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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 26 S2

    Epcot is in Florida did you see @kbois there? If you did she was probably doing the same thing you were doing
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    A Rock Opera, whatever that is? He's never heard of Jesus Christ Superstar or Hair? ‘It’ll probably be something like The Sound of Music,’ he said. Rock arrangements of Sound Of Music songs....Maybe you're on to something @Mark Ponyboy Peters ‘Now that was cute,’ I said to Ben. ‘Have you ever seen him around before?’ As soon as I read that line I knew they would see him at the audition That could be interesting. So, doesn’t anyone, besides our young AC/DC fan Graham, listen to Australian artists?’ Australia has a lot of great bands I'm surprised more wasn't mentioned by the students. I love INXS. Somehow I don't think Tie Me Kangaroo Down will make the cut. It must be a boy/girl thing, Would Snowey be brave enough to make this a boy/boy thing with Tim and Guy? (If that is the case I assure you I haven't read the story)
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    Chapter 4

    Now there's something you don't see everyday somebody who's a fan of both Pearl Jam and Ricky Albert
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    Chapter 4

    Red DID say to Ricky to have sex with others didn't he? As far as Larry goes who's to say now that he's attractive he won't have a casting couch
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    Chapter 26 S2

    Ben is my favorite cousin.......Yeah I know we're not related but I don't care HE"S my favorite cousin
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    Chapter 26 S2

    Don't think I didn't ....CATCH that
  7. Do you happen to know why Roy Orbison wore shades? Just curious.I found out recently Ringo Starr wears shades all the time because of an eye condition. One thing you could have mentioned is say 10 or so years down the road Deja Vu could have been in demand as an oldies act more and more old time bands make OK money touring these days. "Heh. Yeah. The asshole should have left out the arrest. That sucked." "Hey. Watch it. If your life really is a story, you don't want to piss off the author. "Ooof. Sorry, whoever you are." So the landlord evicted Kevin because Kevin did something to piss you off eh? Excellent story
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    Chapter 19

    Another outstanding story from one of GA finest authors. I don't know if we had any contact with ET's yet but if we haven't this story should be a guide of how we should proceed if we do
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 19

    Good somebody was starting to pass gas (I won't say who)
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 19

    "The adventure isn't over by any means." Jem said softly. "In fact...it's just beginning!" I think those words should answer that
  11. While it was unfair of Don to say ALL of Robbies friends are freeloaders out to steal Robbie's money but it is valid to say there might be a few who would do that. One person who pops to mind instantly is the baseball player (I forget his name at the moment) and I say this sadly I don't rule out Nathan being like that. I would hope Rory would tell him that if he observes something like that happening. BTW Don says Robbie is not mature enough? I'm not sure DON!!! is mature enough
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    Chapter 18

    Then how come nobody ever helps me when I need to trim my rose bush?🤔
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    Chapter 3

    Like @akascrubber I don't know the business either but Ricky should realize that being in this business involves WILL involve some traveling what about movies would he turn down a great role because he doesn't want to go to Hollywood? You have to travel in this business the only people who I can think of who stopped traveling and got away with it were the Beatles and well they are exceptions to almost everything
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 18

    Hey @ReaderPaul you said something about a 25,000 word chapter.Well this was 8,315 words BUT Geron cut the chapter in half so it was like a 16,000 + words so you really weren't that far off
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    Chapter 18

    I agree with @drpaladin this is Azim testing Jem to see if he really means what he says about "Jem protect Bzup" I may be on them like a pincerfly on a pup tiger turd." He sighed. sounds like something similar we say on present day Earth. This might be the one truly universal thing on all planets eh?
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    Chapter 64

    “I know. Billy built a very strong case, but there's still something fishy about the judge and Calvin's lawyer.” “Kidnapping it is, then.” Oh My could it actually come to that? You knew the real Calvin you didn't do that did you? “Ten years,” Dr. Jacobs said with a heavy sigh. “Ten years!” Bryan nearly shouted. Dr. Jacobs chuckled and said, “No. I'm just kidding. You've been here for about 20 minutes.” Oh good one Dr. Jacobs you are HIGH-larious
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    Chapter 12

    It is interesting both Andy's Mom and Dad arrived at the same thought they would have tried to stop Andy from doing this but now that he has they can't turn their back on Matt because what kind of people would they be? Quite a conflict The fact that Kanaan saw the logic that Ahmet would not tell anything as to what happened and decided to spare his life shows that he is only 75-80% evil as opposed to 100% percent evil.There are people all over the world you can't say that about. Ahmet has legitimate feelings toward Matt so the romantic optimist is all of us think or hope they might get back together but you can be sure Kanaan is going to keep an eye on Ahmet so perhaps Ahmet and Matt being seen together might not be safe for them. High school had showers like this. Hmm our school system has the same type of showers human traffickers have? I don't know what to think of that🤔
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    Chapter 17

    Yeah ... A 25,000 word epilog thanks to you...kidding😄 Those are good questions
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    Chapter 17

    Be careful what you wish for Geron has come close to that before
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    Chapter 17

    You sure know how to end a chapter. So this ship coming from Earth perhaps the aliens know about the history of humans on Earth and feel if they stay it will be a danger to them. If that would be Azim thinking and I can't blame him maybe Milkulsa will have an unlikely role as a mediator .....Hey one can hope
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    Chapter 11

    Oh I could tell some Korner Krew stories. She would be behind bars now
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    Chapter 16

    One of the reasons Mikulsa is acting somewhat different is this is unprecedented there is no book or basic training drills or anything else you can think to tells you how to deal with Aliens you never met before. Apparently Mikulsa is wise enough to know his usual M.O. might not be effective here
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    Chapter 15

    As long as it isn't in the one I'm in (Although I would have a sneak preview of Geron's next story🤔)
  24. These were pieced together from my notes made during an annual summer retreat, away from the grid, the net and the noise. I'm glad you have a place like that to go to.I would ask you where it was but I fear as soon as you said where it would not be that place anymore. Your verse about the Loons. A year ago, there were none to be seen. They’d disappeared, like so many things fondly remembered. Were they thought to be extintc or something?
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    Chapter 2

    Very good chapter things are progressing.One slightly inaccurate thing.In California at least High schools and middle schools are set up now that the only way you can get in is through the office. Now way Ricky would just enter the school unless it was close enough to the bell that the entrance was still open. Plus word would have spread like wildfire when it was revealed Ricky's at this school they may have had a rough time leaving the school
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