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Testing.......Oh my I do have the right story I was confused because I didn't see a post by @kbois yet

For what you call experiments this was very thought provoking.That line "We can't control what fragrance tells' was a thought I never had in my head but it is absolutely true

Chef Boy had to be saved from the two men it wasn't clear to me what the two men wanted but if its what I think it is I'm glad Armand is taking him home with them

With Dorf with him of course

You are such a smart a..............alek

Did GG really make it rain or did she talk to the one that can make it rain?

If you're a fan of this author you know he does two types of stories the conventional gay teen relationship story and the story that has aliens, magic, adventure, danger, suspense etc. with a gay teen relationship in the background. It's the latter category where this one is from and this just may be his finest. that is saying a lot when if you're a fan you know how great his previous stories are. If you are not familiar with his previous work you won't need to know any of that to enjoy this story. Just give yourself plenty of time to read the chapters for they are on the long side but you'll love because not a word is wasted

I hesitate to say this and you'll know why in a moment.There are two types Geron Kees stories there are the ones with aliens and magic such as the CB stories and there are the ones that focus on two gay teens who are couple or want to be a couple and Geron nails both of them. I have to say out of the aliens story and this is where I hesitate this story is a cut above all the other ones and I say this knowing how awesome the CB and Doorways stories are there are a couple of his teen relationship stories that I feel are on par with this one but that is like comparing apples and oranges so lets just this is in his top 3 and any order you put them in would not be incorrect. Okay you said we can ask questions at the end so I have two 1."I can see what transpires there, Jamie. I would not miss this for all the Onsal in Phyrilix!" What's an Onsal?(can't wait for the answer) 2. Geert said "My affection is brotherly." That still doesn't tell us......Which way does he swing? Thanks for a great ride Geron

Lets just say I read a lot of lines in this chapter that implies future stories with these guys

You mean he was wrong? 🤔

I'm just that good. 😉.......Of a cheater.

Wow thats surprising.......NOT!!!!

I guess Kyan is working is way up to telling Perry about Max .But before you write that. Hidden movie theater above the garage? Outdoor pizza oven? Can you write it where I'm dating Perry🤨( BTW does he exist IRL) I'll even have pineapple on my pizza.

Well she posted chapter four in the evening and then chapter 5 really early no wonder we are confused. I bet @Mrsgnomie is off some where going "NYAT HAH HAH!!!"

I might start a fight here I think this has been talked about in your previous stories (both of you are the same person) But I'll take Cheetos on pizza anytime over pineapple(I would also take banana peppers)

As usual a lot of things to talk about about after a Ronyx chapter but the one thing thing I have to mention is we have seen the first interaction between Seth and Aunt Marie and in that one conversation Aunt Marie has been more of a Mother to Seth then his own Mom has been in this whole story so far. Uncle Steve was a crackup Uncle Steve laughed and replied, “Nothing wrong with being a nerd.” He looked over and winked at me. “I was a nerd in high school too. I’m now making three times the money than most of the boys who made fun of me.” He smiled at me and added, “Don’t worry, Seth. You’ll get the last laugh. Just remember, he who laughs last, laughs best.” Stacy gave Uncle Steve a puzzled look and asked, “What’s that mean.” Uncle Steve laughed harder as he looked at Stacy and replied, “I didn’t expect you to get it.” Sounds like Uncle Steve has Stacy down pat so safe to say so does Aunt Marie only the mother is clueless Well at least Craig didn't ditch football practice as it got cancelled but he still went to Roni's house.Why? Did he notice them leaving the parking lot? Or was it just to check to see if Seth was there? After speaking to Roni later that day Craig sounds like a emotional wreck in his own right.Breaking up with Stacy was very telling.I still think Craig is a danger but this puts a little different perspective on things. I squinted my eyes, and I saw a figure buried under several blankets. “Blake?” I called out softly. He sat up and looked my way. As long as I live, I will be haunted by the ghastly face staring back at me. That could mean that Blake is distraught at what happened the day before but it also could be more.Something Roni said earlier in the chapter “It’s weird,” she replied. “He started ranting about how fucked up his life is. He said some things that really worried me. I went into the house with him when he got his clothes. He dressed and then just left. I tried to get him to talk about it, but he told me it was too late to talk.” She gave me a worried look. “You don’t think he will do something to himself, do you?” Based on that statement and the number of times Blake made mention of killing himself I hope he didn't do anything like take a bunch of pills or something.Ron has had important characters die in a few of his stories one was very well liked and another wasn't as well liked but wasn't hated either. While my gut tells me that is not going to happen here you definitely can't rule it out

And that is different from his other chapters how?

I didn't know you had blue hair

A few thoughts (Which of course Geron won't answer) " But while we have been doing that, it seems they have quietly outmaneuvered us, coming at us instead by proxy, with this brigade of total unknowns." Was that Thorvil's plan? If it was no matter how much confidence he had in Jamie its still very risky to do that with a 15 year old unless of course he had some Magick to control things maybe Thorvil was using a mind control for good purposes. Just a thought. BTW I thought we would see Thorvil by now Now I'm not so sure we will, nah Geron will use 20,000 words if he has to. A tremendous volume of earth was jetting in every direction from the position they had just left, . From that can we ascertain that they have been on the planet Earth? Or is it just used as an expression here? Got to say brilliant cliffhanger

St. Micheal the arch angel is very prominent in the Catholic religion some priests end masses with the prayer to St. Micheal part of the prayer said "Be our defense against the wickedness and snares of the devil" That makes Micheal the perfect Angel for Armand and Carl to paint here

You can still see that in certain parts of California

Well they only have two chapters to do so....Gee I hope @Geron Kees told them that

Forgive the dormant electrums in my brain when I ask this And because these two stars shared forces in the same place, a...tunnel?...had been opened between the two universes within the heart of each star, would he be talking about a worm hole? This time when Jamie had one of his visions the rest of the group saw it also unlike before. I got to thinking I guess only a few moment passed when he and the lens was figuring things out am I right.Because if it took Jamie the same amount of time to figure it out as it took us readers to read it I can picture the group thinking "Ah geez he's spacing out again"😄

Instead they should do what Led Zeppelin says 🎵Want a whole Lodda love🎵

I want to say I remember hearing this about 20 or so years ago give or take.In the mountains close to where I live in So Cal there were reports on the news about mountain lions being more aggressive when seeing humans the report went on to say that usually a mountain lion would run away from a human much like a stray cat would but more recently were starting to act more dangerous .Animal control officials didn't have an explanation for it at the time. Anyone hear about similar situations at other places? This has had probably has been written about by other authors who write about the same topic maybe even by @Bill W in past stories but will Devin and Mac try to be intimate when they are in other forms in the future? I never came across this yet