Hey thats not bad you should write that story only you would be encroaching on @kbois intellectual property......I GOT IT!! Instead of it being Kage and Caleb make it Cage and Kaleb.
That really would be one hell of a story.However I know in the past how closely guarded you have been of not giving anything away about future chapters so I doubt you just gave us the plot in that comment. I don't think you would do that just to shut me up.........🤔Come to think of it maybe you would.
This opening chapter did a great job of establishing Caleb's mindset and depression my first reaction to the cliffy ending is that this is going to be a wake up call for Caleb but since this is @kbois I'm bracing for anything.
Warning a couple of weird observations coming from me
Giles sighed. “Caleb, I’m sure everyone will agree. I’ve been patient so far. However, we’re all worried about you. This would have been a great place to break the third wall with Giles saying "Besides things have to change @kbois just posted the first about you"
“Hey, you still have a standing invitation to come by for poker night. I’m gettin’ tired of taking these guys to the cleaners. None of them can bluff worth a shit.” He chuckled. The reason why they can't bluff is they play as their wolves and every time they get a good hand they wag their tail
Well you did say in a comment in one of @Mrsgnomie chapter comments section that this will be all about Caleb so if he dies it will be a pretty short story huh?
Actually I think you're getting soft on us the previous story had dead bodies discovered less then halfway through the first chapter and here its only someone getting shot and not even dead. YEESH what a wimp.
I would never ever ,ever, ever,ever,ever,EVER!!!!! say this but if I were a smart ass or if some other Korner krew person was they would ask "When did you ever give @Mrsgnomie an apple".But since none of us are smart asses nobody has said that
Very suspenseful.I bet prey are stressed out 24/7. The way Pops used his antlers as a Buck would a real Buck have been able to do that or was it because Pop used his human reasoning on how to use the antlers.
So next mountain lions now will Micheal be called on to kill a deer like a mountain lion would? And would he be able to after what he experienced?
After that coyotes I bet these guys as coyotes would be able to catch the roadrunner...yeah I know shut up .I'm shutting up
Okay everybody is now on the same page let the battle begin.
Glad to see Rafe and Andre cleared the air .They joined hands does that mean there is something more?
I found it interesting Rafe said “Jesus fucking Christ!” makes me wonder if where Rafe grew up that they have the same concept of Christianity like on Earth or is it just a expression Rafe picked up