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I thought the story was winding down but after what Caleb did allegedly (Way to go Caleb ....I didn't say that) there going to be more chapters to sort that out. “Then I'll have to blister your ass till you do, you little shit, and you're going to get a mouth full of soap for back talking me!” Did you hear the real Calvin actually say something like that? If so then Calvin's piece of shittyness (Is that a word🤔) knows no bounds

It is interesting to see a situation we already read about in I Hate This Town from a third person perspective which River provided. One while I'm sure River despised Alec's Mom (Who wouldn't) I didn't realize he had such a intense dislike of Henry . Of course I'm certain every reader LOVED the Veronica scene but River thoughts about how Alec and Finn were interacting was also very interesting.I'm looking forward to River's thoughts as that progresses .Heck as we remember Kenji even got involved somewhat. Are we going to have a scene where River introduces Kenji to his Mom. I'm really curious to her reaction to that

That was my favorite part of the chapter.Right on River❤️

Not only from his parents but also from Sam and Sy. The first part of what Andy did arranging the meeting with Mr. Black could be looked at this way. A lot of your most successful businesses are started with an unconventional idea no one will say will work but the person with the idea goes on with it anyway because he believes in it.It is called taking a risk or high/risk reward of course the main difference is in one the risk is being broke where in the other it could be your life but to me it's the same kind of thinking.In Andrew's mind he can't write an authentic book without taking that risk

I guess those feelings Matt developed for Ahmat are valid.I supposed what needs to happen is for Matt to find out Andy is in to him only he isn't saying so. if that happens Matt might have an internal struggle

These picture challenges that sight does has resulted in a lot of good stories being written. You know that prince/commoner conflict isn't that much different then today when a person from a wealthy family falls for a person from a family of modest means. "And because we love them, we do not deny them that right to leave." Is Cedric the creator of that popular bumper sticker "If you love something set it free......?

When was this written? Buying a map? How quaint. So this was either written a while ago or Australian teens aren't glued to smartphones like Americans teens are. Excellent chapter. We can all relate to Tim's imagination running wild that is one thing that is timeless. Tim and Guy should play a gag on Ben since Ben does not know about Guy

Yeah but you save all your best snark for me...go figure

I read about half of when it first posted but then life happened and I had to leave it temporarily. I was thinking I could picture @Summerabbacatdoing the same thing Masion was doing when he thought he lost the kitten.Hmmm you're not the secret author of this are you?

Minor spoiler, this has the better outcome of the two. I remember how that Rocked To The Core one ended so I doubt I will like the alternative. But this kind of stuff does happen and it will be a challenge so I will be interested He's interested in designing and building prosthetic devices. If this story had been written earlier you could have had Jamie make an appearance in Manny Needs a Nanny. Is there a possible other story with these guys? I ask because I wonder why Dak ended up at Brenau University instead of Gwinnett

What's the problem?......I mean that's all the two dirty old men can do anyway🤷‍♂️ Come to think of it that could be rent instead instead of money

I think Roger might need a window to look into. He would see a frowning disapproving face of his Mother

It looks like everything is falling into place but as you know in reading past @Ronyx stories his characters have to jump some hurdles so there may be still a surprise or two.There will be pool parties again at Phil's place only this time it will be with Stanley and his friends and maybe even Derek. I don't think Roger moved to Colorado to get away from Phil that makes no sense.I think when Allen found out his Grandfather wasn't dead he got ticked off and confronted his Dad and they had words. I could hear Roger saying "I'm moving YOU be his POA" But in doing this he erases his son and grandson out of his life.MORON

Well then you'll have more time to write more chapters

If Andy looked like that Matt won't leave to go home despite what he's been through

Ben with his big mouth, accidentally outed Tim to Guy, causing Tim to panic and run away. Was it really an accident? I don't Ben is that stupid. Perhaps Ben saw similarities on Tim acts being in the closet and all and how Guy acts sort of like a gaydar. Although if that is the case I agree it is pretty reckless

You know if the world didn't have songs titles you would not be able communicate anything.

As far you know are you aware of something like this actually happening IRL?(I'm sure it has but it most likely wouldn't be publicized) I have to think if somebody knew of something like this they would make a movie or something of this (Duh I just realized what I typed) So now that I just thought of this,Is this story fictional or based on something real? I only bring that up because although I have no point of reference to know one way or another but the way Matt reacted to things makes perfect sense. As far any possible legal ramifications, Did Andrew explain in his book what he had to do to get this information? Here's an Author knowing about this horrible situation and not saying anything to the authorities about it so by the letter of the law Andrew could have gotten charged with something but obviously didn't. While this is a risk I really can't see anything happening to Andrew over this It's the sound I long for from my partner if I ever have one. Until I read that thought of Andrew's I wasn't really thinking of any Andrew/Matt thing happening but now I'm thinking maybe.

In your case that would be IRREGULAR regular snarkiness

Dakota I think is actually a cool name.It can be both a girl and guy name.If I'm not mistaken I think Dakota means "Friend" In a Native American language. OMG you have had some of your character's go through some shit. before but as best I can remember not as bad as Dak and Jamie has gone through.These are flat out hate crimes especially the house burning down. What kind of back asswards people does then town have? Until the house burning incident as bad as some of the student are I thought the Vice Principle was the worst person in the chapter what a head up her ass moron. Not directly, of course. i heard it through the grapevine. Just like you to put a name of a popular song in your chapter

Hi, my name is Spencer Ross. I’m not much of a writer, but that’s okay. Oh a story based on yourself eh? I'm joking.I'm joking.This sounds pretty good

A few parts in the chapter had me worried .At first When Davis offered to stay in the cabin with Matt I thought there was going to be some forced hanky panky thankfully no Davis was just being pragmatic as was explained later. The second part was when Matt discovered his bedroom had no lock on the door .I thought for sure he would then make a run for it but I think a combination of Maeve being disarming and the storm probably made Matt think twice. Is there cell phone service there? I ask because Andy was already supposed to be there but the storm delayed him.Will Andy think of the possibility that Matt might make a run for it? Can he contact Maeve if he does think of that? Is he able to send a e-mail?

I'm actually glad to hear that I made a smart a** comment about her in another story yesterday (So what else is new) and she didn't respond so I really was a little bit worried .I hope she's not too bored