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And speaking of @mastershakeme being unpredictable,, Ryder got his heartbroken......By Cole

It didn't surprise me. The lavender relationship and fake engagement were bound to be an issue. If Owen had mentioned in earlier chapters describing his set up with Margot had talked about the pictures on the Facebook page then I would have called it exactly and I suspect others would have also. I try to do less predicting I swear I think when I do that the authors says to themselves "Oh Yeah" and then changes things😄 Besides @mastershakeme is one of the hardest authors to predict (except that it's going to be crazY)

I Agree with you that Ryder that Ryder will text first. I hope Ryder saying something along the lines of 'I have been withholding things also" is part of the conversation

He's feral?...I guess that means Ashot will be his right hand man and Dieter will be his left hand man

What time frame is this? How far into the future from where this one ended is it?

I'm guessing at some time in the future Erik's path will cross with his brothers

In Spanish of course

Uh.... @Wayne Gray told me to watch your place because of a surprise birthday party......When your birthday @kbois? ( OH And I'm first on page 2)

When Madam G said she didn't know E was going to kill Jeb that doesn't ring entirely true.She expressed misgivings to Jeb when she told him about it.The almighty Buck was more important. Jeb felt that if he didn't go through with it G was going to can him and he wouldn't be near Devon

You want to start a betting pool? What chapter will Ash deck Rupert?

Out of the corner of his eye, Ash saw James’ attention snap over. The air changed slightly. Taggert went very still beneath it. “Y…Yes, sir.” Bert frowned faintly. Not hostile. Confused. Thinking. Because cattle ranching families knew each other. Especially established ones. And Bert absolutely knew the Yoders. Whatever that was is related to Taggert's situation He’d known eventually this might happen. Ranching was a small world, especially at this level. Families like the Yoders and Nassers crossed paths. Auctions. Breeding contracts. Land deals. Shows. Conferences. Leases. The obvious question is why is Taggert working for Bert instead of his family? Based on James reaction is there a chance Bert heard some scuttlebutt? Bert sounds like someone who could get to the bottom of things

These observations are in the order they appeared in the chapter Levi’s new theory that the ocean had a door at the bottom and if you found it you could go to another dimension. Now I know where some movie ideas come from.I wonder if THAT what the TV show Voyage To The Bottom Of The Sea Was About? Beth was the only one who saw me. The real me. Not the funeral home kid, not Tom’s boy, not Eric’s future partner. Just Owen. And she’d been seeing me for years. I just hadn’t been paying attention. When it comes time for Owen to tell the folks about Ryder and his feelings about the family business Beth HAS to be there there for that. Max drew a whale on the bathroom wall with a marker I did that one time only in mine I......Story for another time

Wylan continued. "You spoke with a terrible accent."I didn't know it was you," Wylan said. OK so what was the point of the accent? To disguise who he really was and Wyland didn't know who he was so the terrible accent was effective When Bran first growled at Erik shouldn't he have recognized his scent? Here's my guess .I don't remember if Julian was the archer. Whoever was will be close by to pick off one or two of the guards then Val,Llyod and Ashot will then swoop in

How is that listed on the menu?XXXXXXXXXXXlarge?

Did you know there was a TV movie in the U.S. called that and Barbara Eden (I dream of Jeannie) played Mrs Johnson. I bet most of the straight men wouldn't have minded her wearing her dresses "way to high"

In addition to Ephraim and Genevieve I think you should also add Acosta to the list he enabled E to do this and as far we know he could be more involved perhaps he sent E as part of a scheme to get Alvarez to agree to the job he wants him to do.

@mastershakeme could have added "I was going to go with Mom and Dad but SOMETHING told me I should drive" yeah it was @drpaladin

And also because if he doesn't the story ends right here

That could be someone trying to hit on Finn from your other story

@#$%&* you @Topher Lydon just as you have us wanting more you end the bloody chapter. Oh and @#$%&* means dang.

Great Story @drpaladin could help you find it

Very good story. I tried to write a story Using Prompt #71 ..It was a murder Mystery....just couldn't get it to work

Wait what about Cole? Or is it OK because it's from a different story?🤔

I wonder if it surpassed Circumnavigation in words yet