Gary L
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Wow, what a memory!!!! And those waves……
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And I thought he sounded wonderful…… 🤗
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More and more questions piling up. Ufffff. A very dramatic chp which I, for one, wasn’t expecting as I read, horror-filled, the nugget recipe 😝
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My thoughts, too. An excellent start with some really nice language: Barrett “sidling along” into the bar; the ex “skedaddling” out of the bar. Lovely
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Beautifully put, @Talo Segura. There is some really good emotionally descriptive writing here which is utterly engaging. I felt I was there on the beach. Excellent stuff @Mark Ponyboy Peters. I am really enjoying your stories. Makes me wish I could revisit Australia…..
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An enjoyable start to another of @Mark Ponyboy Peters Aussie tales. Summer of 75 I was about to start last year at school, and having travelled to Italy for three weeks on Travel scholarships from my school. Ahead, the horrors of A levels, university applications and the dread that I might be one of those. An interesting time. and reminiscing over it time for chp 2!
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A preview and a press launch
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A preview and a press launch
Must dash, art research to be done…. Oh and a great, if sad, chp ending. To be damned with faint praise is the pits. -
@Anton_Cloche this is an amazing comment and beautifully written. I totally agree, although I could never have expressed it so well. thanks
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From what others have also said, @kbois is a genius at drawing out the best. You are both wise and brave sending her stuff! I’m part-way through writing a short story but too scared to ask her to look at it!!!!
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Conversations between gaoler and prisoner. Much is packed into a thousand words. Recommended.
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The Drop in Centre
Gary L replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Sadly, not for me with 50 yrs of ulcerative colitis….. but, ENJOY!!! -
The Drop in Centre
Gary L replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
She is, though, amazingly good in the car. 5 hour journey (with stops) and she slept throughout. Perhaps her horror during Pyrenees thunder storm had left her exhausted, pour thing. Next Saturday we go to Madrid to collect her “sister”. Enjoy the weekend, folks xxxx -
I totally agree, dr s
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A beautifully written chapter moving us forward, bit by beautiful bit,
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Passion wise, @KKirk, you are spot on. That was a very hot shower!!!!
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Two comments: 1 great things can come in small packages …of chp lengths! I really love this story. 2 This is the most wonderful chp ending, possibly, that I have read in years Oh my god, man!” this stud muttered in a smoky sexy voice. “You didn’t just lick your lips!”
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It’s a nice, neat start. I’m already in love with grandma!👵
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Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
The plot truly thickens. I hope these guys are not going to be done over by the unscrupulous Hayward. Interesting weeks ahead. v enjoyable @Robert Hugill, thank you 😊- 11 comments
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An Excellent follow up to the drama at lunch, the drama before dinner and the drama on the plane. We can add the drama in the office and the escape to dr Feingold. Good job, Jays…..
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“Looks a good one” is what my brain told my fingers to write…..
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An enjoyable read. I found it hard to get things clear at the beginning and welcomed the later names to tell us pov had changed. im confused as how Logan fell off - inexperience and not knowing his way around? good stuff
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Insomniac provoked stress led me to find this story. Intriguing tales to be shared on the route to Hawaii. Loads a good one, @P. E. Knapp
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A beautifully elegantly-written story. Well done @Connectwriter!
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I attended many years ago a talk by the then Chief Rabbi in UK. Once phrase comes back to me, triggered by your first sentence: “Civilisation is passed down from one generation to the next by the gossamer thread of memory.”
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The Drop in Centre
Gary L replied to Mikiesboy's topic in Mikiesboy's Drop in Centre's Mikieboy's Topics
Last days in Aragón visiting the amazing Sierra de Guara and its “canyons”. Not USA dimensions but truly beautiful. Have a look on Google. Back to the horrors of Valencia on Sat and then Monday I’m off to find a trainer for the most disobedient weinerdog in history. Greta is so naughty and loving a holiday home with an open garden. Back in the apartment all that will be history. I have a week to train her before the other weinerdog, Lilibeth, will be arriving. (for lovers of cute dachshund photos see my insta account garylysaght)
