Gary L
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The twists were with us even until the last sentence. A truly dramatic tale. Thank you, Chris
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Thoroughly enjoyable start. With some great one-liners!
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A very enjoyable start to a teen drama with some nice humour as well.
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How I saw the link I know not, but this is lovely. The repetition is engaging and the whole a delight, how did I miss this? Bravo!
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Some really good comments here @akascrubber, and I totally agree with you on the need for historical context..
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Between us… easy peesy un abrazo, José, desde Valencia en Fallas 🤗
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What a really nice message and if I won the lottery we could set Mark up so that he could dedicate himself full time to satisfying our needs…. Or perhaps waiting is good for the soul?
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For quality like your’s I can wait 🤗
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An interesting chp in two parts, very different but v enjoyable. Awaiting the swimming party 😃
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When I was a headmaster in Elche, I once got a new student thanks to the cleaners - “ this is the cleanest school we have visited, our children are coming here.” I totally agree with you, everyone is a player in the success of an enterprise.
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We can forgive you…… if we try hard! Have a good week, gary x
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They are back together. Let’s see if Winkler’s prediction in an earlier book is correct.So far so good….😊 Thank you Mark
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Like many of us!!
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Define “fun”! Not sure Jamie will be having much. Another v good chp.
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This is a very detailed reflection on what is promising to be a popular story. And is written with honesty. As one quoted above, I too was thrown by the paranormal aspect, although it is there from the start in the summary. Finally, I decided to stay and have enjoyed so much about this story that I’m with it until the end, but can certainly understand that it’s not for everyone. regards
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A spot-on analysis.
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Another ace chp. The skill with which action and emotions are blended into a coherent whole is first class. I may not be so into “special powers” as others, but I am certainly into special writing. Another great Saturday morning read thanks to the unstoppable @lawfulneutralmage. Greetings from Valencia in Fallas!
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Yes, @lawfulneutralmage is the new @Mrsgnomie… as it were! ( for his ability to get readers involved and invested)
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Hi, I have just reread this story and if I could I would change my review substantially. I now do “get it” and it deserves more stars. ⭐️
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Not sure what I can add to the fulsome, and deserved, praise given above but adding a click doesn’t seem to justice. So, many thanks, indeed for another great story which is getting ever deeper. ps, any news on the famous “balcony garden”, likely?
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Another death-packed chapter. Blink and another one is down. I look forward to how this will be resolved. It’s really good, Chris.
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Many apologies to @Sherye Story Reader for the offense caused by my ironical, but to her, mystifying, comment. I had confused her with a very sharp and excellent beta reader and entered in the type of comments familiar to those who have read those of @Mrsgnomieand @kbois and their readers. I can’t delete the comment but I certainly apologize for the error.
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Chris, many congratulations on your transformation into a v popular and prolific author. I’m so jealous! Well done 👍
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Me too. Though short, Robert’s chps punch above their length, as it were. Great stuff continues to be delivered to us.
