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hidden bombs and explosions?
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I remember coming across some information about two-spirt they consider themselves LGB2TQ+ I also seeing as 2SLGBTQ+. So yes if Daisy a fanatic about her religion she WILL have a conniption. Jacy says he can't lie well so expect fireworks perhaps even Jacy leaving the house. I think @Summerabbacat comments about Daisy in the chapter comment are too kind. “You didn’t clap,” he said. That comment and Lily's comment of Skye being smug would imply he has a huge EGO. That in and of itself is not a reason to be careful maybe Skye is a player type but perhaps Jacy will ground him there is definitely an attraction there I lucked out and she was on the phone gossiping with one of her church friends, There's a lot gossip at the church I go to I'm sure they are oblivious to what the Bible and The Church says about gossip.Another one is when our Pastor end the mass by saying "Go in peace to love and serve the Lord" Then minutes later he hears angry horns in the parking lot......sigh people
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A Wizard and a Wet Sock
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Wizard and a Wet Sock
Morgan up to this point in his thoughts hasn't said anything about having a mate of any kind and I guess he wouldn't on Earth this would not only be mixed race it would be mixed planet. Morgan might be from a place where there is no such thing as gay/straight so if some feelings for Kyle comes up it may very well be a first for him at least on Earth. He was jittery in a way he hadn’t been since the Wars of the Roses, Why would that make him jittery? It was a funny movie...What's that?....OH! the actual war...never mind -
As you can tell I didn't look anything up. Was one of them Randy Rhodes?.....BTW what can we do with these bonus points
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Great chapter❤️ @CincyKris thought about Rick's dad? My very first reaction was with so much going on in the story Rick confronting his Dad would have to wait for a sequel. But actually being involved? Well right now it looks to be overwhelmingly Corcoran to the point that it's a no brainer.So Rick's dad would a perfect twist. Did you mention how old his parents were when they got married? If it was early in their twenties then that would make his dad late forties or early fifties and if he kept in shape certainly capable of committing the recent murders. I don't rule it out. ‘Whoo hoo! Coop’s got a boyfriend!’ Jimmy taunted. ‘Coop’s got a boyfriend!’ Uh.....are you sure Jimmy is 16?
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Thank you for the chapter❤️ I knew my parents would go right to sleep, since they had to work the following day, Is this set in 2025? Because New Years is on a Thursday unless they work in a hospital or something like that give them Friday off also geez. I'm assuming this is the last chapter of the year so Merry Christmas and Happy New Year and please get better
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But I’m not that guy. I have a girlfriend. I don’t want to be that guy That and many other comments in this chapter seems to be foreshadowing
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You know everywhere he goes he's the centaur of attention
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Frosted Hearts: The Pool
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Pool
Now I know why GA exist.....It's so @Krista and @Jason Rimbaud can communicate with each other -
I get the motivation of Noah's Mom but if something happens to Noah isn't she pretty much the number one target of law enforcement not to mention Noah's family? Pretty much signing her death certificate,.Maybe she doesn't know this is an @AquariusGuy story
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Chapter 9: Aedan’s Birthday
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 9: Aedan’s Birthday
“Fuckin’ nearly 200 quid for a damn jersey…” Steven muttered under his breath. Was that a misprint? I don't think the TD garden takes quid unless the credit card Jake used is set up that way. “This cost is coming out of your allowance, Jacob.” I saw my best friend scoff and roll his eyes. Well it they are as rich as Aadan say they are Jake will have only 800 quid/bucks instead of a thousand “Yeh, take it as a thanks from me for being my only friend.” Well once they find out Jake bought Aadan a Celtics jersey he'll have more friends -
Oh I didn't know @Lee Wilson was helping you write that story
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WE human call Krista?.... Is this your way of saying you're not human?
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We’ve been that way since the start—total trust.” It looks like that comment might bite him in the ass
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Robbie Playing Baseball? It will be interesting to know how that came about. Looking more and more like there going be a Bory ( Im using Bobby instead of Robbie since Rory and Robbie have the same first letter)instead of Nobbie ...come to think of it the second choice sounds so appropriate. Since you said you were close to end it sounds like there is not going to be enough time for Robbie to meet his Dad's side of the family and possibly will he be in his kid's life
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So What If We Get Hurt?
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in So What If We Get Hurt?
And what was all that stupid crap about how Alexander had been sure of Lyn’s ‘straightness’ in college? Perhaps Alexander was trying to create a more clear path for Lyn. “You’re so cocksure, I want to smack you.” That's because Alexander is sure of Lyn's cock- 25 comments
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I almost put an angry reaction like @Philippe but I liked the Adam and Rick scenes but now after @Philippe comment I'm not so sure. It's hard to ignore Rick telling Adam important info like where the boys are. The main reason I come to the conclusion that Adam isn't involved though is it would make Rick an awful judge of character. It's one thing to make a few mistakes along the way but this would be incompetent. Notice in the Corcoran files Cunningham didn't mention the knife,That tells me he and the board made a possible connection to Martin's murder the year before. If Cunningham still has the knife maybe Martin's DNA is on it. The Stalker might know somebody in the police department which is how he would know why Rick was assigned there @Philippe made a point of Rick and Cory looking like each other. I'll go you one better (or maybe worse is the right word here) If Corcoran ends up at Tom and Beth house he will notice the resemblance between Martin and Shane
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I like how this is starting I hope you have more snarky comments about Aunt Daisy coming from Lily. So it sounds like Jacy sort of seeing the future is something he might have inherited from the family background.If it's related to the reason why Daisy was closed mouthed about it that would be doing Jacy and Micheal a disservice
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Frosted Hearts: The Note
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Note
I would make bald jokes to a friend of mine he eventually shaved his head (As if to say I'm bald on purpose) so being the smart ass I sometimes am I once looked close at his head and said "You're losing your skin" -
Frosted Hearts: The Note
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Note
For a moment, he felt a hint of guilt. But Five wasn’t his; there was no reason for him to keep his hands tied behind his back. When this vacation was over, things would go back the way they were. He might as well have as much fun as he could. “What’s this about a towel?” Five asked as he hung up his coat and pants. “And what should you have looked at?” “Nothing,” Percy said as he took off his coat. Those two statements would seem to contradict Percy snorted. “I’m going to be focusing on baseball. I won’t have time to find a boyfriend.” Sound like an idea for a future story Percy and a teammate? Ira let out a whoop and ran over to the fridge. He opened the door and grabbed a can of soda. He quickly opened it and drank about half. He burped loudly, and when his father glared at him, Ira grinned and went back to his sweeping. Imagine how Ira would react if he saw the wine cellar -
A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in A Catholic Gay Boy’s Guide to Emotional and Eternal Limbo
Really?🤔 I can't Imagine what could go wrong- 65 comments
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You mentioned powdery stuff and pot in the same comment. Don't be surprised if Deputy Barney Fife knocks at your door
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I had no idea how any of this worked. Who even needs a lawyer at eighteen? You would know if you had the classmates I had
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Now there's a comment that's universally acceptable for any situation
