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Nash has to move back, eh?
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No, I don't think I'll further the adventure with Penn and Nash. I think the final chapter will wrap them up. I really don't know where I would go with them. They're not having kids or anything. I still have people asking for bonus chapters of Colin and Charlie. I have ideas but haven't been able to write it and I don't want it to be forced. But hey, who knows, maybe I'll get inspired.
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AHHHH I forgot to give credit where credit is due!
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To some degree there's always another book coming lol. I actually have one started, probably 1/3 done, maybe half done (I'm a terrible judge of how long a story will be). And I have ideas for the one after that. Just a matter of actually getting it done.
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Smooth sailing from here on out. They deserve it!
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Two chapters left! 20 & 21
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Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Perfect, just posted the next chapter - BTW. This chapter was done when I was talking about adding in pillow talk. I was actually writing the chapter after this one. In case you're waiting for it... -
I woke up because my bladder was about to explode. I’d been so busy with Nash last night that…well, going to pee hadn’t been a priority. When I tried to get out of bed, I was stopped by a set of strong arms and a deep groan of disapproval. “I really have to pee,” I said. Nash’s arms only held tighter as he burrowed into my back. As much as I wanted to relieve myself, Nash refusing to let go was better. “I’ll be right back. I promise.” Nash let go and I hurried to the bathroom. I didn’t e
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Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
What about this mad you dislike Penn? -
Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
I don't know that Nash would have all these answers because A) Lee wasn't super interested in disclosing too many details because it made him look bad and wasn't about to shine the spotlight on himself and B ) Nash didn't really want to know. I mean, sure, he was probably curious, but details weren't going to heal anything. So, I'll do what I can but ultimately, sometimes in these situations we just don't ever get to know all the answers. But I'll see if I can't add something for the readers enjoyment. -
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Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
I wasn't sure how deep to go but I'm more than happy to cover this if the readers find this to be valuable. Where I'm currently at in writing the next chapter I could easily tie up all the divorce details during some nice pillow talk. -
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Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Well, your feedback has been inspiring and I've spent most of the day not working like I should've been doing. Instead, I've been writing. Also, my kids are gone for the night and my husband is out with his cousin. Which means I have a quiet house to keep writing. Spend me more feedback/inspo!- 37 comments
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Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Yes. Regardless of who’s POV it is, Jason is definitely in the next chapter. -
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Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
I’m going to try it. I have the chapter started and I really like it so far, but I also feel like it’s missing something. I think that something is Penn’s POV.- 37 comments
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Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
I agree. And I think the chapter would be fun from Penn’s POV because we all know he’s wanted to have sex with Nash forever. My concern is the fact the whole story has been from Nash’s POV. Then two chapters to give Penn a voice. Now back to Nash. Is it too much to flip flop at the end like this?- 37 comments
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Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
You will have read it more times than I have lol (burn on myself) -
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Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Where Penn Confronts Everyone
Yes, it's good to see them together. I'm excited. Now they just have to get that pesky errand ran, which is proving difficult but should be fun to read about!- 37 comments
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Holy smokes his room was huge. It was only marginally smaller than the bunk room I was sharing with a dozen guys. I felt slightly less guilty as I took the room in. Penn stood at the end of his bed and looked around the room, at the floor, where he was trying to find the best place for me to sleep. “I think there’s an extra mattress in the garage.” “Oh no,” I said, feeling stupid for standing there like an idiot instead of doing something productive like not making things more awkward th
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Oh, we'll find out whos has to answer for what...just wait
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It’s a fun one. A bit dramatic, but Donavans a hoot.
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No, no he’s not. Just me being funny. Because I’m hilarious.
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Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
I don't think this makes Nash a schemer. Yes, if Penn somehow wanted more, Nash would probably give in, but that doesn't mean he went there with that as his intentions. "Because the truth of the matter was, that as much as I wanted to see if he was okay, to let him vent about the evening, to fight for our friendship, to mesh and converse like we used to, the ball was in Penn’s court. I knew that if Penn wanted anything, and I do mean anything, I would not say no. I do agree that it was incredibly awkward time to go to Penn's room. I mean, HOW AWKWARD! Which is reflected in the beginning of next chapter. But who doesn't love a good awkward encounter. And sometimes the awkward creates a gateways for more authentic things. I mean, can't get any worse!- 24 comments
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Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
You're right, Nash wouldn't leave Penn like that. Things are still crazy around here but a lot more settled then it was. Thank you.- 24 comments
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Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
It's the least I could do since it was soooooo long between 15 and 16- 24 comments
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Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
Mrsgnomie commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 17 - When game night isn't so fun
Vacation is two weeks and they're half way through.
