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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
I’ll be here every Monday and Thursday for The next 15 weeks or so- 59 comments
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
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Shots fired lol- 59 comments
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
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Me?? You need to talk to Jay and Loren. I'm staying out of this one.- 59 comments
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
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They're my favorite so far but I'm not bias at all...- 59 comments
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Yes, Jay on the left. Loe on the right. Or at least how I see them in my head.
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
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Yes, they will have more than a cameo. The second part of the series we will start to see a lot more of Matt, Seamus, Aidan and...a surprise guest. Also, yes, I will have to remind everyone several times that this is a work of Fiction because Jay's team is going to have a better season(s) than the actual team is having. Suspension of disbelief.- 59 comments
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Thank you. I'm excited it's finally ready!
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
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Talk about good timing lol it only took me 7 months to finish- 59 comments
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
It's a finished story and I will post every Monday and Thursday!- 59 comments
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
They really are. There's a lot of chemistry and a lot of push and pull. I think they is a great balance with these two. Very complimentary.- 59 comments
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Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Who the F**k is Jay Petermeyer?
Excited to share this labor of love.- 59 comments
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Jay Petermeyer is everyone’s favorite All-American football player. He’s spent his entire career living above reproach as he patiently waits for the husband and the life he knows he’s meant for. There wouldn’t be influencers if there wasn’t Loren Patrick. He transformed YouTube into a social platform and revolutionized what it means to live for the public. His life is free and easy. No attachments, no expectations. Just the way he likes. Sometimes the life we’re destined for looks different from the life we dream of.
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chapter one loren The kitchen is littered with tripods and video lighting. Milk is pooled on the counter where I got a little overzealous with my frother. No matter how you turn it, the kitchen is wrecked. It always is after a day of filming. Good food, good drinks, and good content don’t come easy or without maid service. It would take less than twenty minutes to have the place tidied but then I’d be late for drinks. Too many times I’ve taken that chance and it never works
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I hated them until I was in Europe. I think they're so much more efficient compared to our four-way-stops that slow traffic to a halt....and still no one knows who is supposed to go.
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@kbois can never leave things alone. I'm sure there's so many angles at work here. I can't wait to find out
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Kbois does it again in this well crafted story about shifters from different areas that are brought together by a force and calling greater than them. When shifter pups around the same age start missing, the power pack is brought together to expose corruption, deceit, and trafficking. You truly feel all the emotions in this one.
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Thank you for letting me be on this journey with you! You’re creative and devious and you know how to write a story!!
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"You feel bad for the things you said to me in the heat of the moment. Don't worry, I know you were frustrated. Your remorse brings you to your knees. You reach for my pants and flick them open, the way you've done a hundred times..." @Aditus how dare you use your mind power like this...
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I'm glad 2nd person is not common in fiction. I've read a few and always feel like they're trying to brainwash me with mind control. "You walk through the carnival gates, excited about what's ahead. You think to yourself, maybe you'll get two lobster corn dogs instead of one." No, Jerry, I'm not excited for that. Not at all. It think omni can be so difficult to do well. There are stories out there but it's a craft in and of its own. Personally, I try to rotate between 1st/3rd past/present to try and flex my writer muscles, but I'm not ready to venture out. Not for a long story, anyway.
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Also, I want to add that the original didn’t suck, but the revision is definitely a better fit to end this wonderful story of @kbois
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I think this was huge for Reilly. As someone who doesn’t seem all that outgoing, facing your father like that, and inflicting pain like that, it has to take a lot for him. I’m not sure I could! No doubt there was some vindication there.
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How dare Reilly’s brothers call out his name in help. Seriously. F**K them!
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I don't know...the only contribution I have to the comment section is regarding Caleb. That stupid, beautiful idiot. I think Sebastian should force him to wed another alpha. That way he can have constant supervision. If I was an alpha, I would volunteer. I think he's a good guy who made a really, really stupid decision. Kill the rest but don't kill Caleb.
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What about future perfect progressive? I will have been walking to the library? ???????? I can’t even.
