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    Chapter 3

    The Prince reasoning for turning down Urban shows a lot of depth to the Prince character.Outsiders who don't understand the Prince's reasoning might think the Prince made a mistake and after hearing about the consequences they would think the Prince committed a boner(so sorry about that one)
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    Chapter 188

    Awesome chapter .Interesting that Andy doesn't want to be adopted .I'm hoping it's because he made friends at Angel's home and doesn't want to leave them.The fact that Andy want to stay there shows what a great job Tommy and Pepe are doing.Angel's home isn't no ordinary place
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    Chapter 2

    Yeah that definitely works also😄
  4. We have read this kind of story a lot on GA what looks like a permanent situation for the protagonist has a chance to change as a results of meeting a special someone and a lot of complication come up while our protagonist is going on this journey. What sets apart these kinds of stories is how the author is her/his way takes you there.This Author is more then up to it as you'll see
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    Chapter 11

    CMU? Would that be Carnegie Mellon? That's impressive. I pictured him being in that one professor's class but still good for Micheal.Thank you and enjoy your vacation
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    Family Secrets

    As with Sandra not telling William about Grant and Troy I'm curious that she let Grant leave without telling him.In this case there may be a reason I'm not considering as Sandra doesn't seem to be someone who does something for no reason. I totally agree with your response to @chris191070.For all her rough qualities Sandra a stand up person she wouldn't let Troy take rap for something that wasn't his fault even when it meant exposing something she wanted to keep from William. I had wished more reader would have mentioned that
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    Birthday

    I'm guessing Sandra is with holding the news of her condition because she wanted to have one more normal birthday celebration with Grant (bad singing not withstanding)
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    Chapter 2

    When Gurd and Skriva appeared I was reminded of the old TV show Kung Fu in every episode there always was a few morons that wanted to F with Caine and they didn't realize this was the last person they wanted to mess with same thing here. When Snave extracted bursts of flames at their feet I was reminded of some lyrics from a song from the 70's"Their heads were on fire and their asses was catching" great scene. Now to see what's going to happen with the castle's Guards
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    Examination

    Why did Sandra not tell William about Grant and Troy.I think he deserved a heads up. I actually had no problem with Sandra's interrogation the question were tough but fair although the living of Grant's salary comment is a hell of a thing to say at a first meeting
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    Chapter 9

    In the last chapter Roni implied that she was going to have a nice calm private chat with Craig but what happens instead? Roni released my hand and pushed me into Craig.” Here,” she said. “He’s all yours.” I guess she was ticked off at Craig's " lovebirds" comment and this was her way of saying "I know what's up" While I don't blame her for being mad she had to have known doing that would not be good for Seth. Seth said I had read a couple of gay stories on the internet. If he read any @Ronyx stories he would know Craig is bad news .Maybe he'll come across this story before it's too late 😄 The more we find out about Blake the scarier it sounds not eating for days and staying in his room saying he hates his life and wants to kill himself and disappearing for days at a time Amber saying “He always says that when he gets upset. I’m getting so sick of him.” Tells me they are not taking things seriously enough. I get that they can't afford to get help for Blake but isn't there some option through the school or State for something like this? Situatons like this can be dangerous for other students. We find out where Blake has been staying when he runs away it was 15 minutes away from Amber's house so that means it was farther away from Blake's parents house when he lived there didn't his parents wonder where he went during those times? I'm sort of surprised other homeless people don't know about this place Blake goes to(Or maybe that is going to be revealed) At the end of the chapter we have “I want you,” I whispered softly in his ear. He pulled away, looked into my eyes and kissed me. Combine that with Seth wanting things to continue with Craig and those two things are bound to conflict.So The jealous bully Craig has only threaten Seth with bodily harm and that's bad enough but I fear Blake might get hurt also
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    Integration

    I have a little of what Rhett has but usually I'm with the right kind of people to help guide me. It would be interesting to know a little more about Grant's backstory and how it may have influenced his actions with Rhett.Did he go to a private school?(I forgot if that was mentioned)And was he able to have a best bud like most people or did his mother control that also.
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    Integration

    How do you think we feel when you have us all in a korner 😄
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    Chapter 1

    They would if they saw some of my previous cars I owned
  14. I was so ready to come out with the most sarcastic Mommy Dearest comments but then you hit us with this. No matter how much I might dislike a person(I always try to avoid saying hate but a few political people are making that challenging) I would never wish that on anybody
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    A Welcome Debt

    You mean it's not🤔
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    Revelation

    I really can't add anything to what already been said it was so well done but I will say if I heard John's voice the same way Troy did I would have reacted the same way where otherwise I wouldn't have. For 99% of other GA stories this would have been THE payoff moment of the story (maybe it is) but I see there are still 11 chapters to go so I can only conclude that Grant's Mother must be one hell of a stir the pot character. Can't wait to read it
  17. Reminds me of a friend that was against getting an heart transplant operation but ending up getting it because he had a change of heart
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    Approval

    I have to agree with @raven1this chapter is too feel good so watch out. The Brian theory about Troy finding out about the journal has now been dispelled. One huge thing happened in this chapter that might influence Troy after he finds out (yeah like every other reader I think he's going to find out) after most likely getting upset he may remember John's voice saying Hang on to him, baby. What would be a good touch would be John's voice then saying "I meant what I said "
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    The Only Gift

    I don't believe the details were explained but when Grant bought the house it was John's family that got the proceeds I guess.Something seems wrong about that. I wonder if John's sister tried to intercede in letting Troy have those writings. All that was accomplished was they stuck it to Troy...Did that make them feel better? How long did Troy and John live in that house? In California if a non married couple lived in the same house for 7 years they are considered common law married (I think that's the term )I wonder if Vermont has a similar law? I would love to see a way for John's family to be sued.
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    Chapter 1

    "Because sometimes your magick goes slightly awry, that's why." I wonder how these guys haven't ended up in a Charlie Boone story yet. One thing I wonder about if The Master is a mage why does he need to bother with a tooth brush?🤔
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    Family Ties

    Well it would have been blasphemous to call them the 'Fab Four" My birthday is in Februrary .PLEASE don't have her birthday be on February 5
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    Growing Pains

    I don't know if this would be the right time for Brian to bring this up but since it has to do with keeping secrets Brian just might bring up Grant lying about seeing Troy's name on the loan application.Which of course brings up the journal again.Grant really doesn't need to look at it anymore so why is he keeping it around? I wonder if he thinks Troy was sorry for burning (or trying to) it and wants him to have it back that is the only reason why to keep it.Unless he burns it it is critical for Grant to tell Troy about it rather then Troy stumbling upon it but we all know which one will hit the fan harder so I can guess what will happen. It might be awhile before my next comment I suddenly have an urge to prepare Buffalo chicken dip
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    Chapter 187

    Armand wouldn't know what to do with himself if he stopped adopting there would be to much of a hole. I will say if they haven't done so already to start making arrangements if something happens to them . Maybe Tommy and Pepe could be the next Armand and Colin.
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    Coming to Grips

    Things getting trainwrecky? Could that happen with Brian and Georgette around?..........WHAT AM I SAYING OF COURSE IT WILL!!!!
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    Evolution

    I'm not sure if anybody else had mentioned this yet up to this point. I am in no way qualified to make this assessment I'm just throwing this question out there.We found out Grant's Mom controlled everything about his life including his engagement can someone have so much control that the idea of being gay was a non-starter to Grant? To the point that he didn't even acknowledge to himself that a boy/man looked good? The future scenes with his Mother may reveal if there a was subtle homophobia growing up in their house
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