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If Sam and Robby realize Sergeant Hicks is trying to get to the truth instead of pinning this on Robby then that will go a long way on making more progress on this new lead. Will Hicks or maybe Trevor on behalf of Hicks get Dylan to come clean on his account. "Justice is the only thing that will bring Dylan Keys a degree of closure and peace." Well Pierson if you really believe that then turn yourself in I'm sure you're guilty of something.Pierson may not have killed Dylan's mom directly but he way he shamelessly used her in his lame ass press conferences with her appearing to stare off into space probably gave the killer the idea of killing her and making it look like a suicide.

I wish I had the same way with words you do

What a clever way to collect Money to help feed the poor. So the people revolted over the winner of a contest sponsored by the POPE.I would like to say people have changed since then but sadly there's plenty of evidence we are still like that. I bet most of you can think of a obvious example.

This would be Brandon's first public appearance with the band even before the first concert with them.

Yep that's where I heard it I always wondered why Tom Leher stopped performing and recording. If I'm not mistaken that album was his last release

You know they'll be worked out but C James just loves to throw hurdles in the way

Wow so many questions to ask.Are Dylan's parents murderer's one or two people?If its two people then it's two different motives so unlikely. What is the one issue that would make one person want to kill both of them?The abuse of Dylan.The murderer wants the father dead because he's the abuser and wants the mother dead because she let it happen.It's tempting to say its this Mark_Cain person but that sounds too easy. When the dust clears I hope Dylan gets to stay with Hicks family or maybe even Sam and Robby but that's for down the road "That’s not my department says Wernher Von Braun.” Out of all the references I thought I'd never see in a GA story that would be right up there.I'm curious how many readers know that reference. I heard it on a comedy album( I won't say the name of it case someone wants to guess) is that the same place you got it from @St. George?

Out of all the scenarios I definitely didn't see that one coming. That someone would try to pull that isn't surprising but all the obvious holes about the fake Mr Jacobs makes this a head scratcher

It's been one chapter since Sam's parents told them to get a lawyer and they haven't done so yet they may have waited too long like Geron Kees said. @drsawzallpointed out many good possibilities here's one to add IMO.Has Dylan actually hooked up with somebody I assumed he has.If he got intimate with someone and that person saw Dylan in a state of undress and saw the aftermath of what his Father did to him that could piss somebody off enough to possible murder.

Oh Gabe is making a run for it.My first thought? In L.A. in that traffic? Brilliant move.

Was hasn't been revealed yet at least unless I missed it is the part about Robbie's comment about stuffing cake down Keys throat made known to the public either by the video being posted or the news reports mentioning that.If that fact is known by the public then the murderer could be anybody. We don't know if this will go to trial in the story but if it does I could picture Dylan getting involved on Robbie's behalf

If a member of the DOCC did the murder then it was definitely Angels food cake😄

Not that there hasn't been plenty of clues such as Chase being so eager to help Brandon get his stuff from his old room I bet Helen and the others noticed that.And come on Brandon having a poster of a shirtless Chase on his wall? HELLO!!!!!

I was just made aware of this story by @chris191070 and I liked the first chapter a lot. My first reaction the title of the story is Murder of a Moral Man based on Mr Keys comment about violating God's law I think he might be that "moral" man who gets murdered.I'm also guessing that since Mr. Keys son appearance was described that he's a key part of this story maybe he's secretly gay and can't say so but it's way too early to predict this can go a lot of ways.

You know if Brandon was unsure he could have asked how much longer he would have to do the roadie job like I said previously not the sharpest knife in the drawer. That could also be said for Gabe. The father of the three brothers set it up in a way that Helen had nothing to do with the crew but since the guys broke away from the Father Gabe should have realized that he should have tried to make nice with the guys Eric doesn't like him so that tell me he was somewhat assholeish with them also.Gabe has to realize that the topic of where Brandon lived might come up in a conversation between Brandon and. the band and one question will lead to another and his scam will be exposed.

I see some intense training coming up for Andre.For Rafe also he didn't know he had this power and probably doesn't know how to control it. GA system is acting up again I didn't get the new chapter notification again the only reason why I knew about is it notified me of @Clancy59go figure

@Mrsgnomie has a beard?🤔

All this time has Loren had other triggering moments with kids? I know he's avoided them for the most part but I'm sure he might have seen something in the past where this has happened.Thankfully the Lorens friends/crew and Jay and Loren himself handled it beautifully. Kbois only hundreds of dollars Loren getting off cheap @Mrsgnomie first you got Rams fans mad and now Peter Gabriel fans?(although he's far from my favorite also)

You don't know how many times in chapter comments of other stories I heard this story referenced and raved about so I finally read it all and it lives up to the hype. I have like 5-10 stories on GA that are so good that I sometimes pick a random place in the story and reread it you would be surprised how many times I find things I missed the first time well this story is now on that list.I imagine for all the people who read this it is everybody's top 5. I have a recommendation. Obviously you can't go wrong reading other C James stories but there is one that is only available on GA's premium subscription a story called Jake (don't confuse it with Three for Jake).That story is every bit as good as Circumnavigation and Let The Music Play. If finances are tight for you I will say if you can pick the cheapest subscription package just to read that story do so.Just make sure you finish that story before the subscription runs out which I think is a month but I may be wrong about that.I assure you it's worth doing so just to read that story

Incredible incredible story .Thank you so much.Trevor told Uncle Greg that they are almost done with the book I would think they would want to add the battle with Bridget also so there will still be a lot of work to do.Since Trevor and Shane don't write as well as C James (not meant as an insult BTW) I bet their book will be more than 157 chapters

Wow I wonder If this is the shortest chapter in GA.But thank you so much for giving up an update and letting us know you're OK. That place you mentioned where they will need three coins I vaguely recall hearing something about a place like that.I'm not going to google it 'll wait until you're next chapter to find out although I am tempted

I had the same thought I wanted Bridget's demise to be from the gators also but know this she admitted to the first among equals that she had been a fool and let her anger put them in that position in her last breaths she realized Trevor outsmarted her

So much incredible stuff going on but despite all that my biggest take from this chapter is the smack Trevor spoke to Bridget loved it

I don't know how this is going to happen but I have a feeling the hurricane will be some kind of equalizer when Trevor and Bridget are finally in each other's crosshairs

This is an odd thing up especially in light of the cliffhanger oh excuse me non cliffhanger but something Frank Tittle said about Bridget making mistakes when you get her angry If he tells Trevor that I can see Trevor trying to do something to take advantage of that