Gary L
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Yep, really, really good chp. Thank you, maestro
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Another gem to revisit this summer if the two puppies allow me when they finally arrive next week.
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Nice one, @weinerdog! Watch out, though…. She has spies everywhere
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There goes a brave person!
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Back to the world that we know and love, and in the case of Xpress, hate, so much. Great early chps to get us sucked back in! Love it!!
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Dating Apps Were Never Meant for This
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Dating Apps Were Never Meant for This
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This is getting pretty serious, and not in a good way. What has our dear author got next for us? Me thinks the guys have underestimated Mr H. 😱
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Not an end but a beginning
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Not an end but a beginning
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A truly excellent read. We are promised more but that which we have in this first volume is a great story of a returning soldier bringing with him issues from the past and having even bigger ones to face once he arrives: ex, son, parents, ex-colleague. All this is told with a deft hand and beautiful prose. A delight to read, thank you and congratulations, @Robert Hugill.
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Another v thought-provoking chp. It’s not only your mum and dad who fuck you up, in this case Greg was really damaged by Mitchell in a number of ways that left me rather disturbed. Nevertheless, an excellent read, thank you, Robert.
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What a superbly written scene. Kris’s family history was v plausible. But the most powerful part for me was how @Mark Arbour showed us two sides of JJ which worked together authentically. thank you so much. 😊 So as Will goes off shortly to the academic world of Harvard, it seems that JJ is finally getting credits in the “university of life”. I await with bated breath.
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Totally agree!
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Not an opera I know but have just booked a couple for the new season in the amazing Valencia opera house - have a look at Calatrava’s masterpiece. Shame that inside a third of seats (including top price) have restricted views of the stage…… v nice chp, as usual.
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With writing this good and stimulating, it is a pleasure, @Mikiesboy!
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@Lee Wilson hi my review came out as 0 stars and not the 5 stars I was trying to put. Many apologies. It was a v good story,
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Another v powerful installment. So, we reach the halfway point which means there’s a lot of bad stuff to come, I fear. v high quality writing.
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Presentation to Their Majesties
Gary L commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Presentation to Their Majesties
Because you are @Daddydavek and so wise….. an interesting chp to analyse. Thank you Mark. I can’t see where you are going with this so enjoy the frustration of a v dear fan! Ummmmmmmm 😐- 17 comments
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Can hardly wait - as a loyal reader I hope my heroines and heroes will try to torture me!
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A moment of light relief…. 😅
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An interesting and thoughtful chp. It is hard to imagine what Matt’s life has been like. I’m glad we were spared more details of him being broken in by the evil “owner”. The duality of the mundane and the unbearable creates a powerful stimulus to the story writing. Well done @Mikiesboy!
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I was surprised at some interpretations above. I thought Will was acting nicely and totally get his reaction. Glad Mark thought that too!!
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I wish I had your optimism! This is @Mark Arbour we are dealing with……. 🤗
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I thought the second part of the chp brought us down to earth again and refocused me on the grim reality. I dread seeing Matt after this visit to Black. 👿
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Another seriously good chp. As others have said, the contrast between the first section and the last is shocking. V well-written.
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V good chp but the last sentence leaves one slightly worried 😧 What has @Robert Hugill got planned for his poor characters, I wonder. thank you, Robert ps I love the cleverness of the play on words chp title, v good!
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