Gary L
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Much of the “labelling”/self-identification found me floundering, with terms I had never heard of before. Nevertheless, I find the ending very good and authentic to their situation. An enjoyable, if challenging, read. Thank you 🙏
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Likely the doom merchants are right But I’m sure our esteemed author will save our heroes ….. please!?!?!??
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My timing looks as good as Will’s as it were…. And now back to the chp, 🤗
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My Mancher-born Nan and mum used to say, “Liar’s need long memories”. It scared me so much I never lied until I knew I was gay, and boy did I need a good memory…
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Lunch-boxes and packages
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lunch-boxes and packages
Sadly, perhaps, we were up in the mountains trying to escape the heat and missed the sights!! Now you have got me thinking about whether we should have gone to the beach 🏖️ -
Wow, what a memory!!!! And those waves……
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And I thought he sounded wonderful…… 🤗
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More and more questions piling up. Ufffff. A very dramatic chp which I, for one, wasn’t expecting as I read, horror-filled, the nugget recipe 😝
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My thoughts, too. An excellent start with some really nice language: Barrett “sidling along” into the bar; the ex “skedaddling” out of the bar. Lovely
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Beautifully put, @Talo Segura. There is some really good emotionally descriptive writing here which is utterly engaging. I felt I was there on the beach. Excellent stuff @Mark Ponyboy Peters. I am really enjoying your stories. Makes me wish I could revisit Australia…..
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An enjoyable start to another of @Mark Ponyboy Peters Aussie tales. Summer of 75 I was about to start last year at school, and having travelled to Italy for three weeks on Travel scholarships from my school. Ahead, the horrors of A levels, university applications and the dread that I might be one of those. An interesting time. and reminiscing over it time for chp 2!
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A preview and a press launch
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A preview and a press launch
Must dash, art research to be done…. Oh and a great, if sad, chp ending. To be damned with faint praise is the pits. -
@Anton_Cloche this is an amazing comment and beautifully written. I totally agree, although I could never have expressed it so well. thanks
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From what others have also said, @kbois is a genius at drawing out the best. You are both wise and brave sending her stuff! I’m part-way through writing a short story but too scared to ask her to look at it!!!!
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Conversations between gaoler and prisoner. Much is packed into a thousand words. Recommended.
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Sadly, not for me with 50 yrs of ulcerative colitis….. but, ENJOY!!!
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She is, though, amazingly good in the car. 5 hour journey (with stops) and she slept throughout. Perhaps her horror during Pyrenees thunder storm had left her exhausted, pour thing. Next Saturday we go to Madrid to collect her “sister”. Enjoy the weekend, folks xxxx
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I totally agree, dr s
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A beautifully written chapter moving us forward, bit by beautiful bit,
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Passion wise, @KKirk, you are spot on. That was a very hot shower!!!!
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Two comments: 1 great things can come in small packages …of chp lengths! I really love this story. 2 This is the most wonderful chp ending, possibly, that I have read in years Oh my god, man!” this stud muttered in a smoky sexy voice. “You didn’t just lick your lips!”
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It’s a nice, neat start. I’m already in love with grandma!👵
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Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Back to the 122 Club: Going out with a bang?
The plot truly thickens. I hope these guys are not going to be done over by the unscrupulous Hayward. Interesting weeks ahead. v enjoyable @Robert Hugill, thank you 😊- 11 comments
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An Excellent follow up to the drama at lunch, the drama before dinner and the drama on the plane. We can add the drama in the office and the escape to dr Feingold. Good job, Jays…..
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