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Tinkle????That's a new one.Of course Jamie will get as big as Ja-wack-sin you've heard of The tinkle down theory Oh wait that's something else. Never mind
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I live in Socal and we have places here called Giant N.Y. Pizza and also some called The Bronx Pizza s if it was a big deal.I've heard it said New Yorker and Chicagoans will get in huge arguments about who's pizza is better.I'm a deep dish Chicago man myself
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Hunter sure has some colorful words to describe his town. Wayyyy back when I was a freshman I didn't speak like that but I had plenty of friends who did.I could could definitely picture @Wesley8890 speaking like that as a freshman did he write the opening part of this chapter by any chance? My first reaction is Hunter with his working on the ranch and Jaime with his tragic family history haven't made all that many friends in their life outside of being in school.They sure clicked pretty quick.Love the start of the story a lot.
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Really happy Andy found a BF.
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My Step dad would have told Jeff and his friends 'Aren't you a little old to be trick or treatin?"Kiddingly of course.I love that Andy's there a lot but doesn't he have friends?A Or are they in a secluded area.The trip to New York sounds like fun.Sadly this year they may not have the Time Square event.
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What are they going to do with that bedroom?If they make it Jeff's then Jeff and Nancy Jean and Alan and Cody will probably hear each other hope the walls are thick.
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Sorry for taking so long to reply I had to clean my monitor after the mannish comment.Note to self don't drink coffee while reading these chapters.Almost did it again with Helen Waite. I remember Jack and Tracy telling the story about how Helen caught them.I don't remember but I guess Jackson wasn't here for that because Helen told him the same story. Helen is coming around and that'a awesome but make sure she's not drinking coffee when they tell her how her great grandkid were conceived
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Very good chapter.I don't want to be a dark cloud here but I wonder how Andy's Dad will find out about his son .There is no indication that it will be a problem.Does Jeff know?
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Helen sure knows how to brighten a room. She should be a guest on Dr Phil.I would love to hear ask her after she tell him how she approaches the situation "Well how's that working for you?".Otherwise very good start.
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Gee Thanks a lot @Wesley8890
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Awesome gift although I will say Alan should have spoke to Andy's folks beforehand I can imagine some parents being worried.Although Andy seems like a smart enough kid to have it.
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Just found you and this story love what I'm reading so far.I'm wondering how Zeke and his partner knew the killer was at Tyler's house apparently too late to stop the killing.
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If they buy the Lodge and Cody runs it I think I know who their first hire will be
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Giving us that image of Lucas from Stranger Things made the HJ more interesting.The Band Def Leppard has a one armed drummer I think the equipment needed would be too costly to even borrow for a short time.I'm worried that the replacement drummer(Alex?) might be better and the bandmates won't be loyal to Owen.I also wonder if that hit and run wasn't on purpose
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Andy was going to around a lot anyway but now he'll think of even more reasons to show up just to drive the ATV.Did Andy tell Cody about himself?Hey a little milestone for you last chapter I think it was the first time you had a page 2 for chapter comments.
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I don't know how to describe this story.I don't think you would believe me if I tried.But what I will say that it'a a lot of fun just work extra hard to suspend reality if I say any more than that I will be giving too much away.If you haven't read any of Aquarius Guy's other stories I urge to do so first.To this reader this story looks like it is laying the groundwork for his next story which in my humble opinion promises to be good.
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So JC ERR!!!!...Jackson.I just thought I'd be the first to do that.Grandpa Ron said"I bet; having children will do that to you."He said that like he's had personal experience is there something you're not telling us about him🤔I'm so glad none of the names are Donald(no offense to any normal people named Donald)Looking forward to the next story
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From what?Thinking up all the names?
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Let's all of us visit Alan's place he'll have enough food for us.I'm glad Andy had Alan to talk to.
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🥁da dit boom
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Seven kids???? Jeez what did JC and TJ ever do to you??I would have trouble remembering all the names.When TJ said '"Oh shit" upon hearing about JC getting triplets I think that might be the universal reaction of all parents finding out they're having triplets.Interesting times ahead.
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I sort of knew Andy was going to be hanging aroud a lot.Is he going to bring his friends?The Lodge sounds like an interesting idea but what do they know about running one
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I never had one like that but it sounds great I want to go get one now.Damn you lol
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I'm guessing Willy was aware Rick was sheltered and basically a loner maybe even asked Jerry about him he may have premeditated this before the fourth of July event.Going to find out a lot of interesting things in future chapters like who else knows or knew about this what was the fall out and most importantly where is Willy these days
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An example of Cody's character he could move in and live off of Alan but he can't bring himself to do so.Maybe he'll find something he really enjoys(besides Alan of course)
