on the word .
  8. Hellsheild

    Chapter 29

    Quoting this just for the word shiccanery
  9. Hellsheild

    Chapter 29

    You mean no real drama this chapter? No guns, knives, explosions, threats against life, hostages, or whips and chains? Have they received a modicum of respite from you know living their own lives? Lol good chapter. Keep it up
  10. Demons, everyone has them and they can appear when most unwanted/or when the most damage can be done.
  11. Hellsheild

    Chapter 3

    Not enough. Loving the story so far. Secrets already, this was fast.
  12. Hellsheild

    Chapter 9

    Don't make me cry. Dammit I love those stupid guys. Also Rottweiler and a Chihuahua, I'm getting scenes from Legally Blonde 2
  13. Hellsheild

    Chapter 8

    Save us some money, I know how to make a stun guns from disposable cameras, plus can't be tracked like commercial tasers
  14. Hellsheild

    Chapter 8

    OK! Two bodies! Do I hear three! My god man I'm going to be a fictional mass murder at the rate of evil these people have done to those two. Though mister grabby from the other chapter may also be on the list.
  15. Hellsheild

    Storms

    Heavy the amount of emotion is almost palpable.
  16. Don't let (decent) mothers fool you, they may not know the specific...but they know when something is up. Mine specifically has an ability to call a person by name and they have no choice but to step forward, even if trying to run away
  17. Cooked usurper is a nice dish served with eggs Benedict Arnold and salad with Caesar dressing.
  18. Hellsheild

    Chapter Four

    That smokey smell is most likely the smell of my mind blowing a fuse. (Waft waft) Chicory?
  19. You people and your lack of communication! I swear the angry symbol is the closest thing I can get to flustered. I love their conversations but between the two of them I just want to yell "fight fight fight kiss kiss!"
  20. Hellsheild

    Chapter 7

    Either way works for me, not I'm going to contest getting rid of evil. Popcorn works, I'll make a buffet. As for wind, I have a medical condition that...I have practically no sense of smell. You're in charge of location I'll get snacks and main event, someone bring entertainment and drinks. Let's get this party started!
  21. Hellsheild

    Chapter 7

    I have alligators near where I live. Who wants to dispose of Ben with me? I'll bring snacks. Love the story and maybe finally Mara has someone he can trust.
  22. Hellsheild

    08

    Dammit during the discussion of the hesserack and sharks I started hearing the damn baby shark song from my niece. Baby shark do do dodo
  23. Hellsheild

    Rejected?

    Almost death and the threat of revenge. What a chapter
  24. Beautiful. Just the world is so great.
  25. (Singing) Jealousy, turning saints into the sea Swimming through sick lullabies No I hope nothing bad happens except a passing case of the green eyed monster
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