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  1. I first knew you through the 3rd book and i was hooked by your writing so tbh I've read all of your stories but the 1st book of this series. I really enjoy Golden City, but The Hidden Ones is still my favorite. Please keep going!
  2. I don't know whether I should be glad for not reading the 1st book. I first knew about it through your 3rd book, and that was Eli was getting better but it's still too painful when he briefly retold the story... I postponed the idea of reading the first 2 books, especially the first one because it's too dark, too tragic and I guess I am right after reading this chapter. It's not that I don't like your story. Your writing is great, really great that can touch my emotions deeply and I am afraid I might break down... I am glad I decided to read the 2nd book so I can know and understand the situation better and still have a bright future ahead. Great work!
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    Chapter 5

    I really like your story so far. I'm looking forward to the next things in the future and the interaction with Dancing 's characters as well. Maybe I'm a little fastidious but I hope you can find someone to edit your chapters. It's just about the punctuation, not the grammar so don't worry. I usually read the lines and its emotion based on that as well... This is your first story so problems like that are not unusual. Hope my feedback is useful for you.
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