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What Happens in Vegas, Well, It Happens Elsewhere Too
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in What Happens in Vegas, Well, It Happens Elsewhere Too
I at first had it in the back of my mind that Chris was responsible for the police finding Kevin. I guess some press about Kevin playing with the band and how it happened got back to the landlord. If Kevin does any interviews about becoming a new member and the arrest gets brought Kevin should tell the WHOLE story about about what a dick the landlord was evicting Kevin after his parents died even though he had the money to pay rent. Hope the landlord gets treated like a pariah. Actually Kevin trashing the room is a good sign. Joe Walsh and Keith Moon were famous for trashing hotel rooms and they did OK as musicians. As a aside ZZtop without Dusty Hill just seems wrong I know Billy Gibbons is THE guy but still. Same with what The Eagles are doing but it's the public fault IMO because the bands will still make $$$ because the fans will still pay the high concert prices to not see the real thing -
Another outstanding chapter I had accepted the fact that I would soon be dead, and I would no longer need them. That certainly explains why Phil wasn’t that interested in initially reading what he signed “According to Allen,” he replied, “His father doesn’t want anything from you. He calls it dirty money. That’s why he made Allen power of attorney.” “Dirty money?” I asked. “What does that mean.” “Allen said Roger is very homophobic,” he said. “He believes that your relationship with Dwight was sinful, and anything that came of it was dirty.” “It must have killed him to come back here and sign me into this place,” I remarked sadly. I can see why Allen thinks Roger is homophobic but it’s possible that is not the case.I said in previous comments Roger probably saw first hand how hurt his Mother was and it was pretty much Phil’s fault and Roger is furious at Phil . The “sinful behavior” Roger referred to might be what he perceives’s to be the cheating on his Mother Phil and Dwight did and not because it was same sex ( I don’t remember if Phil met with Dwight before or after Phil spilt with Roger’s Mother) . Roger’s anger is understandable but where he is dead wrong is telling Allan that Phil was dead .When Allan became an adult he had a right to know about his Grandfather at that point it wasn’t Roger’s call anymore I have to believe Eloise(That is her name right)didn’t know about Roger telling Allan this I think she would have told Allan herself. Gary got into the driver’s side and pulled off. “Where are we going?” I asked. “You’ll see,” he smiled as he pulled off. I see two possibilities.One they are going to Phil’s house where Colin and Jason are OR a meeting has been set up with Allan and Phil’s Great grandson
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The problem was I was having a very “down” day. Which meant that while humans were capable of several kinds of love, I was convinced I’d never deserve any of them. For someone who has been Alec's rock all this time River certainly sounds a lot like him. Maybe Kenji is River's version of Finn I came from a man who made a commitment and made a kid and then fucked off to parts unknown. I wonder if that being mentioned means we will find out more about what happened
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That the black disc left after conversing with Bzup would imply Bzup is one of high ranking among his kind
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Incredible chapter❤️ Some random reactions hope I make sense When Dante was speaking with Mr. Black , Mr. Black actually sounded like he was interested in Dante's welfare he must appreciate a good employee .He almost sounds like a good boss to work for ...Well that is if his business wasn't...you know. "I should have enough saved to leave this job by the time I'm forty." He grinned and whispered, "Who'd a thought I'd get fucking old." That comment should hit hard it shows what happens to those boys and men who sell themselves When Dante called Andy he slipped up and said his real name instead of D. We know Andy will talk to Kyle will Kyle get Andy to reveal Dante? Perhaps Kyle will use Dante to get at Black like what a wire or something We heard from Dante's POV that it has been 2 years since he's seen Matt. So my guess would be It has been about 6 month to a year that Matt was taken off Kanaan boat (Is Ahmet still alive?) I can't stop this now. Fuck. I bought him. I didn't call Kyle to report Matt was on The Market. What could he do anyway? Oh, I don't know. Maybe trace The Market's IP address? Maybe, or not. These bastards are good at hiding themselves. But anyway, no, my solution was to buy him. I must be out of my fucking mind. Another reason to call Kyle if this had gotten investigated they would have found a record of Andy making this "purchase" So speaking with Kyle I assume will result in Kyle taking care of that.
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WOW!!!! It took 5 or 6 minutes for you to comment after @Mikiesboy posted the chapter.WHAT was so darn important that you dilly-dallied for so long
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They can't seem to communicate to Bzup the topic of sex. Perhaps Jem and Nico can demonstrate it to Bzup........For the greater good of course
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The fact that Bzup is willing to help them find Chregar should go a long way for Mikulsa .Will they have a way to communicate with the aliens with Bzup being the go between? I think that would be critical in the way the aliens may react to the Vespris
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Is that all @ReaderPaul? Geron he must think you live 72 hour days and never sleeps
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I noticed @drsawzallgave a love reaction to that....So you LOVE the idea of me being in a locked doghouse eh? I'm calling SPCA on you and @kbois
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What ....or do you mean who?
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Unless of course Ben is lying about being 18.....Hey I probably would have done something like that if I could have gotten away with it
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Somehow I missed the notification for chapter 10. I'm reading a few stories that get a LOT of comments so I guess it got lost in the shuffle or GA messed up again. Before I comment on the chapter let me digress on something else in the chapter that got me curious. I have cousins that live in Australia , Adelaide and Mt Gambier to be exact (I'm a Yank). My cousin's family came to visit us in the late eighties I was young (really, really young ) Anyway somebody suggest to go a nearby Italian restaurant and have Pizza and all my cousins got really excited about I they only had pizza one one time before. When we got there the Patriarch of the family asked if their pizzas had tomato sauce on it and I thought to myself "Wow they really ARE unfamiliar with pizza". So my question is to you @Mark Ponyboy Peters or any other of our Australian readers was pizza rare in Australia in the eighties. Pretty much a perfect story about two gay men falling in love. I must admit I was so tempted to go to the other site and read there but I like commenting on GA so I restrained myself. In future stories are your characters going to cross paths? If you haven't done so I hope you consider that. For example I would love to see Ian and Shawn hang out with Scott and Jay and then come across the characters in After We Danced. Thank you sir and I'm eagerly awaiting Song For Guy
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Well I have to say I'm pleased at what was said at the first meeting of the visitors.The one thing I will say is there should have been a more lengthy coversation between Master Terpin and Mister Mikulsa to avoid preconceptions. Like @centexhairysub mentioned there is still a possibility that there may be a few loose cannons among Bzup kind and that could lead to something I don't want to think about. hundreds of new species we did not know about the year before. That's not only a valid point it's somewhat scary
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Back to Normal, For a While
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to Normal, For a While
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Back to Normal, For a While
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to Normal, For a While
I hope none of your female readers call you sexist for making Alex a bad bass player. That $150 for her to play that night did you research that because considering it is on a tour with the Black Crows and Blues Travelers that sounds a little cheap. If true though it makes a joke I heard ring true Q: What's the difference between a Pizza and a Musician? A: A Pizza can feed a family of four I going to Digress here a bit. Alex being paid $150 is in Iine with another story I heard. When the band Bachman-Turner-Overdrive recorded Takin Care Of Business it didn't have a piano part in the studio a pizza delivery guy showed up and mistakenly knocked on their door, the wrong door and heard the playback of the song and said to them "That song could use a piano part" they told him he had one take. Turns out the record company wanted that take so they had to call all the pizza places in town to find him and pay him. He ended up getting double scale for it which to me also sounded cheap considering BTO was a major band. They weren't due in San Diego until Monday the twelfth. Kevin and Eric planned on making the best of their time in Vegas. I live in San Diego and I looked online I can't find anything about The Black Crows coming with Deja Vu......You're not lying to us are you?🤔- 31 comments
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"Yes. A message from Mikulsa a short while ago, acknowledging our report on Bzup's A-Prime status. He seems to think it was a premature judgment, and that he will be better qualified to appraise the situation than we are." The man offered a gentle laugh. "I had the impression that he was annoyed with us. After hearing that how can one NOT come to the conclusion that Mikulsa is a pompous ass
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And perhaps neither does the author?🤔
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I really like how this story has started BTW this character isn't based on Ricky Martin is it.......Nah of course not. I rented this little cave. It’s cheap and convenient. There's cheap and convenient in New York City?
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It looks like I'm the first comment this time that's good because I'm sure I have missed a lot of things there readers here have noticed. I think when Mikulsa gets here he should be briefed on everything including how Jem seemingly showed Bzup eating and drinking. One thing that HAS to be stressed in Bzup amazing ability to adapt and add and subtract parts to himself the point being is if Mikulsa shows any kind of hostility Bzup might know how to do something to physically protect himself. "Wunnderful!" Anybody notice Bzup says wonderful the same way Lawrence Welk did?(For those of you who remember Lawrence Welk)
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And Don't Stop Thinking About Tomorrow
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Oh I didn't know that .Here's wishing for many, many more @kbois
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Diego was pleased to see Ashley's face turn an angry red. Oh so the human smoke stack is angry about the revelations about Calvin eh? Even she has to know she was using Calvin as much as he was using her. Does she really think there is honor among scum? Bryan blushed and grinned. He then said, “You sure you're straight?” “Yeah, 100% after that.” “I don't know, man. We might have to do it again, just to be sure...you know...for science....” James laughed and said, “Fine. For science.” He leaned in again and this time, they kissed much more passionately. Maybe James should consider he's bi or perhaps pan instead of straight. I'm guessing it was Steve who opened the door (Although I suppose it could be Caleb) IF it is Steve do you think he will advise Bryan to tell Kenny about this? Unless there really was valid feelings in that kiss I don't feel that's necessary but if anybody disagrees with that I respect that. So the neighbor who's camera recorded what Calvin did his name was John McVie?.....Did he retire from Fleetwood Mac?....Give me a head start before you throw stuff at me
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Whoa Kaanan is wise to something only he doesn't know the details yet. It would be interesting know more about the back story of Ahmet. This doesn't sound like a typical employer/employee dynamic even in this seedy situation it sounds a lot like Kanaan owns Ahmet also. BTW @kbois In REAL comments ( @Mikiesboy comment doesn't count)
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