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Chapter 93 The Worst Kept Secret
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 93 The Worst Kept Secret
Everybody pretty much covered how I reacted.I Don't think this is a good idea on a couple of levels -
I was kidding before Lol. Seriously there are a number of ways to interpret that.Is Hunter dead?Or was he someone else using that body .Jillian said welcome home implying that he existed way back then.Am I even close?
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Yea I'm first I beat @Wesley8890yea ....oh you want a comment on the chapter?.......Gee I was so focused on being first ...I don't know ....
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Chapter 89 The Invincibles
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 89 The Invincibles
How can you not love Jamie.The next time Robbie visits Jamie I hope he takes Rory with him also it was Rory that got Robbie to start thinking that way. -
Chapter 88 Throwing Your Life Away
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 88 Throwing Your Life Away
Daniel saying what he said to Robbie came at the right time any down side to the adoption is overshadowed by gaining Daniel as a brother.It was mentioned that Daniel used to change clothes in front of Nathan and now after he finds out Robbie is gay continues to do so in front of Robbie.I wonder if he does so because part of him is flattered. I at times would take three Tylenol and it always did the trick.The one concern I have here would be is it a residual affect from the fall down the stairs? -
Interesting get together.When Don implied that Robbie is too young to know he's gay some one should have asked if he knew he was straight when he was 15
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I assume a lot of the students stay at the Academy over the weekend even the wealthy families most likely don't fly them home every weekend.So when I think of them being there and the previous Administration sealed off the swimming pool something the kids sure could have used during the weekend it makes me despise them even more.Johnny enjoying his time at the cabin made me think of that
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Nathan's parents completely disregarding Don and Sue's conditions would usually be a wrong thing to do.But I think they see in this case trying to monitor every move they make will be worse.We find out that Nathan's family noticed how Nathan has changed for the positive since being with Robbie and that's what is guiding their decision.
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They wanted Adam to resign to teach these seminars in Europe?If they want to learn this they should come to him if they want this so bad. Adam needs some of these people to go through this seminar first and then apply it to their place of employment first before even thinking of leaving the academy.By then maybe somebody with experience teaching Adam's methods could replace him.But I could also see Adam never leaving that place
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Everybody the librarian,Robbie ,Ricky and his parents looked at Matt's eye and thought he should have had a doctor look at it everybody except his Father.How is it OK not to have your injury looked at?What if Matt broke his leg while trying to help Charles would daddy dearest say he broke it helping "one of them" it's God's will?Sounds like a dumb question to ask if Matt's father would have taken him to hospital then but now I'm not so sure.
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I'm surprised there were two chapters in one sort to speak.Maybe that was suppose to happen in the previous chapter when the same chapter repeated. I'm glad Mika died happy but it was all a lie so do the ends justify the means? I'm still not convinced the Soviets didn't know Brian wasn't meeting with Mr. Rush when he would go back to Modesto so is there going to be one more tense threatening moment before It's all over?
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The one thing I was relieved about is Daniel's text showed while he had issues with how things went down it wasn't about Robbie being in and of itself gay and he does care for him.We still need to know a few more details from him. The more we hear about how Alex lives the more it looks like it is not going to end well at that house
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Chapter 67 Crying for Robbie
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 67 Crying for Robbie
What Rory did with the kid reminded me of when My mom was in the hospital I visited daily and I noticed her roommate an elderly person never seemed to have visitors we have an somewhat large extended family and other's notice the person lack of visitors one day my with a lot of us there my Aunt went to talk with her after about a half an hour I went over there to join them I found her to be very engaging.For the rest of my Mom's stay I would go to her bed and talk for about 15 minutes.What Rory did was gold. -
Chapter 51 Two Sides of Nicola
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 51 Two Sides of Nicola
Despite the tense relationship Robbie and Nicola have I guess Nicola does on some level consider him family so while she has her issues with Robbie she still has that you F with someone from my family then you are F-ing with me mind set -
Another good chapter. Billy did 6 hours of driving to get Johnny that's a pretty good friend.
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Thurs, Fri: Kayden and Trent
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Thurs, Fri: Kayden and Trent
Well as difficult as it is to imagine Jacob shot to the front of the line as the biggest POS in the story. I was worried Trent was going to go overboard and possibly beat Jacob to death.I hope they consider getting Kayden some help after going through that. -
As I write this review five other readers already have reviewed this and they have covered all the great stuff in this story and there is nothing I can add to that .So instead I'll write about the flaws in this story........Yep that's right absolutely none in this story.Highly recommended
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Good start the story. The comment Ethan overheard "I'm not sure how much more his butt can take" I sure hope they were referring to using the paddle for punishment although I'm not a fan of that.If it's the other possibility well I don't want to think of that. I wonder how the John Wayne/Marion Morrison reference fits
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Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
Congrats on a great 5 star story ❤ Of course the epilogue had to be 4 years later if it was 5 years later then Carson would be in the terrible twos and that would have took 5 more chapters. Congrats again- 79 comments
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Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
The old line parents say to their kids when they go out and leave the kids alone "Don't burn the house down " Wasn't a joke in your house- 79 comments
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Hey suggest something to Adam because I'm sure the previous administration didn't do this have one of the newly discovered rooms double as a place where the kids can watch movies since they are living there
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Verakov is just a guy who wants to possibly be reunited with a long lost son his official duties should not be of any interest to the CIA.There has to be another reason that Brian and Davey are there one they haven't been told about yet otherwise I don't see it
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Chapter 45 Date Night Part 2
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 45 Date Night Part 2
The above comment about putting Nicola in the same category as the boy at the cinema (who briefly dated Nicola) made me think if Nicola has been unduly influenced by her Dad. I think even before the parents they both together should tell Daniel first. Congrats Robbie you didn't screw this one up a first date both should look back on with fondness -
Chapter 44 Date Night Part 1
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 44 Date Night Part 1
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Their questions about a bi-monthly AMBER alert while that is odd the implication is they are bogus what would be the motivation to put out false AMBER alerts?
