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If you stop the story because of that then Jjeffalch will be needing a security detail.

Here's my take I don't see a way out of this......But C James does😄

As far as I can tell the story didn't say what part of the country this is taking place in but it doesn't sound too far removed from what the Deep South was like in the 50's the only thing that is missing is the white only drinking fountains.Parker said all the comment agree with what Andrews did the people who commented was most likely people who knows Parker and go to Somerset I hope this is a case of after the first comments other kids were afraid to say anything different because of peer pressure that would still be very bad but at least there is a chance that not all of Somerset high thinks like that. They don't need Parker's phone for evidence the video has already gone viral and Chief Morgan has to know that by now. I'm afraid the reason they want it might not be good for Parker.Morgan has already tried a line of BS trying to whitewash this on Parker's dad but he was having none of it.Kudos to Parker's Dad BTW. You have to wonder there have been so many incidents caught on smartphones you think an officer would think of that when before they do something like this.I have a friend who used to work in law enforcement in California and he told be the department had procedures and tests to try to weed out people like this before they even get to the academy .Well it doesn't seem to be working all the departments all over the country have to reconsider what they are doing wrong in hiring people because clearly they are. Ron has said there is a romance story weaved into this.It's safe to assume the couple will be Darius and Parker.What will be interesting is Parker's friends who don't have that much of a problem with him being gay might all of a sudden have a problem that his BF is black and I bet they won't even see how that is a contradiction. Sorry another long comment but it's hard not to on this topic

Why do I think the next person you know that will have a baby added to their family there will then be a custom made order for one of those?

What an adorable chapter you described things with Aido potato perfectly I can't add anything to that. I'm am curious how Seamus will react when he's told how Aidan took to Lowen er...Loren. When Seamus brought up how Loren acted at the championship game and of course Jay wasn't at liberty to talk about it has me wondering is this something Loren would one day post about? I'm so looking forward to how that part of the story plays out "I take a calming breath so as to not show my cards." “Doesn’t matter. I will quit my job if that’s what it takes.” That was really smooth.👌Hey Jay some buddies and I are starting a poker game Interested?

With Bridget using Julie the way she did in the past she is always thinking three steps ahead.Which made me think Bridget's previous plans have failed @Daddydavekconcern that Grey might get off Scott free might not turn out that way Bridget probably made arrangements on how to keep tabs on Grey should he fail.You don't take Bridget money and not do the job which I suspect Gray will find out

My thoughts are very similar to what has already been mentioned about being Milo's kid.I'm happy Milo is functioning well I'm curious if there is something we still don't know yet we are assuming Milo can walk but maybe he has limitations but is making the most of them the gym they own might be part of that. I doubt this the last we see of Finn so how is the next meeting going to happen?Another crossing paths?Or will Alec actually be the one who seeks out Finn out say maybe at the gym.This would be Alec taking the initiative between the two for perhaps the first time. Alec must have been really young when his Mother has breast cancer the first time as smart as he is you would think he would have notice something was wrong. You have to wonder if he had been told about it would the family dynamic have been different.

Andre has a really nice family. It's Funny every story TV show or movie that has a character in it that's really bad ass like Rafe there are always some bully like idiots that want to mess with them.This inbred trio will find out the hard way you don't mess with Rafe

I have heard some horror stories about the leeway FPS has in some states and if you have an ignorant incompetent person like the one in this chapter in charge things like this can happen. As far as the letter they got from the law firm my first reaction is I bet bet the kids don't even know him and he probably wants control of the assets including the house that is suppose to be Ruths.I bet Mrs. Priestly will try to get involved in that also.

Mattyboy mentioned nothing going wrong for two weeks.Now he has me thinking something will go wrong and it will probably have Max name on it.Or maybe Max dad is more sick then he realizes I hope I'm wrong

And that's why @kbois said "delete that line" So you would do the opposite

What did you mean by no new content? I'm guessing you meant we are still on the aftermath of the accident. So far Jay has been perfect now the question is what if something happens when Jay is playing football and he isn't there when it happens and then of course there will be the next time Loe will want to go rock climbing. Can't wait to see Matt next chapter so to speak. I had to laugh when Loe acknowledged that he had to eat and Jay said he was going to make oatmeal I had the Oliver Twist image in my head and sure enough you made the Oliver Twist reference😄 ( I bet Kbois will take credit for it)

Things are escalating now.Whatever Zack's manipulation needs are its looks likes he's getting Trevor to be the same way and we can see him doing that to someone else in the future

I'm curious on how many reader would agree the space travelers would assimilate so easily.I think if you put people in our present time in a situation like that they would go nuts without a smartphone.You think any of the GA readers could all of a sudden stop reading stories by people like Dabeagle,Ronyx or Drsawzall? Kidding on that part I guess the journals plus meeting with Mithras directly did a lot to help them. Would yet another ship be sent to find out what happened something you may want to consider for a future story.Thank you for a great story

I might be banished from the C James community for saying this but as fantastic of a story as this one is I liked Let the Music Play better.I hope I don't have to dodge tomatoes now

said the person who has extra mango habanero whiskey to send

With the doppler radar I would hope you could at least see an outside chance of something like that happening.I have a feeling the Pastor is going to be clueless as to what to do. Most likely it will be unwise to take the trip not that the Pastor would know. Robbie and Daniel will sure have one thing wrong this trip won't nearly be a boring as they thought ..terrifying maybe but not boring.But one part of the plan will be right Rory will definitely be distracted from just being dumped.

Justine parents showed how clueless they were when they thought Bible study camp would solve the problem falling asleep in church should have been a red flag. I'm certain West and Neil wore jock straps during their game otherwise it would have been strange to the crowd if they noticed tents in their shorts

Excellent chapter.I have an example of police profiling that while it was far less serious then the one described in this chapter and the ones we hear about in the news it was still profiling IMO.In my younger days there was a period of 3-4 years where I drove a couple of real junky cars they looked like the dirt was holding it intact .During that time I seemed to get stopped for something every month the reasons were varied like something was wrong with the car light flickering etc.a few time I was driving little fast(never got a ticket) once I got a fix-it notice for worn back tires none of my friends agreed with that assessment there was one extreme time I was questioned for about 20 min. and kept being asked "are you sure"?What was the point?I'm certain is was so they could take my drivers and check for warrants .They never found any. Finally I bought a nice looking used car from a friend who was getting a new one and then later I moved back home to help my step dad who had a severe stroke and needed help with everything and I was driving his nice looking car to go shopping for him or take him to appointments .Guess what? All of a sudden I wasn't getting stopped any more was I all of a sudden a better driver?It's hard not to think when I was driving the clunkers that they didn't look at my cars and think oh look at that poor trash I bet he's wanted for something.IMO profiling does exist and I get why black people are angry and why BLM exists. Sorry for the long windedness I actually could have said more.

How Jay handles this will be critical.He has the entire flight to think it through. I have to admit if he asked for advice I would have no idea what to say. The part of the directions that said ‘some mild discomfort’ what sadist wrote THAT!!!!😧

Sounds like Jan going to convince Andre to go with Rafe. I was amused to hear they have a TV there.Do they have their own programming🤔can it be found On YouTube? Or do they watch the same crap we watch 😄

I just got the first notification on this just a few minutes ago for chapter 2 I had no idea this story existed. I thought GA fixed the bug I guess not .After deciphering the accent dialog I fine this interesting.

Rafe taking on three opponents shooting missiles at him?Wow he is one bad ass.It's apparent that Andre is more then a friend to Rafe in this world how are same gender relationships viewed?

As @Clancy59said the purging was most likely his mother's idea.One key question was the stuff thrown way?Or is it in a box somewhere?That would fill in the blanks on a lot of things. I was thinking the entire time they were in the bar why check into a hotel 20 minutes away and then go to bar in town.You might think what are the chances of seeing Finn at random like that but it's a small boring town where else would somebody who lives there go? So very interesting chapter ahead I'm sure Finn and Alec may want to talk in private will they go somewhere while River stays in the bar? I'm thinking Finn might be the influence for Alec to go see his mother because it certainly looked like Alec was leaning against doing that before Finn arrived.

This chapter was the definition of tearjerker.One huge burden Belle didn't have to deal with is she know that all her great friends will be there for her children.As far as I can remember nothing has been mentioned about it but it should be interesting what Belle requested on behalf of her kids in her will or trust.