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Finally what everybody was waiting for when Corbin knock Don on his ass I swore I heard a lot of cheering from our readers and I'm miles away from all of them LOL. Don managed to alienate the whole town against him in such a short time.Waite is the perfect last name for him because he carries a lot of weight .I know that's nasty I couldn't resist. So Troy said he and Billy were not open about themselves while they were in town that they had to go out of town for quality time will it be that way with Corbin? Now it's times to tell Leah and although she has her faults she is getting a raw deal here.When Corbin does that he'll have to tell his mother and Zoe about it also I would think a lot of drama still to come

Oh my there is a lot say about this chapter but one name got my attention Dave Saunders is Corbin's Dad. I had to go back to chapter 6 to make sure of this Troy mentioned a guy his age named Billy SAUNDERS and he didn't want to talk about him which may imply that it was a relationship that gone bad for Troy.Are Dave and Billy Saunders father and son?IF so that could open a whole other can of worms

Marco is not stupid or naive so I guess he has a gut feeling about Ephraim. I get that Ephraim thought his family still owned the house and Marco putting him up was a decent thing to do but to invite to stay around so soon? Like I said must be a gut feeling .Plus Ephraim must be pretty hot maybe that's why after seeing him naked Marco asked him to stay LOL.

Everything is great.But me and my twisted mind thought of something he gave his parents a key to the house say one day in the future his car is at the shop being repaired and in the mean time he has his new BF over and they get frisky just then the parents come over thinking Marco isn't home they left themselves in and.....well you know. Okay you can ignore me now

All it took was three days of depression a huge meltdown and drinking himself into a drunken stupor for Corbin to admit having feelings for Troy. The mere fact Troy mention something about a deduction in pay tells Corbin that he still has a job and Corbin better consider staying with them for awhile

I get Corbin's Mother's fear of what going to happen to the family if the asshole is not around but the current situation can only end up in tragedy.Things are happening so fast that maybe there are options that they haven't thought of yet. Perhaps now Corbin could work full time for Jerry both as a trawler helping out Troy and the occasional painting gig Jerry finds for Corbin. Corbin might even be able to sell some of his paintings nowCan the mother mother work? Maybe even Leah if she decides to stay. I'm worried they might let the sperm donor go provided he submit to court ordered counseling.That might work if it was a case of he's a good guy most of the time who sometimes loses control but that won't work here.He's hated Corbin ever since he got into painting and hasn't been "manly" enough it's because of that I think that he'll never come around throw in a possible relationship between Corbin and Troy hoo boy.

Thank God Troy followed them although Troy saw the evidence the day before most 16,17 year olds would not have the thought to follow them like Troy did makes me wonder if Troy had a bully earlier in his life and it would explain why Troy took up boxing. If this was the U.S. there's a better then 50/50 chance that nothing happens to Corbin's sperm donor I don't know if it's different in England.Corbin may not want anything to happen because what's going to happen to his Mom and Zoe. I guess Jerry putting him up could be a solution butCorbin would miss the rest of the family maybe even Leah a little bit. Would Troy have pulled the trigger?I keep thinking hey asshole give him a reason to PLEASE!!!!

Everything is falling into place.Jimmy and Billy learned a life lesson think of all the possibilities before you make a deal.

On the surface Shaun seems be to be the perfect match for J.J. what can go wrong?Unfortunately in gay male fiction a lot.But I like these two as a couple .I would love to hang around these guys just to look at the eye candy and listen to the music they like.I wouldn't understand 10% percent of what they say but so what LOL.

It's one thing to be ignorant of the lifestyle and all it's nuances but when his dad talked about ruining his reputation he totally lost me and more importantly Alex.

Wow so much to say I'll try not ramble.First I'm really pissed off at Sage I was beginning to like him sure you do stuff on the street to survive but this wasn't that.It really shows how much Brandon loves his brother I picture this line when Adam and Brandon meet again "I took it in the ass for you.....literally." I don't think Moorabak really thinks Adam can run Purity but he was pragmatic he knew Adam could win the world vote.He might have planned for the planet to be run by committee and Adam would just a figurehead but as we see Adam already made some orders and Moorabak actually sort of agreed with one at least as far as we know now.I just wonder if Adam does something they see as overstepping how they'll react the Puritans I don't think are above corruption Debbie will probably think Brandon is ignoring her again LOL. I ask because I know very little about Great Britain but is there a place called Heidgate? Or one similar to it?

I get an eerie feeling this is the calm before the storm. I also have to wonder do you really ever get out from under a loan shark?Is Kyle figuring the interest right?

Did Marco have a vision?Is there something specific he has in mind for 5 acres that he hasn't revealed yet? Or maybe when the third guys a charm finally shows up in his life it will become apparent you can see I'm guessing here

Adam as Grand Master of Purity I don't think anybody saw that happening.Can you imagine Mr. Spock or Data from Star Trek saying "The fucking pad is white" ? So Brandon's parents made Debbie get an abortion. I remember when earlier in the story when they discussed the time they threw Adam out of the house the Father said "There is no place in God's heart for people of his kind." I wonder if that moron considered even for a millisecond that would there be a place in God's heart for people who force someone to get a abortion.

Out of the three Puritans that had plans to return Adam to Earth two of them Relshek and Commander Skada are dead so that mean the other one HAS to be alive for Adam to have any chance and if the Puritan is alive he'll need some help maybe the Commander of the Tomleek might help because Adam helped them. The hypnotizing of Sage should be interesting the professors might still be skeptical but I think if they examine Sage then they will see his eye is made with technology not of this Earth. BTW loved the line "You must be Sam, Fuck you"

This place is the ultimate fixer-upper. Those kids work fast I bet they will be around to help for other projects around the house

Shane's Mom winked at him when she handed him the phone so she knows. Let's see unbelievably happy this morning which his mom made note of and then changes clothes before Deme come over how can she not know? Hell a blind man might even know

I'm certain this thought has already been expressed before in the story or in these chapter comments but when Luke leaves for college he may never come back I know I wouldn't Cindy has to know that right?

Is there a range limit on their teleporting? I'm not the type that says kill people casually but after they find and get Tristan,Xander etc back I mean its time to terminate Senator Caruthers and I don't mean out of office.

I hope Troy told his Dad everything that went down before Corbin left including the hand print on his neck the Fact that Troy and Jerry helped look for him is a good sign that things may be OK with them.The painting Corbin did was an awesome gesture. So assuming Corbin goes out with his Dad I could see him trying to tell him about a good area to work from based on what Troy said and his Dad disregarding it.The part about being in a tanker lane yeah I can see his Dad doing that if that idiot can't even drive it the boat down the street(it was the roads fault) then you know he won't get out of the way of a tanker we should be so lucky as long as Corbin isn't on the boat when it happens

Sort of a tiny spoiler there about J.J's midwestern trip but all along I figured J.J. would reconnect in some way with people who have been kind to him on his journey Although it's not In J.J.'s nature to take revenge I would love to see when he becomes a billionaire for him to cross path with that jerk cop who left all J.J.'s stuff behind to get stolen

I'm probably going to use the wrong word here but you probably know what I'm referring to.Could he get some kind of antique appraiser to look at the furniture maybe something in there is valuable to someone

J.J. has come a long way from riding a bike cross country at the beginning of the story to purchasing a state of the art electric vehicle. Something I meant to mention last chapter you named that one guy Wang Chung???Really? I'm assuming that was intentional. I get the feeling at the party next chapter or whatever chapter the party happens that J.J. and Shaun will get closer .There's a reason why Shaun is still only wearing a speedo at work

Written just like a typical Star Trek episode everything looks hopeless until....we know Adam isn't going to die the story would be over then LOL. it was said that Sage would not remember anything at all at first but he remembered Adam wouldn't be there at the laundromat but he didn't know why is it possible The Puritan didn't do as complete of job as they were suppose to?Would Relshek have something to do with that? When Professor Colwell asked how many people knew about the bar Sam said just the four people there but that's not correct Fred knows about it I wonder if that will be relevant

Corbin seems fairly intelligent so I can see later at night replaying the conversation he and Troy had then a lightbulb pops on and he starts thinking.. oh.......OOOOH!!!!!