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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Are you nuts? The whole time they are at college until they graduate. And @astone2292 can take as many stories as he needs to do that
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I knew there would be culture shock for Charles. But not to that degree he'll soon learn he's in the best place possible
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I think Bryan explained it as well as he's capable of .Kenny should try to have empathy for Bryan's unique situation.
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The Audition and Cops One Last Time
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Audition and Cops One Last Time
I'm worried now that Ant connection to Uncle Marco and the arrest might spook Atlantic records perhaps they will insist that they get a replacement for Ant hope I'm wrong🤞I can think of some other possible fall outs . You don't mess around Mick Jones???? There is a Mick Jones in the band The Clash thats who this dumb ass thought of at first. So that added "Flirtin With Disaster" I don't think that was because I mentioned it but still cool -
Hope you reconsider because this is a good story.Lots of stories ,TV shows ,movies etc. use this fast forward technique I don't know why that upsets you
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What you didn't see or something?I'm looking at it now
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“You can't talk to me like that. I'm your father.” How delusional is Calvin that he thinks he deserves any kind of respect. Bryan should talk to Diego or even Steve about it but two people who should know nothing about it is Caleb and Luis.Caleb only because height tell Luis and Luis shouldn't know because of his temper he might track down and beat the crap out of Calvin .Calvin could then have some kind of leverage such as if he can talk to Brayan he won't press charges against Luis etc.
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Did the Facebook request from Calvin come before or after the encounter at the hotel? You broke the third wall again funny stuff.But I wonder how TPTB at GA will feel about being referred to as an obscure website😄
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
HEY ARE YOU SAYING @kbois IS DAFFY?????..........ok -
Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
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Why did Armand deny that was him in the newspaper? Was he afraid that guy was going to talk his ear off or something?
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
"Great minds "work" alike" Especially when you're the same person- 108 comments
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
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Boy so much to talk about here before I say anything else I have to say I was impressed with Blake on one thing. I thought a fight would break out when a member of the football team and his girlfriend danced up beside us. He leaned over and snarled, “Fags!” I had to grab Blake and hold him back. “Mother fucker,” he muttered. “I’ll show you what fags can do to pussies like you.” “Bring it on,” challenged the boy. People around us stopped dancing. Mr. Stevenson walked up and asked if anything was wrong. The boy walked away, and Roni assured him that everything was okay. Blake showed me some guts there As for the rest of it I predicted the dance was going to be a doozy but it was the afterparty instead. Blake and Craig acted so reckless .First Blake making Seth go into the poolside bathroom with him where Craig could easily see them and then Craig making the same mistake moments later by going in there where Stacy can see him. Craig was drunk obviously because Seth could smell the alcohol. Blake had to be drunk also because just a few chapters ago he refused to make love too Seth. Seth had said Jerry snuck alcohol in at the dance Blake must have had some then it would explain him trying to give Seth head while he was driving(BTW I guess Blake never saw the movie The World According To Garp anybody who saw that would know what I'm referring to). While Stacy had a right to be upset she didn't have the right to scream at the top of her lungs what they were doing so all the crowd would hear outing them in the process sure she was drunk also but I think she would have done that anyway.( I almost wished Craig had hit Stacy with his car as they were driving away....almost) I really was worried that Craig was going to crash the car @Ronyx had done this kind of thing before in previous stories .Thankfully Seth talked him down. Now comes dealing with the fall out but there could be one more explosive incident to come.Seth and Craig are at Blake's secret place so it's quite possible if not probable that Blake will be going there walking in on them
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
I bet when @FanLit posted comment number 24 @kbois went " Hey If I post the next two comment I'll be first on page 2.She's on a roll .Page 3 anyone? -
Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
Take this with a grain of salt this is coming from someone who's made every mistake a person can make (Yeah I know big surprise) But why not just tell Max. I guess Kyan doesn't want to hurt him but it's either hurt him now or hurt him later and this lie makes it worse. Am I missing something? What Perry says about the friends part makes sense but I'm afraid he has doubts- 108 comments
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Part One. Chapter Twelve.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
It means we can all get together! We could double date...uh no. A threesome maybe. You all were just talking about that last chapter. @kboisidea ?🤔- 108 comments
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
The reason why we are "late" is because @chris191070 didn't give his update of how many hours until your next chapter- 108 comments
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weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Twelve.
AW!!! My day is complete- 108 comments
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Unresolved Issues Become Clearer - Well, or Badly?
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Unresolved Issues Become Clearer - Well, or Badly?
GA did it again I didn't get a notification of the chapter being posted but I found out later when I was notified of a chapter comment. One last time? Before I read that I thought of a lot of scenarios that would take awhile so what could end this? Perhaps Paul Turner's dad does something? I love the Song The Boxer it's a little different from the rest of the set.But I have a question how is Sittin On The Dock of the Bay southern rock? Otis Redding right? Or are you talking about a cover by someone else? -
I was torn between love reaction and a sad reaction only because what River went through.I knew Matt was an ass h--l but not like that.Are you going to have River testify at a trail? Two wrongs don't make a right but I would love to see Gav get a chance to kick Matt's ass (in self defense of course) BTW do you have a drawing of Gano? Or some drawing of what you think Gano looks like?
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Part One. Chapter Eleven.
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Eleven.
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Like the others I can't think of a good scenario for Calvin being there. This is me making a huge reach and is very unlikely but could Calvin have put an life insurance policy on Donna and Brayan and Caleb are the beneficiaries? I know crazy but I can't think of any other positive thing so Calvin appearance will most likely be negative
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This was a excellent chapter but then the last sentence "How bad could it be? Had a famous last words quality to it
