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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Thank you nice story.So they might adopt kids?Let me tell you something there were a number of times we had two dachshunds at the same time.Having three Greyhounds will be a lot like having little kids.
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    Chapter 9

    Awesome how things are turning out for Matt and Donnie. I hope the house and the cottage is fenced in because if Flash should get spooked by something and runs off your going to have a tough time trying to catch a greyhound.
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Glad Tim and Lou became part of the group.The only thing about this story that is to fathom is the obvious double standard with Dave and Angie.Except for the possibility of an unwanted pregnancy it should have been no difference.
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Oh wow I just noticed I was comment #13 I'm not superstitious but we can't have that so this is comment #14
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 10

    Another excellent story to the @Geron Kees catalog thank you😀.I do have a thought here a lot of times when a popular TV show adds a new character and it turns out people say as soon as they put that new guy in it went all downhill but I have a very good feeling about Horace.Let also be sure to visit Annie,Moped and Mrs. Ravishaw in the future.
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    If you said lawyers with principles THEN that would be something
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 9

    Well this chapter almost made it sound like everything is wrapped up but there is still another chapter to go it will be interesting to see what's yet to happen.Near the end of the chapter trick or treaters were mentioned as usual I got more candy then I needed.Then someone told me that this year (In San Diego) it was recommended that nobody takes their kids out trick or treating and guess what NOBODY came by this year did any of you have the same experience where you are at?
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    It won't be long?Grounded for four weeks for a teenager that's forever. Matt's comment about Mrs. Chase not saying anything makes me wonder if there is another shoe to drop(Yeesh wrong expression)This is just conjecture but which sibling is older?Is one of them an accident?
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Interesting world Charlie went to.If I didn't know better I would think you took a mind altering drug and started writing.Can't wait for the conversation in the kitchen
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    Real smooth explanation Donnie LOL. I didn't know You Tube had those kind of videos.I knew they had videos of Breast cancer and circumcisions but I would think video's of what Matt watched would not meet their guidelines.
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    No THEY would reading your story and our comments so lets not give them any clues
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    Actually now that I think about it ,It sounds like a Scooby-Doo episode "Damn Kids"
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    If the thought was Lou might be gay because he's sitting alone that would be quite a reach .But it was still a cool thing to do and the fact that he was cute didn't hurt.
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    I'll add another one that is probably not the case .The device and the piano note was caused by somebody who wants people to think the place is haunted. They want to buy the house for even a cheaper price. Maybe Mrs.Viggerol is in on it.OK I put it out there go ahead and call me a nut
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    Chapter 5

    What a trip less then a month ago I read an article about a book called"Edison vs. Telsa: The Battle Over Their Last Invention".Edison had been a skeptic about communicating with spirits but near the end of his life changed his thinking he talked about inventing a spirit phone. Hey if the whole house is an antenna using old fashioned TV signals I bet if the local NFL game was blacked out they could pick up an signal from way out of town.Forgive me I'm babbling.
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    Chapter 4

    In a small town like that you can still see that.Still it was a great gesture
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    Chapter 3

    Well it looks like Matt's dad is cool with things That's huge(forgive the expression)Are they going to try to be discreet at school?Matt's Dad and Angie have said they are obvious so they might not be able to pull if off if that's what they try
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    Chapter 4

    Ghost hunter classic stuff.I saw that this chapter had only 2,877 words to it so I figured this is the calm before the storm. So the ghost hunter drives a woody.That term is in the song "Surf City" by Jan and Dean.I'm surprised I haven't heard that pun you used more often.My guess is somebody named Horace L. Wingspanner wasn't a surfer
  19. Glad things are better for you and you're working.BTW awesome thing you're doing being in that testing group for Co-vid. I got to thinking about Jaime's situation .He had one brother die in the military an another become mentally disabled.I'm thinking of the saving Private Ryan rule I know one brother is still alive but I have to think given these circumstances the military should only have him as a support troop and not see any combat.I don't know if they have a policy about that but they should. Now on the the fun stuff
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    Chapter 3

    That's what I'm thinking if the house loves them back then there's no conflict and thus no story. That White Owl mac n chess sounded great. Small dogs are said to be good with litter boxes but not big dogs so much. But Moped a Lab and they are suppose be smart
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    Wow Angie has a big mouth dosen't she.I guess by the way Dave reacted to their hug he's has no idea about either Matt or Donnie
  22. weinerdog

    Water Music

    I don't quite know what to make of this chapter yet is the flashback Rick had with his Mother suppose to tell us why Rick stayed in town ?That line about taking care of his Father and him needing supervision seems to say that. Did Rick make this canoe route to see the Pianist? If he did what's going to happen if he's seen ?
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    Chapter 2

    Well so far so good but I have a nagging feeling what's the catch?If this place was in California Annie would be wiped out by the property tax.I hope she has some good investments.Sorry to bore you all with that stuff.Now to wait for the good scary stuff I guess.
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I wish I had a friend like Donnie to teach me like that.Your Prologue mentioned how will everyone react.So far everyone we met seems cool maybe Dave could be a little self centered. We'll see how things develop
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    A lot more tragic events in this story then what we are used to from you.Still very well done.You said this was a halloween story I thought your story "The Ghost" would qualify for that.Some authors on this site do a halloween story this time of year well nothing cheap about you we get two halloween stories.
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