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  1. Gary L

    Chapter 18 - Kai

    Never have I ever …….. 🤮
  2. I would like to second that, like many great ideas someone has to do extra work. Many thanks @Cia. 🙏
  3. Gary L

    Chapter 1

    A very distinctive story, a wild road-trip with a sub on leave from his dom, and a straight woman. Very good story with a great epilogue. Nicely done.
  4. Are you sure, esteemed author? By marriage to Brad’s biological father but there isn’t a bloodline to Will. Or will I have to reread everything as a punishment for not concentrating? 🤗 You have got many of reaching for your back catalogue!
  5. Gary L

    Chapter 15

    Thank you kind sir! The camera does lie, thankfully. See you on Wednesday!
  6. Gary L

    Chapter 15

    This story just gets better and better. There are lots of routes the story could take, which way will it be, I wonder? Such an amazing plot coupled with great writing skills. Thank you @Mikiesboy
  7. Gary L

    Chapter 1

    I totally agree! Great comments.
  8. Gary L

    Chapter 1

    A good story, shades of a 21st-century take on “The secret garden”, which added to my pleasure. I don’t quite understand the role of the envelope at the end, or am I being dim today? Thanks 🙏
  9. Gary L

    Chapter 3

    The story advances, first hurdle, finally, dealt with….. next one what to do with Ben! All written with a deft touch of humour that we expect from @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
  10. Gary L

    Chapter 2

    Two black and tan miniature with short hair. The summer heat here is terrible for the long haired ones. We were getting two sisters but one withdrawn from sale due to serious illness, poor thing. So Greta arrrives on Thursday and Berta in September……
  11. Gary L

    Nox or Not?

    The stars of the show are two kittens which the guys are looking after for the weekend. During the weekend we learn of the sad home life of one and the undeclared love of the other. Cats return as a key component of the climax. a lovely, gentle story written with feeling and empathy. The author should be congratulated.
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  12. Gary L

    Thirty-Eight

    A fascinating journey with Keith. Revisiting a place where you suffered can bring release and relief. But not always. Poor Keith.
  13. Gary L

    Chapter 2

    Yes, not totally carefree as awaiting two mini dachshund puppies and it has been v complicated!
  14. Gary L

    Chapter 2

    Hope you can escape from the virus asap, we need your incisive, analytical and often very entertaining comments as much as possible. When I see your name and then a long entry I know we are in for a good time. They are much appreciated. Take good care. Gary hug 🤗
  15. After only two chps I’m hooked on this new story from @Mark Ponyboy Peters . It’s v nicely written.
  16. A funny, quirky tale from another world. Suitable not only for aquatic kin but also human kin like us! As for the author, a complete mystery.
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  17. Gary L

    Chapter 17 - Adam

    I have a dear friend whose routines are not dissimilar- he would rather buy two copies of weekend Financial Times than share his copy………
  18. was t that how she got money for the drugs meeting her uncle? Certainly some form of abuse?
  19. Ok, @Mark Arbour, your number 1 fan is here to say……….. I got here first! Seriously, a fantastic episode we knew dinners could be drama-filled but lunch???? Joder
  20. Gary L

    Chapter 14

    If I had to sum up your writing it would be with the words “brutally honest”. It may not be your exact story but it is, sadly, for me believable. I think your stories have helped many, including me, to process the shit that happened in the past. For me, @Mikiesboy, you are a GA hero. 🦸
  21. Gary L

    Chapter 14

    Thank you, thank you, thank you x
  22. Gary L

    Chapter 5

    Enjoy! I think you deserve a free pass for all that you have published this year. Well, you fooled me with Larry and Red getting together. A neat solution, leaving Ricky with no guilt as he prepares to tour. Nice work, Chris 👍
  23. Gary L

    Chapter 13

    Another excellent piece of writing. Poor Matt. 😢
  24. A very interesting piece. Thank you Drew. The discussion in the comments is also v thought-provoking. Well done all.
  25. This is a story which does not disappoint. The construction of the tale is excellent with two main characters who find true freedom from the past as their future together is woven. Another excellent story coming from the Pacific coast of Australia. Highly recommended.
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