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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Change a fat tire? I guess you would let air out of it. Now if you wanted to change a FLAT tire you would....Kidding 😄 I'm just being a smart as.....tronaut
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    Shelter

    “Morning.” A few mumbled replies. That probably had nothing to do with the weather that's me every morning Pair up with your work partner, two men to a mattress. I noticed you didn't mention what size mattresses they were. I bet you it wasn't king size Hey @kbois first on page two oh wait...not your story
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    Shelter

    This goes way back I think I to the 60's or early 70's I only know this because I saw it on YouTube But remember the commercial by Ajax I think it was where the slogan was "Cleans like a white Tornado" why would you want your cleaner to clean like that?🤔...Unless you want the stuff you clean to be among debris.
  4. The drive home took forty-five minutes. In L.A.?...they must live a half mile away from the set
  5. Flynn poured the fake coffee. FAKE COFFEE!!! that's sacrilege.Boy those CW shows really do have low budgets
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    Chapter 4

    El Chupacabra? I first time I heard of those was when I was listening to Art Bell in the 90's (The 1990's for all you smartasses) But this here is around in 1891.....Proof that they exist?
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    Chapter 7

    In the last chapter comments you wrote You think Grandfather doesn't have spies? Rashid certainly does So is it safe to assume they now know Ishan is alive?
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    Chapter 8

    I don't remember if Julie showed signs of going that direction in life when Matt knew her as a teen. Did Julie finding out about Matt/Luke push her more in that direction? I see no reason why Levi didn't learn to ride a bike .Heck where I live Morman's are famous for riding bikes while doing their preaching. It looks like while Levi beliefs are in conflict he doesn't come off as ultra judgmental. I'm curious if he had a close friend who told him he's gay
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    Chapter 3

    scrubbed desk, utterly absorbed in the 1858 edition of Gray's Anatomy. I guess he couldn't wait for the TV show......
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    Chapter 3

    . He is an idiot, the look said. But he is our idiot. Now I know who Mickey is decendented from
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 6

    Yet, across the market, an old Seljuk trader who had walked the roads of Iconium, the streets of Antioch, and knew the court of the Great Sultan Kalijj Arslan gaped. The height, the tall thin body and the way he flowed rather than walked. The impossibility of what he saw, who he was watching in a den of Fatimid betrayers. He bit his tongue, to shout out, or to give away what he knew would see them both dead. I'm assuming that guy figures in the story.Is it for good or bad?
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    Chapter 6

    The Sun drinking coffee? Aha I got it.Those days it is not sunny it is because the Sun didn't have coffee
  13. “You’re a fucking carpet. It’s your job.” “Shut up, sofa. You and your six fat feet bend me all to hell whenever you move. You didn't include the doormat in the conversation.He never gets any respect he gets treated like a...a....doormat
  14. Im just want to be sure this story gets the deserved 5 stars.I hope others here will leave a review more eloquently than I can. Recommended
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    Chapter 2

    I dove into the river, swam three miles underwater, and emerged in Mexico." He also used to walk 5 miles to and from home and school ...uphill....BOTH DIRECTIONS
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    Chapter 2

    “The Sherman Act,” Acosta said, turning and reaching for a newspaper. “With all the silver wealth flowing into Colorado, and the rapid growth of the railways, we’re positioned to make a lot of money. If it passes in July. I know smart businessmen take risks that's what makes them who they are but shouldn't Acosta wait for it too pass before he makes all that investment,BTW Acosta is also an hispanic name and he doesn't seem to be getting any pre-judging from people. He doesn't know, Devon realized with a shock. Alvarez, the smooth-talking, worldly bandito, was completely, fundamentally oblivious to the specific nature of the rumors surrounding him. He was playing it entirely straight, assuming the hostility was simply the standard, tedious racism of the era. What do you mean racism of the era? Today if a Mexican man walked into a restaurant with a timid teen-age white boy many observers would come to the same conclusions (At least in the back of their minds)The shopkeeper and patrons came to in this chapter
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    Epilogue

    ‘honestly disgusting and bad for my brand.’ Rylee YOU!!! are bad for you're brand
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    Epilogue

    I was going to ask you @mastershakemeto write another epilogue where George meets Bubba but @Summerabbacat already took care of that
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    Chapter 5

    At first light, we cross the river and sweep the eastern bank." OK what do they do? Do they take what Reynard said at face value and base where they go off that OR Did Reynard say that hoping to be overheard? Like disinformation?
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    Chapter 26

    That was comment #13 I add this comment so the total won't be that number😄
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    Chapter 26

    This is me hoping more than anything else. Perhaps when the police check out the car Colt didn't do it correctly and the brakes were in no danger of giving out (or they can pretend they didn't find anything) Tell you what if I'm on the jury and I hear all the details I would vote to acquit even if I think he is guilty
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    Chapter 1

    We are building a fire before you turn blue, Then he could meet Kyle......Oh,oh that kind of blue
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    Chapter 1

    I wonder if anyone agrees Alvarez looks a little like Brad Pitt
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    Prologue

    Well I was hoping for a light heated balance to your other story but I guess not. But this looks good
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    Prologue

    REALLY!!! I could have sworn that was your M.O.
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