Gary L
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A tear-provoking story, Seeing the present nod the past through the eyes and memories of a disillusioned resident in a care home. beautifully and poignantly written, as ever from @Ronyx.
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I think one of the keys to Robert’s writing is the excellent pacing of his stories. Nothing seems rushed or dragging. A great skill for a storyteller…
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An intriguing chp. Enjoyable visit to Thomas’s place of work and now the possibility of a weekend in a spa. I know what my answer would be! Man up, Keith!
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Fast on the heels of the second detective Ken story we get the next installment- what’s happening with the love-struck teachers at Tom’s school? Be careful, these characters are becoming addictive!
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An excellent example of the power of repetition adding force to an intense seasonal piece. Very nice. 😊
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A truly delightful slice of two guys, and their families, coming out and being together. The author has a very good prose style which makes the story flow beautifully. Highly recommended. 🙌
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Epilogue: Normal Families?
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Epilogue: Normal Families?
I totally agree! I love the Californian troubles and tribulations of Will, JJ etc., and many others, but @Robert Hugill has brought us something very different in his various tales. Thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you- 21 comments
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Well, here is mine: 10/10. Lovely chp, @Robert Hugill. Thank you 😊
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Utterly delightful. I’m there in Ravello escaping from the heat following this young guy, it’s so beautifully written,
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Having decided to treat myself to a complete read through of the Ravello series, I can’t believe I omitted to review this opening salvo. The author dazzles us with a prose as beautiful as the lemon groves surrounding Ravello and with a great skill in characterization and storytelling. For me, this series is one of the jewels of GA.
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nectarine - Word of the Day - Sat Mar 23, 2024
Gary L commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Lovely and very moving. Loved it.
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The “secret” to a successful relationship developing
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Volume two of detective Ken stories shows him combining personal and private life issues. It’s a good, fast-paced tale with as many murders as red herrings. enjoy! 😉
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An enjoyable murder mystery romp! Thanks
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Welcome to the club! @Mark Arbour today I was near Cap de Creus and Roses - ring any bells for Granger fans???? Such a dangerous coastline in past.
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That’s one way to describe someone…… BTW I love your interviews @astone2292!
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The story continues with no let up on the murder front. An enjoyable romp. Thanks, Chris
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Colin 14: Being Theatrical
Gary L commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 14: Being Theatrical
An outstanding proposal from @Summerabbacat and leaving @Robert Hugill no excuses. Hee hee 😜 -
A lovely twist on the hell of being innocent in jail. V well written with great pacing and ace characters. well done, Lee
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Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
Gary L commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
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A wonderful treat! Thank you Mark. Who knows what will happen on then18th;
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