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I really can't add to what the others have already said about this incredible story I just think this story deserves more than three reviews and I hope doing this inspires a few more readers to write a review. The one thing I will add is this is easily the best story dealing with this subject matter I ever read and I suspect other great authors writing other great stories referred to this while they were writing them.If you haven't read the other reviews yet I suggest you hold off and read the story first the author didn't want something to be revealed until it was read IMO it made great story that much more greater.

Love what you've done with your place

What @FanLitsaid about Seamus and Loren's relationship made think of this exchange “You’d owe me big.” “So big.” “One great big, giant favor, redeemable by me at a time and place of my choosing.” Seamus reaches out his hand. “Deal.” Oh boy what will Loren come up with? After BN Carson was one years old does this story extend with Carson in his terrible two's? Picture Jay agreeing to babysit Carson and then being left alone with Loren.That would take some extra chapters maybe that's way this story took as long as it did to write

That comment explains so much now I know why this chapter was posted at such a different time . The last four chapters @kboiswas the first comment.It's like you made sure that wasn't going to happen again did you wait to see if kbois was taking a nap before you posted?

A few comments before @kbois said you couldn't stand letting other people get reactions.Yet it didn't. stop @Kbois from using a reaction on your story for a plug did it🤔

Welcome

That was very interesting. If I ever get to travel there you left me with a mental note Naples is known for it's pizza can't pass that up (although I do know pizza is different there)

Welcome back these days when you don't hear from an author for awhile you fear the worst but I'm glad in your case its been being real busy instead of the other thing. It will be interesting to see how different the chapters are from Valen's POV.It was nice how his Father reacted

Other readers said they saw this coming but I have to confess I didn't. I mean the shooting part for sure. How about Granpa Crane keeping the store open ? I'm just throwing things out there I really don't know what to think

Most definitely an interesting chapter and how you set the stage. The one possible red flag here is the entity from the future did this in a way where the people he(or she) contacted had literally no time to think over what was being proposed.Hell as cautious as I tend to be I would not have thought twice either.Why did they go about this way? If they have bad intentions this is exactly how they would do it.Needless to say the situation in the future must be pretty dire also

In the future I will recommend this story to readers who haven't read it yet.Obviously because of the great story but I'll also tell them that they'll see some new material from Dr. Suess. I'll let them figure out what I mean by that

Everything that's happened in this chapter looks to be building blocks for positive results. I'm really looking forward to the conversation Finn and Alec will have. It sounds like Alec is receptive to really listening this time with no distractions and more importantly no where to run. As far as this situation with his Father if the conversation with Finn turns out like all we readers hope then that means Alec and Finn got there second chance.With that in mind maybe Henry should get a last chance since he reached out . The worst that can happen is a bad situation stays the same but at least they tried he can't be hurt by him anymore even if it fails. Everything seems to be in place to make things right with Finn and Alec will gain a new family who is spite of everything they seem to love him. So what could go wrong? Unfortunately that would be Alec being...ALEC!!!!!

Satan an "chill-ass guy" "The coolest"? oooookay. This exchange got my attention“Does everyone on the entire planet need to know that?”The wolf eyed his superhuman friend with an unreadable glint That tells me Andre has a thing for his friend would Rafe fell the same way if he knew?

So if you're car breaks down you don't want us to call a tow truck?

I also have dreams that make no sense and defy logic(Not that my real life is more sane)I have to start paying more attention to see if I took cold meds or something else before going to bed

I'm guessing Loren being in on the conversation with Jay and his brothers influenced him to decide to find his brother.I'm looking forward to that. After Jay's parents "surprise" the one thing I would have said to Loren on the phone is "So you're planning a surprise for me on Thursday? CANCEL THEM no more surprises EVER!!!! Could you clear up something for me is this Jay's last year or does he have one more year after this one?This injury plagued season he's had after having few injuries during his career should be taken as a sign that it's the right time to get out at that age you start getting injury prone.There are far too many examples of former players walking with a limp or worse because they played a little too long

Kbois doesn't read the chapter in advance? Well that would certainly explain the editing.(kidding Kbois is an awesome editor only you didn't hear me say that)

Every comment has rightly pointed out in some way Sasha acting different around Sammy.Sasha after dropping his GF wanted to say something to Sammy before he left be couldn't bring himself to.So now there's a New Years eves party and I assume alcohol is there which means Sasha's inhibitions will be down.Whatever happens if hope it doesn't f-up things betweenSammy and Jake

The only one that won't work is TeamFalec I don't have to explain why right?

I might remember the details but I think it was the Roman's who believed taking too many baths was unhealthy .According to what our teacher said a lot of people used perfumes to cover their odors.Glad I live where and when I live

I thought Dr Suess was dead instead he's a GA reader

The only reason Milo went to the door I guess is Alec and Finn must have gotten loud.Speaking of Milo I'm so happy he found Nina and Grace is adorable.I wonder why blue is Milo's third favorite hair color🤔 If I understood right Alec is visiting to the hospital again 🤞Wouldn't it be something if his Father ends up encouraging the possibility of #teamFilec. Was River told Alec was so obvious but I guess with all these confusing conversations Alec has in his head nothing is obvious to him.It looks like River made more progress with Alec then the therapist did I hope so now River can get around to calling me....er never mind.(Hey one can dream right?)

What activity is Max laundering?(Did I use that term right?) I can guess what Max is doing but I'll have to wait for the details Huge step for Seth you were very detailed when you described Seth replaying his past makes me think you witnessed a situation like that. I apologize if I'm getting too personal with that comment.

And so it seems the battle lines are drawn.They have find out more about Deyja like how in the hell does she know them.

I don't think you had to tell us that