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Well this was one thing the Davey and the military didn't want to have happen.His three friend clearly heard Davey say Mr. President and his friend David will remember the "joke" phone call from the morning.Trying to come up with a lie on the spot will most likely have too many holes in it.So I think Davey will try to go with a version of the truth but where do you start?In past chapter comments I said they can't account for everything here they couldn't even account for there being two Davids in the hotel room. Veeeery interesting conversation coming up to say the least
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I wonder what West motivation is .I would be inclined to think more like Kasper but that's me so it may not be good. It sounds like West is the level headed one of the group
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Well they talked but it sounds like there are still issues.The story Jay told Matt about Kelley explains some things.Regardless Matt hanging with that guy for 45 minutes is another sign Matt can be clueless.
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Okay chalk this up to me not being able to figure out the obvious.Who was the person that approached Caleb?I thought it could have been Tasha but it wasn't.Caleb called him pretty boy and pretty boy said "my Casper" so there is something I didn't get. Can somebody tell me? Caleb could feel the power coming from James and family at first he didn't think James was one of them.One thing that hasn't been mentioned one way or another is does Sarah have power or is she just a mortal who married into this.
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I'm worried that this meeting at the pizza place place will set off a chain of events.There could be a innocent remark made that tells Karl and Carlos they know about Farmer.And the guys Farmer uses a seem to be fiercely loyal to him. The irony is the kids Farmer has would be the kind of kids Philip has had he met them when they were younger.
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Pete likes and trust Jim but doesn't want to be adopted.Does he have reason to believe his folks are still alive? Interesting that you made Jim asexual I only seen one other story on GA that talks about that although I'm sure there are more.That's a topic that should be talked about more
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Home schooling is good idea at least at first.Isn't Jim sort of jumping the gun?Referring himself to the kids as their new father I'm sure his lawyer will figure it out but you never know when you're dealing with the government. @drsawzall referred to this in the last chapter comments but I would think Jim would have already asked Pete if his grandparents owned the house.Of course Lenny may already know that.If that's the case Jim would sure know what to do with it to help the kids future
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Talk about temptation.If this happened in his original lifeline you know how it would have ended up. With this development I now think that some way friends from this lifeline and the previous one are going to meet each other the bad of that is the only way my limited mind can figure how it would happen is if something very, very serious happens which would bring the adult Sean in the other lifeline to travel back to his teenage version of himself in this lifeline.Sorry if what I'm writing is a mess I'm confusing myself also.
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Team Building, Detective Work and Fieldcraft
weinerdog commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Team Building, Detective Work and Fieldcraft
Were Farmer and David Wayne Allen partners of some kind?It's possible Farmer didn't know about the killings so he dealt with Allen. Tyrone tipping off Farmer probably gives Farmer a chance to do harm to Philip he otherwise wouldn't have had -
That man that came to get Pete and Joey told Joey to shut up what an ass. I wonder if the the Grandparents owned the property where they stayed.
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Sounds like Father knew where Casper was going to be.Casper didn't tell Freja and Mel about Father if he had wound this confrontation been avoided .We don't know if Mel and Freja are an ally or foe of Father. Sarah knew the right thing to say to Casper .Peter on the other hand seemed clueless saying "I haven't done anything to earn that from you. Surely he's smart enough to know that Casper or any kid would think that adults would close rank.I just hope they get to Casper before Father does.I can see a reason where James might have to go into fly mode despite his parents being there to witness it. Then the cat will be out of the bag.
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There was no explanation on how the three died combine that with no contact from them over the years I'm thinking evil scheme witch involves faking their death
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Since it was a Ricky Ricardo voice it should have been:: They got some "splaining" to do.If you weren't the author you would get a couple of demerits
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Thank youNice touch about the boy hanging with Scott.Happy Easter
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I figured Davy could handle himself in P.E but I wasn't expecting that.Cool. The way he talks about the twins makes me think something may happen. Not a good sign that the CIA is making no progress on the Chinese time traveler.Worst case situation could happen if this continues
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That was great thinking by Scott to make sure Nonna and Pa visits the village one last time before it's too late
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Like the other readers here unless Casper calls how is James phone going to help Peter.Could there be something special installed in the phone that could help find Casper? Yeah Bex is annoying but be fair if James made good pancakes I might wake him up and say"paaaancaaaakes" also lol
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What @chris191070said. It sounds like it's impossible not to fall in love with Angelina
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I found it. It wasn't someone named Caleb that spoke to Casper it was Alister gee at least that was close🙄I'm too young to be getting senile
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We know Davey is in good shape with his morning runs and workouts and he has two previous lifetimes in the military I'm sure he learned some stuff so I'm thinking he won't be a pushover in the P.E. class which would get Dr. Bitner even more mad.
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"I signed that before I knew what you were going to say." This guy is responsible for the educational curriculum at the school and he doesn't even read the document before he signs it.🙄The man is a genius I tell you
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Can't wait for the explanation on why he apparently woke up not being a vampire.I have some lame ideas like somehow he got into a wormhole to an alternate universe?Is Noah still a vampire?He'll be going to school not even knowing what classroom to go to.This is fascinating. The best thing about starting a new @Comicalitystory is to see the picture on the chapter page of the latest gorgeous kid he found and this one didn't disappoint
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You're beginning to need a scorecard to keep up with all the new characters. Until they started talking age I thought Caleb was 20ish. But I remembered something I did a quick look but there were too many chapters to go though didn't Caleb briefly speak to Casper at The Family headquarters anybody remember that?
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Men. They are un-understandable
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Men. They are un-understandable
Some readers are saying Matt is being oblivious and he has been but you can also argue that Seamus might have been making assumptions. Matt never indicated that he was planning on staying there permanently one could even argue it would have been arrogant of him to do so. Being men and being un-understanable is difficult enough it's worse when both of them don't communicate. Is Matt using Kase or vice versa. It's been a dry spell for me think Matt will let me borrow Aidan?Kidding- 37 comments
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How close is it to school time for Angelina?Everyone should speak to her in English
