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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    Those must be kids pajamas
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    This place definitely it has a small town feel to it with Anna bringing a extra hamburger and Mr. Thomas calling the grandparents to br prepared for a guest Jim must be very well liked in town.
  3. weinerdog

    Risoluto

    That's one part of Zoltan's plan I don't get.I'm sure he didn't tell Gus that he can't see Rick even if Zoltan has some kind of leverage on Gus no way would Gus take that.I have to assume Zoltan will think Gus will contact Rick on his own and Rick would say they can't see each other anymore.If Rick doesn't do what Zoltan wants him to do well he probably has a plan for that. After he finds out the blackmail didn't work Zoltan most likely handles Gus finances I could see him using that in a way where Gus would have stay with them.Is this where Debbie Beck comes in? Perfect kind of Karma. Willy's way out of the hole he put himself in was foiled by the person he raped. BTW can Heinrich still afford to fly into town?Maybe a bus trip?🤔
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 20

    Brian's thinking is even more off than Davey's mothers.I don't know what Brian thinks he could have done anyway even if he brought back the recipe for the AIDS cocktail treatment they do today it most likely was too late. Davey and The President are in agreement on not building but the way events are going to happen is going to determine whether they would do that or not maybe Bush later on might want to.
  5. The only way what Caleb said makes any kind of sense is he thought Casper was dangerous but how did he come to that initial conclusion?Of course he would think twice about that anyway now after he found out if he does anything to James he would have a PO'd Tasha to deal with. Is this how kids make friends these days “Hey, guys! This is Casper. He’s a doof. Can we friend him?” Interesting.
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 19

    Now that I think about it The government would do that if for no other reason is that they would be afraid Russia and China would
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    When I came across the line "She said that wasn't going to happen because my dad wouldn't let it" I took that to mean it was his Grandparents but if it's her side of the family even worse
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Well obviously his Mother's reaction was horrible but then to call her husband's parents not her parents which would have been bad enough but her husband's family to tell them not to let their Grandson stay with them is just the hight of arrogance
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    Good story.This is no big deal but the only thing I would have done different is to reveal the words she written and if it said the father knew. Thank you.
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 19

    Can't say I'm at all surprised at Davey's Mom reaction and although her reasoning is flawed it is certainly understandable.But I get a feeling this will never get resolved in this lifeline she won't ever let this go. I"m also not surprised Sean came back from 2004.So many many things have gone wrong in this lifeline that if they had the chance go back a third time they would take it. I mentioned this because maybe Sean from 2004 had observed enough to maybe try to build another one of the invention they would only do that if armageddon or something close to that happens but seeing how things are going they might have to try. Another thing Sean said about how the guys in Modesto acted toward him it looks like not only Brian but Trevor and Brandon are also different as a result of not having met Davey earlier.
  11. Well it's a good thing they had the talk.Matt and Aidan needing time with Brad well you can't argue with that.I have no experience in this but what is the proper etiquette here how much visiting by would be too little or too much? I understand Matt wondering what if it doesn't work out with Seamus but I'm not sure he should have expressed it in those words to Seamus.I think it would have better if he said what if something happens to my dad instead
  12. You just had to let everyone know @kbois was wrong didn't you
  13. Wow I knew Hideyoshi was a bad ass but wow the was they handled Lewis really brought that point home. My first reaction is Lewis will find out it's Father he finds and since he has worked for Father might be conflicted .This would set up a Hideyoshi vs. Father showdown. Or I have it all wrong and everything I just wrote is invalid LOL Now that Peter told James about stress bringing out powers will he on his own make the connection that's what happened to Casper?
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    David mentioned Alex making unbelievable noises.I hope nobody on the crew is a fink and tells the King.I know David said there was no protocol but on the yacht while it's at sea who's the boss David or the Captain.As far as those rules and laws go imperfect humans made those laws so why can't humans change them?
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    Wow all these rules about marrying into a Monarchy are these based on what other countries like England did way back when?
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    Chapter 18

    Wow this lifeline is worst then his first lifeline at least in his first lifeline his relatives died in conventional ways.I was so worried it was going to go down like this and in a otherwise very good story you can say it was unrealistic that the military and intelligence community didn't understand this well enough. It has been brought up a little by other readers like @NimirRajin the last chapter comments.Davey is excited by Brian coming but he more than anybody else should understand there's a chance this won't be the same Brian. I remember in Do Over Davey saying Brian had been a borderline bully in this timeline Brian doesn't have the advantage of meeting Davey when he did so his personal maturation process may not be the same.
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    Chapter 36

    I was anticipating Zack turning in the assignment to Mr.Raffe but this was good the first day with his friends after Zack's being gay was out in the open.And Adam and Sam showed that they are real friends. Zack still has a few things wrong he mentions being worried about about incriminating himself in that assignment as if he did something wrong.Zack you did nothing wrong your POS Dad did
  18. Hideyoshi said to James something about keeping the crime fighting to themselves is that a good idea?Also James and Casper keeping secrets I think they both proved they could trust each other so what's up with that?
  19. Philip's Dad knows a lot of people.What would be cool is when they raid Farmers place they find some stuff on Sturgis.Thanks for the cool video
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    George already knows what's up😝Brilliant telling his mom he doesn't want to sleep with Alexandra until after marrying her.So all that time around Alex won't look suspicious
  21. Very complicated relationship.Somewhat like a older sibling relationship he messes with you but nobody else can.
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    Well the condition that she has to get pregnant within 4 years makes this a little complicated.There has been people who has married and had kids only to later say they are gay so I guess it is possible.As long as Alex and Alexandra are OK with it.What if it was found out David wasn't capable of having kids for a medical reason what would The King do then?If they have a plan for that scenario maybe they could pretend that's the case.Sorry you're the writer here and I am trying to write it LOL.Interesting to see what happens
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    Chapter 17

    The mere fact that they had to contact Davey even though it would mean that it would be in front of his classmates and his teacher tells us that this is very serious .Combine that with they have not located the Chinese time traveler is not good at all. It almost seems like Davey's Mom would rather be proven right instead of something bad not happening.
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    You say the plot thickens.This sounds like to me the King and Queen might figure out David's scheme
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    Jonathan writing about the stuff he writes might be influenced by what he witnessed Ethan doing for him.I'm surprised he would still use old physical copies of newspapers instead of the internet for research. Does Micheal have the same boy crush on Ethan Jonathan had?What else would explain M's reaction to Jonathan?It could be more like he's worried about losing a big brother.He seems to have a self esteem problem because of his Dad. Speaking of Dads this is the first time Ethan's was mentioned .That dream he had explains a lot. Reyna was quick to read Ethan the riot act that tells me she thinks this thing with Ethan and Jonathan could be serious
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