Etotsira

Awesome chapter, can’t wait for more!

My heart breaks for Laneer and Yinx, the Gods’ truly deserved their deaths and Morgoren certainly has it coming. Part of me still hoped that somehow Yinx and Laneer would get their happily ever after, but something tells me that isn’t gonna happen. Excellent chapter, as always, can’t wait to read the next one. -Etotsira

My sympathy for Hank just died.

Excellent chapter, as always. Can’t wait to see how Ronnie fits into this mystery!

Now that Grant has woken up and smelled the roses, so to speak, I feel like the other shoe will be dropping soon, you know the shoe that Grant found when he first moved in and gave him cheat codes to Troy’s life...that shoe. Anyways, hopefully Troy will be only somewhat disappointed and not full on angry. Excellent chapter, as always. Etotsira

You ended this on a good note, take as long as you need

Under normal circumstances, yes, but let’s go over the facts: Victor introduced Chris as a “friend,” Victor was acting fishy the entire time, Chris looks just like Victor’s ex, add onto all of that the mess that is Chris’ life lately. What was supposed to be a relaxing afternoon ended up unearthing insecurities he had regarding his relationship I’m sure he didn’t even know he had. So, I think him not giving Victor the benefit of the doubt, while unfair, is excusable.

Holy crap.

A good chapter, I hope Ronnie realizes that just because he’s struggling doesn’t mean he’s doing bad

His general demeanor, which includes him being randy with other guys, lately he seems to be kind of pushing the envelope.

How dare I forget my mandatory comment about the journal?! Shame on me! So is this the calm before the storm? I feel like things are gonna go to crap soon with the journal. While I don’t want either of these characters hurt, (I’ve said this before, and I’ll say it again) but who doesn’t love a good mauling of the heartstrings? Excellent chapter, as always, by the way! Etotsira

With the way he’s been acting lately, Chris is indeed ‘Playing with Fire’ in more than one way 😥

Damn it, Grant, admit you like him!!!

Thank you for the update, since this is my first read through of your story I can’t wait to see read what else you’ve got in store!

Chris seems to have a lot of pent up energy, and not of the magical variety 😂