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To use Matts analogy it looks like he might be getting dealt a winning hand Mr London who gives a good first impression is going to give him a job nobody deserves a break more than Matt. Trent's back story certainly explains why he works there . I mention something about Trent and Matt last chapter looks like something may be starting there. The minor cliff hanger at the end I don't think is a going to be a big deal. I have a concern about something that may not even happen in this story so this may be irrelevant. New Morning sounds like a temporary place for Hayden and the other kids so that means Hayden could possibly go back to his so-called parents .I'm sure Matt will make his feelings known about that and Trent and Mr. London knowing who Pastor Simpson was will advise against Hayden going back to his parents but you never know what some dumb ass court and if that sleaze ball lawyer Laird is good at what he does he might make a compelling argument on behalf of Hayden's parents. If this happens God know what Matt might do to try to help Hayden.Again this may not be part of the story I'm just worried.

So the place has an outhouse.Geez I hope there is indoor plumbing.Why wouldn't he have keys to the front door?First thing on his to do list change the lock on the front door.

This is the best chapter so far out of all the good chapters.We got a lot more insight about the Father/Son dynamic when his dad said 'Why couldn't you have done something more manly and worthwhile? he was really saying" what are you a sissy?".I know that's a crude way to put it but he is crude and it explains why he acts that way toward his son.Also the part about Leah and Corbin it sounds like they should have been friends or FWB instead of a couple. Troy mentioned something about reading Corbin wrong we all know what he meant even if Corbin didn't.I wonder what it was about Corbin that set off Troy's gaydar.I would say maybe Corbin's dad sees the same thing but that would be giving him credit for having intelligence. Being a very small village and Corbin being six foot four the pub would probably serve him and they would probably serve Troy seeing that his dad is the biggest employer in the village.I point this out because I see Corbin and Troy becoming closer friends and getting drunk and...well I think you know where I'm going with this.We'll see

I had it in the back of my mind that those bastards might betray Sage like they are planning to betray Adam.But it would make more sense for the story for Sage to return to Earth as I suspect he will cross paths with Brandon. I like how Castro jumped to Adam's defense it sounds like he's pretty much like human.If I had change to design my own human I already know what I'd do are you this technology isn't already available

This chapter certainly explains why Neil is so surly most of the time and the lyrics to the two songs mentioned reinforce that. How is the principle involved in all this? I get that West is a great guy but I'm not sure why he has taken an interest in Neil like he has oh sure there's the obvious but I think there has to be something that hasn't been explained yet

Good I will get more from unemployment then I do now

Marco's job must pay well if he can already start thinking of buying a house good for him.Maybe number three will be part of one of the crews that will install stuff in the house

I love these comment made about the father "the Toad in the hole"😆.Oh and of course it was the roads fault that he messed up the boat

Not to mention Troy Winters

So Adam takes that green drink and sees lots of colors.We already had that on Earth did you hear of the psychedelic 60's

Happy Labor Day as I see you've been laboring over a hot keyboard.BTW did you have any trouble with the flooding over there? So it sounds like Rory has gone off the deep end.It also seems like he found out about S.F. How? here's my guess a bug has been planted on Jackson and they overheard T.J and Jackson's conversation. T.J. and Jackson couldn't finish lunch?How big are their Calzones(that sorta sounded dirty)

Well despite the Puritans advanced technology and their Vulcan like logical approach to things they are just as weaseley backstabbers as the worst con man on Earth.Well with this developement I still see Relshan making the cure but I think he will come up with a plan to send Adam back to earth before they can turn him over to the Silga's I wonder if that piece of medal or whatever it is Brandon has on earth when it glowed purple did it send a signal to God knows where?

Interesting first impression Troy makes.Corbin says he speaks with an American accent but I notice Troy uses some subtle British colloquiums.I wonder what his back story is? Leah makes a good point being close to the sea the place will be cooler I live next to a beach so I know there's a big difference.Other than that jeez the nearest supermarket is eight miles away? And there is no KFC? But as @Canuk said Troy might fill the boredom

If Corbin's Dad really did have a coronary I wonder what his reaction would be sadly I bet it would be at best indifference. Don't misunderstand this as defending the Dad he's a-hole regardless but he is different with Zoe so it's a fair question did Corbin contribute to the bad situation

You know I just thought of something when Adam described how much Castro ejaculated it's a good thing he didn't give him a BJ

My first reaction is Sage is coming back to Earth.Sage and Brandon will cross paths I'm thinking. Sage will forget about Purity but perhaps the Puritans might underestimate something in their procedure .Maybe Sages memories and feelings for Adam are so strong that memory might come back.Then if Brandon figured it out perhaps Sam and Uni connections might have a plan.I don't blame anybody if you think I'm nuts but does someone have another thought? So imagine having someone you designed and is perfect looking and wants to please you sounds like heaven.Can Castro act human enough that Adam doesn't notice any difference maybe if Adam wants to go back to Earth he may want to take Castro with him. So Puritans only eat once every two decades that means no Pizza or taco shops are there.That sounds like Hell to me

Wow you didn't mess around with the family confrontation. Trent maybe shouldn't have shown up but Mark is far more responsible for what happened afterward.You could also argue Mark shouldn't have put on that charade in the first place.So the grand father has a beard down to his waist? ZZTop fan?

Why couldn't the down pour happen just before Alex dad was starting his rant? But it's better to know now that he's hopeless. Will Owen ever have to use that whistle? They didn't get Ian to delete the video did he also record them naked?I think I know what's going to happen.

Part of me is screaming for Corbin to ask Jean if he can move in with her but I know that can't happen because of the title of the story. Leah has identified the problem perfectly between her and Corbin yet they are still together.The one thing is no matter how flawed their relationship is it might still be better for her to go with them instead of staying with her drunk Mother. Corbin hasn't express any gay feelings but we've had hints that they are there did he possibly feel that way about Danny?

Well that sucks but statistically it makes perfect sense but you know something I would feel fortunate to have a friend like Karl.

This story holds up well. Glad I found it and you.

Did the Puritans program Castro to be attracted to Adam?If Castro is suppose to be copying human traits as Relshek said then fooling around with Sage isn't out of the question.

I thought for sure Dr. Singh was going to say who does that snot-nosed kid think he is?But later he supported J.J with his discussion with Daniel Weinstien. There was a lot of description on Shaun's appearance sometimes I read too much into things but that tells me he's going to play some kind of significant part in upcoming chapters just a hunch.

Oh man drugs that's totally bad news. I have no idea what Kyle can do.Two awful things come to mind killing Salvatore or selling your body and as terrible as those options are it may be better then keeping things as they are.What a mess

Does Corbin even know why he's been with Leah?She was making a very valid statement about Corbin's dad hurting him when Corbin abruptly cut her off I have to say he is doing her a disservice by continuing this relation. And his Dad with him in the picture it sounds like a tragedy waiting to happen. 5 chins? Are you serious?