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I guess we'll find out more in the coming chapters but was the masterbation part of the process?Here's what I see while drumming at a gig with the band Owen is there and some guy flirts with him and Alex notices that while performing then gets jealous and turns into a fox on stage.Hey I had to throw that out there. Sounds like Alex is going to tell Owen about Sean should he? Oh and what story is he going to come up with to explain to his family and Owen as to where he was so long
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I so hope I'm wrong but it seems obvious what Jake is going to do.There's a story here no matter which way this goes but I'm going to guess only from the title of this story what Jake intends doesn't happen.This will bring up a lot of questions going forward but I'll wait to see what happens before bringing it up
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The Y where I grew up sure wasn't like that. But then I got into school sports and stopped going there ...maybe I shouldn't have🤔 LOL
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Friday, Saturday: Kayden
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Friday, Saturday: Kayden
Bravo to Kayden's Grandparents and pretty much the rest of the family except Mark.This turned out better than expected. Seeing that you're always open suggestions how's this for the epilogue Mark and Chase schedule a lunch meeting to talk what to do about Kayden and Trent while driving over in the same car they have an accident and die. I'm kidding but it would serve them right. -
Interesting I never thought of James as attention whore. Nice friendship scenes between Casper and James. I have one question for Peter if what happened to Jackie happen to him and what happen to Charlie happened to James would he have given up and say he's dead without finding a body? I bet not
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All that techno-babble talk while in the buff the whole time. What are the chances we can get @Altimexisto invite us over for lunch I would like to try some of these sandwiches I assume he makes them for himself
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A very good song writer used that as lyrics in a very good song and they definitely fit this situation
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Kyle has an idea how life with Matias could be if this drug thing wasn't hanging over his head. The only way out I see is if the police catch them and then make a deal with them but we shall see what the author has planned.
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I grew up in a military family so we moved quite a bit and I had to say goodbye to friends a lot but this totally different this is saying goodbye to a lifelong best friend and at least you would want to graduate where you lived all your life. The way your chapter ended it doesn't take much of a imagination what Jake is going to do next.If there is a negative reaction maybe moving would be a good thing but then there would be no story would there? What you call the tutor class sounds like what we yanks call homeroom
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I was thinking the same thing @travlbug was thinking that George was manipulating this but then you wrote in a reply that it could be Ben or Jake writing and that is a interesting though but I don't think you would suggest that if that was really the case in this story but it would be good. How cool is Ben Dad?Telling his Son about how the sheets show a certain kind of stain.Did he learn this from experience?
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Now that is doing something awesome with you lives.This is a rare story on GA in another sense in so many stories the Pastor is an evil fraud and that's proper there are a lot of them and they should be exposed but we we tend to forget the majority of them are not like that.You may disagree with a position a pastor take but if it come a place of good faith that you can live with that lucky for Marco and Ephriam this was a good pastor. Excellent story
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UreI knew Zoe would be really intelligent about this and a loving Sister I will say that I never came across someone that speaks like she does but I find it endearing. Troy is the perfect person to make this transition with everything in place Troy's supportive Father Corbins supportive sister and his Mother who while she needs time is determined to understand and come around bit most of all A-hole Don out of the picture.Any smart observers of this can't help but be optimistic about their future. Well well done
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Discounting the first two months or so while Marco and Ephraim were getting use to the new living arrangements it took them about 4 months to realize they both like each other? But it's all good now. Do the kids come over to mow the lawn or does Ephraim do it?
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Now it looks like Alex has a secret from Owen. I think he will eventually tell him but after how long?Owen is aware of the black cat and the black foxes so things might happen that will make him suspicious.What was the black cat/person motivation in all this?His human form tried to run down Owen and his cat form attacked Alex most likely because of his connection to Owen so is there something about Owen that we don't know about or maybe even Owen himself doesn't know about?
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Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Only You Can Set My Heart On Fire
During that conversation with Leah Corbin actually though Leah was going to hang around?He can be so thick sometimes but Leah could take one thing from that if Corbin didn't realize she was leaving for good then she knows that Corbin didn't realize he was gay. What almost became a disaster with Troy turnout to be something great.Now on to the conversation with Zoe and his Mother the part he should stress to them is is he really didn't know this about himself until a few days ago. -
It sure is one hell of a first date.Hey @chris191070Shaun mentioned that spotted dick in the UK do you know anything about that? The dessert I mean (ugh)
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When all is Text and Done
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in When all is Text and Done
"Sorry? You think I'm gonna tell you I'm sorry? You should be apologising to me. I haven't done anything wrong!" OMG how delusional can a person be?Oh and he watched videos before he tried to become a trawler hey I watched videos on YouTube on how to play certain songs on the guitar how one I'm not an kick-ass guitarist🙄 Maybe it's good that nosey Leah saw the texts God knows how long it would have taken Corbin to sort it out with Leah maybe he wouldn't have.I guess this would also force his hand in telling his family. So Jerry is going to assign two people to work the boat. Uh... Troy and Corbin I presume? -
Will the day come when West will tell Theresa about his suspicions about Bran? I might have it all wrong but it sounds like Malachi is going to be another bad guy it's subtle but that's the vibe I got
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Not any more forward then Ephraim being naked in the kitchen the first morning he was there
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You're in the toughest part of the story hang in there
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You have watching a show called Air Disasters and you're thinking of a way to put it in your story?...... Be afraid everyone be very afraid
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I'm trying to figure what Robbie's plan is going to be and what he thinks he can do without spilling Matthew's secret.The only thing I can think of is to maybe get the Pastor or Symmods to talk about it while Robbie records it on his phone but I'm sure the author has a better idea.Robbie is a good guy
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No you're correct he usually does post on Tuesday but one time he posted on Wednesday one time there was a two week gap I figured he was on vacation or something and although I don't read ahead on The Mustard Jar because it might influence my chapter comment I sometimes look there to see if he posted a new chapter there that usually means that a new chapter is on GA the same day but last week he posted that a day apart it like he thinking "Oh so they think they know when I'm going to post eh?(evil laugh)"
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I was reading a new chapter from another good story from @James Matthews when you and @Ronyxposted new chapters at almost the same time I had no idea what to do or where to go you two are evil LOL. Great chapter though
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In a couple of days Matt got through to two troubled kids one who is small and very passive another who is very big, loud ,and angry two very different type of kids but Matt managed both situations very well Trent and Mr. London has to have notice that maybe Matt has found what he can do with his life. Trent mentioned the court wants to put Hayden in a foster home I hope Ricky's dad is registered as a foster family but I guess that would be too much of a happy coincidence. Stephanie seems to be on the level but one thing for Matt to consider is Stephanie being a good through journalist might want to contact Matt's parents for the story.I know... I think too much LOL.
