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The truth is the only option any kind of cover story just won't do. I bet the rabbit was Bugs Bunny anybody that crosses his path gets in trouble

@Timothy M. and @raven1 are the closest to what I'm thinking I believe Corbin thinks it's too risky for the other person Paul or whoever to have a relationship with him

Like many others I also thought witness protection but can the word handler be used another way besides government? Corbin spoke Italian so is his family part of THE family? Maybe dear old dad is protecting him that would explain the oodles of money Corbin has. And perhaps what happened to Liam was supposed to happen to him. I'm probably wrong but it is fun to guess

Before I say anything else I'm going to mention something I should mention much more often I noticed @craftingmom is editing this just recently I noticed that is the case with a lot of other stories I read on GA including my very favorite story (I won't say which unless you ask) that right there says what an incredible editor @craftingmom is. Snave had the very same thoughts I had and that is just wait until his brother hears him.Snave being able to communicate thoughts now will be a tremendous asset. When Dorf said "That would upset me as well. They were lucky to escape so easily. I am not certain I would not have lopped off a piece or two of each, just as a lesson in manners." I shudder to think what piece or two he was referring to🫢

Did it on a smartphone right?

You answered a question I was going to ask and that was when Devin turns into another person does he still have his fingerprints? We found out from Barry the answer is no.It does makes me wonder when Devin changes into another person is it a fictional person that doesn't exist or is it a random person that does exist if you understand my question. So Devin agreed to tell the same story to his family that Mac is going to tell his parents.Well that's a good idea except for one thing MAC HASN"T EVEN TOLD DEVIN THE STORY YET!!!!!!

You really do know me too well Now write this date down I was thinking of commenting on what @Fanciful Soul wrote but this time had the discretion not to.BUT!!!!! since you called me out here's what I was going to write "You better be careful with those hard questions @Fanciful Soul otherwise you'll be in the Korner with the rest of us." Hmm🤔 I guess I responded anyway

Opps smartphone strikes again I'm going on my desktop know

My first reaction is Urvan is going to do something to have Mort and Miles angry at Raimey again maybe even others.I worry that he found a way to eavesdrop in their conversations

Whew we get a breather today only 10,367 words

Totally agree with the two previous readers about the judge.Is there a stenographer for adoption cases?Because that would mean there would be a record of the Judge statement and that WILL come back to haunt him I bet Colin knows a reporter that could make that better known.

Some readers are assuming Paul is straight but he spent a good chunk of the day helping Corbin no mention of a wife and child. That's not proof he's gay either just saying.

Really liking this and want to find out more about Corbin past.I'm not worried about the guy with the rifle if he were dangerous the story would be over. I don't know if you like this or not but as great as the chapter was my biggest takeaway from this was I now need check out Idaho.Why? Idaho nachos of course

One thing Adam may not be considering is that Ross could be having similar feelings that Adam has. The idea of a sleepover might be to intimate for him at the moment.With or without others there

Of course it would depend on what kind of wooden you're talking about....wouldn't it

I wasn't asking for THAT reason I just noticed when Raimey took them to the room I didn't notice any mention of where Snave was surely he would be close by ready to protect. Perhaps I missed the mention of where Snave was easy to do when there are 13,000 words

It's not a big deal but the room Jamie and Gavin are using where is Snave when they are doing what they are doing out in front I guess? @drpaladin was right that was a kick ass battle scene I shudder to think what would do if I had access to the a lens like Jamie has.Of course I would also use it for good like have it tell GA authors to write sequels to certain stories

Needless to say I haven't read the chapter yet but 13,519 WORDS!!!!!!.How many chapters would this story have if you were a normal person. Of course the term normal is relative if this was me I would find 481 extra words so the word count wouldn't have the number 13 in it🤷‍♂️

Oh you are such a cut-up

At the time I'm writing this there have been 14 other reviews and from what I can tell there is nothing about the story they missed they covered everything that is great about this story. So instead I will tell you what this story made me do. For about 2-3 years my top 5 stories on GA haven't wavered and showed no signs of doing so.(My top 30 maybe even more are stories worthy of being is someone's Top 5 that just shows how deep GA library goes) Any way this story has knocked another incredible story by an incredible author out of my top 5. I won't rank or mention the others but what I will say is the difference between the number 1 story to the number 5 story is less than a tenth of a percent. If you don't think much of my opinion just look at the reviews on comments of other readers and you'll know I am not overstating this.A must, must read

After 4 pages of comments there is absolutely nothing I can add except "Wow!!!just wow!!!!!".There are a handful of GA stories that I look at again and again and I knew way before I finished it this was going to be one of them. You see the great response you got from the readers but its even more then you realize because I was drawn to this story by somebody who didn't comment on this story.He's very active now in commenting on GA but at the time this was posted he wasn't I'm guessing he has since started commenting on your later stories if you're curious his profile name is Summerabbacat. I'm going to reveal something in my review of this story that will really state my opinion of the story. So I guess I'll start on your Camp Refuge series unless you think I should go to another story instead. The readers sort of gave away a big part of the Guarded story so I'm sort of guarded about reading it (Duh!) Again thank you so much for this beautiful story

In my last chapter comment you probably thought I read ahead but trust me I didn't. I almost don't want t read the ext chapter seeing that its the last one

Beth mentioned something similar but what it may take is Troy hearing John's voice saying "Hey stupid why aren't you accepting the proposal"

Rhett and Beth that is a classic Yin to ones Yang couple

You really pulled at the heart strings with the scene between Grant and Sandra I'm glad they bridged the gap but it's sad that it took Sandra getting MS to do so.I like @raven1wonder how Grant is going to handle owning the Winery.No way would he and Troy leave their life in Vermont.I have a few thoughts maybe there's a cousin from one of the Aunts and Uncles who isn't a jerk like the others and respects the family business and do right by it.Grant could also enlist the help of Gavin who would only suggest what would be best for the winery and who can be trusted. Can't wait to find out more about Beth one thing is sure she certainly fits in with the group of friends