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An AI being a snitch? Of course humans designed it
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Do you also have a machine that inserts you into the story? Because otherwise
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And of course circumstances will dictate that Jeb and Alvarez will have to be allies to fight off Ephraim and Lemuel
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Cole sounds okay but the synopsis mentioned someone named Ryder so unless Ryder is Cole's last name it looks like this won't work out. I'm concerned about Theo that isn't normal behavior. This might be me and my overactive imagination but what if the higher ups a VBS somehow find out about Owen? Will they kick him out of the program because he'll corrupt the kids? It would also be a hell of a way to get outed
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8 years old and she was in half the chapter and you already hate her That's a record even for you.Hey she did fix Max's fish
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It may have been mentioned so if it was my bad. Did Levi go to public (or private) school or was he home schooled?Although it looks like he doesn't have friends if he went to a school I'm sure he observed others including gay kids.Perhaps he witnessed some gay kids being harassed or worse and didn't like what he saw.While living with religious teaching Julie for all the mistakes she made wasn't an evil hateful person and based on Levi's grace prayer it reflects that, ‘So, what? You’re worried we’ll make you watch musicals or something now?’ That finally earned a reluctant snort from Levi. Matt relaxed slightly. While Levi been sheltered he did know enough to understand that joke
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I wonder if hearing the name Wyland trigger something is Erik? Do you plan on having Ashot and Dieter meet? That would be something
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"I am haunted by the war," Séb muttered darkly. But not as much after meeting Dieter
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Like soup spoon you know the kind you can slurp up a lot? Uh.....what I mean is...er....gotta go .
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How many chapters are in a "or so"
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Very well done as you can tell by my last chapter comment I didn't see this coming. While I was wrong about Jeb I may be right about Lemuel and Ephraim. They will be a pain. I wonder if one of Genevieve special clients will be one of the Elders
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I hope Jeb speaks to his father later in the story
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Cole sounded worth checking out. Anybody who like animals (His Golden Retriever) is OK with me I was looking for someone to talk to who wouldn’t immediately try to see me naked...........Then what's the point of the app?
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You're being redundant you already mentioned they are watching Fox News
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You posted that just before I posted what I wrote the whistling in your comment tells me if they are not sister's or cousin's they will be after they meet
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I was thinking the same think I bet Julian's wife is her sister or cousins
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You may have given @mastershakeme an idea but to avoid copyright infringement call it The Terry Autumn Show
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Use your imagination and picture in your mind what is happening.After you do that you will realize this is as good as any Jason Statham movie......Although I doubt Jason ever fell for a lead singer of a boy band
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Well it won't be someone from his family because then they would be asked what were YOU!!! doing on that app????????
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I missed the notification for the first chapter for some reason but I'm here now. A gay guy and a lesbian are besties and they both go to a Catholic school and are dating each other to cover for each other's familyHmm .Be honest @mastershakeme you wrote it this way because @Summerabbacat will a have a field day with this and you want to read his comments
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I bet you were Ishan to say that
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Well where The hell was Silas when you need him They have to come up with a plan and never let Devon go anywhere alone.Jedediah is too stupid not to come back and this time with his two flunkies "The gold leaf was an excellent choice, Silas," Genevieve purred, her European accent thick with smug, predatory satisfaction. "Cost an extra two dollars, Madame," the giant rumbles, not looking up from his whittling. "Painter said he'd throw in the 'Inquire Within' for free." He got the Inquire Within for free?...shrewd
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I know who that is. Also the hound might know
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If they find Darien will Darien recognize Ishan? Would Ishan remember enough to convince him? I guess Darien would recognize his voice as long as Ishan doesn't say "Ja". Failing that I guess he could drop his trousers the hair would be different but I bet Darien would remember the other part
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"You just want to see me naked again." Yeah...AND? . Hold still. If this gets in your eyes, you’ll be as blind as the widow, and I’ll have to lead you around by a rope." I don't know about you Seb but that sounds pretty good to me
