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Here's what I think and I haven't read ahead so I'm probably wrong.Did the Scar still have enough resources to keep track of the General movements? If he did then I assume he knows about the General's son AND his contact with Helen .I think he arranged for the Son to be captured and anticipated the Generals need for mercenaries the Son's rescue might already be prearranged.I somehow see The General and his Son making Brandon and Chase wedding which means the Scar will follow.The Shadow will be at the wedding so that mean Joe would be there.Father and son cross paths and maybe circumstances will have Joe be the one to deliver the fatal blow to the Scar. I probably got all this wrong.If somebody who's read the story wants to tell me how much I got wrong feel free
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To use a military term although I'm not sure I'm using it right I see a SNAFU happening with the plan on using the charter plan something unforeseen will happen that gets Eric involved in this hope I'm wrong
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Pretty ambitious goal Rafe has there I can't even begin to think how he would go about this
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I assume you talking about the General but you can very well be talking about Eric...on anything he does
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When I first starting reading the other story I had thought The brothers and Brandon had the worst parents but needless to say it was Lump who had the worst parent but the gap between Jerry and J.T. is much narrower than I imagined. While it can't be as dangerous as what happened in the last story I get a felling General's plan for his son will have dangers of its own And I see the guys helping the General and being in that danger
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You know doing cliffhangers and then denying it is one thing but to have us think a loved character died at the end of the previous chapter only to find she didn't THATS EVIL. Our Author is brilliant and entertaining but still EVIL.But you know what? I love it
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No that wasn't a cliffhanger because C James says he doesn't do cliffhangers
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I implied something like this could happen but I didn't really believe it.
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I'm envisioning a scene in a upcoming chapter(remember this is me guessing so probably wrong) where Lump will similar to what people do in a 12 step AA program approach the guys and apologize for his actions.We are seeing gradual signs of him changing he might without intent say something about his father that will fill in some blanks in the guys mind. I agree with @NimirRajThe Scar killed Lump's mother
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Because they do their Jobs with so much humility
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Well we find out the bad guys are bigger POS then we realize.And the Morterero's are really dumb asses.Neil knows how evil they are does he know about this specific incident? The way Neil didn't want West to be snooping around makes me wonder if Neil thinks they are untouchable.I think their only chance is to set kind of trap for them but does a plan like that exists or is even possible
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If anybody deserves to be happy it's Dylan and Mark .I'm glad also for Sammy and Rob.Pierson followers act a lot like followers or another well known person I'll leave it there but I'm sure most of you know who I'm thinking of I know this was your first story on GA. Is this you're first story story overall? If it is I have to say the story reads like a more experienced author wrote it
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Can't wait to see what Jay's trick is when Loren shows up to one of his practice's.I'ts great how they are communicating.Interesting how Loren gets Jay to go back home for three weeks.I wonder if it's because of Loren's family or lack of family situation. I don't know what's harder to understand Aidan's baby talk or Loren's drunk talk but you have the way a person in that condition speaks down pat...Oh of course you would you've had conversations with Kbois. Like Loren I also am right about everything I thought I was wrong about something one time but I was mistaken
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Unfortunate Circumstances
weinerdog commented on C James's story chapter in Unfortunate Circumstances
When Brandon got the GPS he said "That was almost too easy" leads me to believe The Scar switched GPS's Eventually Helen or somebody will try to contact Adam when they realize the last time they saw him he was with Jerry that ought to make them go🤔 -
I have a hunch Brandon's impromptu flying lessons will come into play later .Since evil characters in these kinds of stories aren't conventional The Scar instead of just shooting them the Scar will instead maybe set a device to explode on the plane they are on and it could be a scenario where Brandon is the only possible person to fly the plane.This may sound nuts but there is a reason we saw Brandon learning some flying this chapter
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The Scar might also be good at reading situations.But maybes his case in his business being paranoid is his M.O. I'm also thinking Jerry will somehow use Lump's suicide attempt to his advantage so maybe the guys will hold off telling Helen anything after they find out about that
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One thing that would be cool to see is maybe the band have a conversation something like "That kid who sailed that yacht that was stripped by pirates is close by why don't we invite him to one of our shows"? One can dream
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If C James wrote that he would go from being in everybody's Top 5 authors to being on everybody's s--t list just like that.
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I agree about Jerry and the Scar being one and the same.As far why he would he need the kill the boys I guess there's a reason and C James will write it in a way that makes sense but hell if I know what that would be
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Yeah when Jim and his buddies were mentioned I thought about Altamont also but Jim is cool it's not like they hired THE Hells Angles like the Stones did. The part about Wilde not taking off his shirt had me thinking something along the same lines
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There's another great story that is still active that has a rock climbing accident in it I wonder if the authors know each other. BTW great gag with Jim
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The double take Zeke did when Wilde was mentioned probably says it all
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What was speculated on last chapter about someone figuring out Brandon's song I thought I detected a clue that it might be Zeke the lead singer of the Shadows it was subtle .
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All anyone needs to look at is this line " with only his intended recipient any the wiser, or so he mistakenly thought." could be a lot of possibilities someone in Brandon's past in the audience?Sleazey reporter? etc.
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That detail about what their Mother did just blew my mind.In a way what she did was more appalling then what he did. How come you need a license to drive a car or catch a fish but any unfit person can raise kids
