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Chapter 12: Summer of Hell
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 12: Summer of Hell
So Aedan and Kelly? Hopefully he’d take his shirt off... it’s a pretty warm day... NOPE, mind out of the gutter, Aedan! If Aedan thinks that's mind in the gutter then my mind is ALWAYS in the gutter -
How old is Garrett car? The last year cars came with carburetors was 1994 and how does Finn even know how to service that? I guess he learned from Walter. So what term would you give this it wasn't rape because Finn was into it and it definitely wasn't making love so......consentual hate-sex?🤔
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@Krista(But it's a good thing)
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That's my favorite show.....I have no idea what it is but it's my favorite
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Every day he assigns one of his employee from his restaurant to keep and eye out for messages than end in # 0 or 5 like 25,50 ,75.etc.and when that happens they notify him and he immediately post a message for the next page.....Good work if you can get it
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It was said that it was a house of one of Corcoran's relatives but I suspect the relative(s) are not living there at the moment or on vacation because otherwise they would have to know what's going on in the basement. ‘Which is where, exactly?’ asked Benevetti. Now why would he need to know that? Maybe he's fishing for information to pass on which would explain the scowl on his face
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“She won’t find out. Unless you tell her. As soon as I read that line I said to myself "Hey Moron how can you be sure Luke won't say anything?" BUT sure enough.Now I wonder what Luke motivation is? Hatred for his sister? Or did he know what Brad was the whole time and this was his fucked up way of proving it Bella? OR were Bella and Luke in cahoots and they were testing Brad? To quote The Guns N Roses song "Where do we go from here?
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It think it's safe to say there isn't another story like this on GA. A masterpiece When Josh and Caleb were conversing did Dan,James and Greg hear Josh side of the conversation or was this all internal?
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You know they didn't have to put Josh through that reenactment ,They could have just waited until you posted this chapter and they would have got the password
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I can't wait to see how this situation changes "A gecko," Garrett repeated, the word dripping with mockery. "Let me guess. It represents your deep, spiritual connection to saving fifteen percent on car insurance?" Good line😄
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I have been reading some of your previous stories and now I just happen to be on GA when you're starting a new one.Tou're so prolific it's hard to keep up with you so I'm jumping on this one so I can finally comment live. Interesting so far.
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Have you ever wondered why Fat Chance and Slim Chance mean the same thing?🤔
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Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
How dare @Krista invade your story with her characters -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
You're saying that like it's a done deal and I'm thinking this isn't over. Next week People arrive and Five's dick gets broken.OOOOOOH I don't like the sound of that -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
If I was at my food bowl I would still be there instead of here -
Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Manipulation
There you go @Jason Rimbaud. @Lee Wilson was first this time -
In Josh memory Garrett said “The filename is the passphrase.” But doesn't that mean Josh could also have forgotten the filename? Is that something Walter knows?
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A new @Jeff Burton chapter perfect antidote to the Monday morning blues I love the way the family has taken to Josh ....The actual Josh. “She’s not welcome back at the house until she admits she was wrong and apologizes to you. It may take a while—but don’t be surprised if that apology comes in the form of college tuition… or an Aston Martin.” Eleanor admitting she was wrong?. Not happening! So what does she say? "This doesn't necessarily mean I'm wrong but the first time I saw you I said to myself now that is a Aston Martin man.
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That's not what you said when........Oh right I promised not tell anybody about that
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I hope Cliff stays but if he doesn't I wouldn't blame him one bit. But Allison, glued to the doorway, just shook her head frantically. “I’m not coming in there! It smells like butt in here!” A future Monica in the making. . “I’ve never even talked to a real Mexican before.” And he lives in Texas? What otherwise could have been a perfect chapter just got ruined by Kyle Sam had moments of being pretty smart at times in previous chapters but this stuff with Blue Thunder? If Imani finds out about this it could ruin things for everybody
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From Sam's POV?...Wow Sam is pretty long winded 25,000 + words worth
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Although Nate was worried for a moment the aftermath went much better than usual with a couple that has been living basically straight. I bet their friends won't be surprised
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A somewhat fimilar premise .The setting a private school you have two students one from the "right' side of town very popular and a star athlete the other from the "wrong side of the tracks and is gay and gets harassed and worst by his classmates so polar opposites. The issue Uli the popular jock is closeted and has an attraction to Fidel the ostracized student.This is not a unique story but it is told from the cultural perspective of the country Argentina where the author of this story lives and it is that element that makes this story unique.Won't say anymore because I would be giving too much away except it is highly recommended
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If you think you have a good idea for the characters to continue I trust that you're judgement so I will absolutely read it (God willing) The younger cousins drifted inside to play videogames, despite protests from the grown-ups. Is that universal in all countries now? Oh and put complete on it so I can give it 5 stars
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If Benevetti has half a brain he would know it is far more important to get Corcoran and Barrett then any kind of issue he has with Rick. We'll see they still have Comedy Night at Caesar’s, don’t they?’ Does Australia have a Caesar'a also? ‘I’ve actually been talking to some of the people I work with. There are a number of support groups and foundations out there who deal with homeless and abused youth. They might be able to lend a hand. That sounds like a way to get the Thompsonville characters to cross over in this story
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