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  1. I didn't know you then so I never got around to this story (Geez how did I survive?😄🤷‍♂️) I guess I have some reading to do I'll be back
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    Chapter 1

    My first reaction is there seems to be some gold to mine. Some details need to be revealed soon are there laws dealing with this these days? Can't help but notice there's a 10 year gap between his youngest sister and older sister sounds like the older sister doesn't have any relationship with her siblings
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    Prologue

    Based on your Prologue I wonder why David never met his Grandparents he didn't say they died before he had a chance to were his parents and Grandparents estranged? Time to find out
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    Keeper

    I understand what has happened with Avery with foster families in the past but geez you think after three years Avery would have some sense that Bill and Anna are decent people
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    Keeper

    That stuff @kbois said about something being in the coffee if Greg knew what he had he would sell it online it could fund Jeremy's Raven project for years to come .Hell I would buy some and invite certain people over for coffee
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    Outsider

    I guess Avery relate somewhat with Lee because of their crappy families.Greg seems to think there's something more. As far as Greg "test" goes he's a former cop so he knows what entrapment is. To me this comes awfully close
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    Rotten

    Thankfully I never was in a situation of having withdrawals🙏 But I guess it affects your ability to reason in the most basic way. OK so Lee gets the money out of the jar he still has to get his own money by going to Greg so Greg could go to where Mason put his money so didn't he think he would be asked about the money in the jar? You didn't say what time of night Lee did this whether it like say 10:PM or more like 3:00 A.M. I bring this up because Avery saw Lee do this why was he awake? was it because of his ADHD?
  8. It's very good that Roy's parents are cool with everything. Roy mentioned something about watching the Falcons lose again so I'm assuming this takes place in Georgia. One thing I didn't see until now was the story picture of who I guess is Roy. I Don't remember if you mentioned in the story if Roy and his family are black.I only bring that up because if this is in Georgia with the current political climate there that could be an issue also.I could see other black football players having a problem with Roy being with that "white boy"
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    Bound

    I don't know how much time has passed at Camp Refuge since the last story but is this something Joseph has already done bring a troubled kid to the camp or is Lee the first one?
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    Chapter 24

    Unless changing it means Caleb knocking on your door right now
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    Chapter 24

    You mean like the author writing him?Hey who said that?
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    Chapter 24

    Obviously a newbie here so allow me on @Northern Dutch Guy behalf on page 2
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    Chapter 24

    You may be on the road before I get another chance to say this so have an awesome trip and Merry Christmas
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    Chapter 24

    As far a passings go you couldn't have done any better that how you did it with Silas. As we already knew Vann is a special kid.Looking forward to the epilogs will it have the same Wednesday/Saturday schedule? And also are you doing anything with the @Carlos Hazday thing?
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    Chapter 24

    Told you she was slavedriver. Didn't you hear the Nyah-ha-ha?
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    Chapter 24

    That's a great question perhaps the epilogs will explain it
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    Chapter 24

    Is it any wonder the way @kbois is a slave driver?
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    Chapter 24

    Okay I promise not to ever again comment before I read the full chapter………For this story……Hey it’s true right?🤷‍♂️
  19. Based on that image I consider Jackson good looking man. You're not going to make it that simple and uncomplicated are you? is Zack going to show up and make things interesting? Does Adam and Andy from the other story go to the same School ? I ask that because Mr.Sheridan could cause a stink for Jackson BTW I'm confused "You said was. Are those guys dead?" "Yes, they are Dominic Unless I missed a headline Bill Gates is still alive right?
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    Chapter 23

    Good one!!!!!!......Oh? You were serious?......Uh gotta go
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    Family

    I'm guessing the guys at Camp Refuge are going to be in for a big surprise next time they see Harlan and Bailey I'm assuming they don'y know about this trip to Idaho.Looking forward to the next one but of course I'll read Wild Maple Farm first
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    Sacrifice

    I'm pretty sure this won't be the case in the last chapter but now that Bailey owns his recordings I'm not sure how long it's been since Bailey's accident and I don't know how many followers he had on his site but couldn't he now make the CD available? I know it would only sell so much bur perhaps a person with some influence will hear it and think "Hey this guy is a great songwriter" and who knows what that could lead to
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    Thanksgiving

    I think it's fair to say this just might be the most significant and memorable Thanksgiving for everybody that was there
  24. I'm curious if Andy somewhere along the way will seek out Adam I can picture Andy being left out of something among his other friends because he's not supposed to be friends with Adam. If I were Jeremy I don't know if I would want to visit his Dad he killed his Mom FCOL
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    Chapter 2

    Do we know if Vasco is really doing this for scientific purposes or.......
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