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It seems only @kbois gets an advanced copy to thrash er.... read

So your editing is the reason why the chapter is good GOT IT!!!

I couldn't help notice @chris191070 didn't do one countdown for this chapter not ONE!!!! Now why is that?..........oooooh! He's doing it for @kbois now ..hmph fair weather reader if you ask me

The last real Autumn I had is when I was a little kid going up in Massachusetts.Here in San Diego the season's never really change except maybe a little hotter in the summertime.But what I do remember of Autumn you captured real well

I thought all us readers already did that.

That part of the comment you should have added(In Homer Simpson voice)

I remember another annoying song from the 70's (or so I been told) where the main lyrics are "Put the lime in the coconut and drink it all up" This one has that one beat

If you didn't write it like that @Mrsgnomie would have edited it that way

A couple of major developments first Julie’s bombshell. I am in no way qualified to speak to that issue in general and I wouldn’t wish that on any parent having said that I definitly wouldn’t have handled it the way Julie did I would have tried to get the most information I could get and get as many informed opinions on what the best course of action to take and I don’t think she did any of that. What was her end game here? For Stacy to stay home forever so Julie could protect her? And When Julie said “I was hoping that we would never have this talk.” She was going to keep Seth in the dark forever? And that also implies Aunt Marie and Uncle Steve know nothing about this. As far their father goes why didn’t he fight for visitation? Did Julie have some kind of leverage on him? What I was afraid of happening to Blake did happen.I understand why Seth thinks Blake’s Father did it but they just hired a lawyer to get back custody of Blake that would be a pretty reckless thing to do.While I don’t rule out the father it can also be that football player that Blake exchanged words with at the dance (no name was given ) if that’s the case it was probably him and two other thugs. Either scenario is possible with me if it was the Father I think it would be because they were going to try the conversion camp again and Blake was resisting One less important note but I think it’s with mentioning There was a test scheduled. Craig tried to talk the teacher out of taking it since we hadn’t been in class. However, Mrs. Yarborrow said that was our problem. We should have attended. I wasn’t sure if she was aware of what had happened, and it was her way of punishing us. Was she just a hard ass or was this a homophobic reaction by her?

You didn't say in @kbois personal experience which one is howling and which one is panicking .....well come to think of it you don't have to

And since you two are the same person you should know that also.

Remember I what wrote in a comment last chapter that Caleb initially was going to be a jackass to Asa well this came close but I get the reason. @Mrsgnomie hasn't commented in a bit so it's safe for me to say this .You know why Caleb has Hank?.....It takes one to own one (OK I'll be hiding from her for awhile)

What are you doing? That's @chris191070 job

She has mercy she initially was going to put him in the Korner

I always found the best places to have this dish is in your hole in the wall type Mexican restuarant

Between how the epilogue ended by saying Derek thinking he should find another line of work and how this chapter ended it does not take much of a imagination what happened. So you woke up in the middle of the night when this idea came to you....and it involved a severed...well interesting that's for sure .

I would think legally Carlo would not get in trouble because he was coming to the aid of someone but I can definitely see a civil suit. Drew must be one hell of an instructor it Carol was able to inflict that much damage. It sounds like someone from the idiot bunch would have to testify to what led up to all this....good luck

When the drawing were being described I could not help but think that they sounded similar to the Egyptian drawings and I assume those predated what they were looking at here.Were the natives aware of the Egyptian drawings or did both peoples have similar thoughts independently of each other? You added another item for me to put on my to do list. I really want to see that Loretto Chapel Miraculous staircase

I absolutely missed chap 11 I must not have got the notification sometimes that happens with some chapters. I suspect it is happening with other readers also.

Like the crossover.The only problem I had was when Nick told Carlo about Matt getting raped I think he should have left out that detail I didn't think it was his place to say that. I see perhaps some confrontation by some homophobic thugs coming up if it happens and it turns out Drew and Karl end up being there they will be toast. The next chapter "A new Dad" I'm intrigued

Plus quoting me got you first on page 9

It wasn't my favorite genre but I loved the first two and so far loving the third stay with it

Don't show and tell everybody the dog ate your plane ticket

@kbois used that same GIF in a previous story in reply to something I wrote (can you imagine that😲) She might sue you now

I Saw that it said 11,951 words and I went woah. But what apparently happened is the chapterthe chapter was printer 3 times .I guess the chapter was so that not only was it told twice but three times😄 For those who look at the comments first you can stop reading after I think James suspected something particularly when he saw Richie and Henry leaving the kitchen with a cup of coffee. Other then the snafu a good chapter .I remember when the original 4 boys were first starting college Armand was sad he had no need to be with the likes of David,Carl Pierre etc. entering his life