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A new @Jeff Burton chapter perfect antidote to the Monday morning blues I love the way the family has taken to Josh ....The actual Josh. “She’s not welcome back at the house until she admits she was wrong and apologizes to you. It may take a while—but don’t be surprised if that apology comes in the form of college tuition… or an Aston Martin.” Eleanor admitting she was wrong?. Not happening! So what does she say? "This doesn't necessarily mean I'm wrong but the first time I saw you I said to myself now that is a Aston Martin man.
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That's not what you said when........Oh right I promised not tell anybody about that
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I hope Cliff stays but if he doesn't I wouldn't blame him one bit. But Allison, glued to the doorway, just shook her head frantically. “I’m not coming in there! It smells like butt in here!” A future Monica in the making. . “I’ve never even talked to a real Mexican before.” And he lives in Texas? What otherwise could have been a perfect chapter just got ruined by Kyle Sam had moments of being pretty smart at times in previous chapters but this stuff with Blue Thunder? If Imani finds out about this it could ruin things for everybody
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From Sam's POV?...Wow Sam is pretty long winded 25,000 + words worth
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Although Nate was worried for a moment the aftermath went much better than usual with a couple that has been living basically straight. I bet their friends won't be surprised
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A somewhat fimilar premise .The setting a private school you have two students one from the "right' side of town very popular and a star athlete the other from the "wrong side of the tracks and is gay and gets harassed and worst by his classmates so polar opposites. The issue Uli the popular jock is closeted and has an attraction to Fidel the ostracized student.This is not a unique story but it is told from the cultural perspective of the country Argentina where the author of this story lives and it is that element that makes this story unique.Won't say anymore because I would be giving too much away except it is highly recommended
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If you think you have a good idea for the characters to continue I trust that you're judgement so I will absolutely read it (God willing) The younger cousins drifted inside to play videogames, despite protests from the grown-ups. Is that universal in all countries now? Oh and put complete on it so I can give it 5 stars
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If Benevetti has half a brain he would know it is far more important to get Corcoran and Barrett then any kind of issue he has with Rick. We'll see they still have Comedy Night at Caesar’s, don’t they?’ Does Australia have a Caesar'a also? ‘I’ve actually been talking to some of the people I work with. There are a number of support groups and foundations out there who deal with homeless and abused youth. They might be able to lend a hand. That sounds like a way to get the Thompsonville characters to cross over in this story
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Frosted Hearts: The Bet
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bet
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Frosted Hearts: The Bet
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Bet
Happy New Year! Hope everyone had a wonderful weekend. Happy New Year to you.But doesn't it suck when Monday come after New Years -
Well the title is Those Bloody Fists so It's a good bet the workouts will come into play. It's interesting that when Fidel didn't drop his head to that one guy it was different so perhaps the workouts are helping his confidence. Uli wants to come back to see Fidel but if it wasn't for that I wonder if he would prefer to stay in Canada
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The Contents, Dinner, and Hockey Tryouts
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Contents, Dinner, and Hockey Tryouts
Luca couldn’t resist giving him a congratulatory kiss once they got outside. A couple members of the team saw it. Well here hoping the teammates aren't homophobic morons I know what Angel suggested freaked Luca and Darren out but I knew a few friends in HS that if it was proposed to them and the person was hot then would jump on it. Luca spoke up, “My favorite is the Lomito Argentino.” “What’s in that?” “It’s a grilled steak with ham, eggs, cheese, lettuce, tomatoes, mayo, all on a grilled bun with chimichurri sauce on the side.” Sounds like a very fancy Torta is that a fair assessment? -
[Memory, Senior Year, March] – You’ll Never Be Alone
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, March] – You’ll Never Be Alone
I could see Lyn unintentionally letting what happened slip to Alexander and Brad being upset about that. Seriously, if I didn’t know you two are as straight as they come, I’d think you want to fuck.” There is a lot of ways to interpret that but I think Brad is BSing I think he knows Lyn has a crush on him -
Truth, Dare, and Consequences
weinerdog commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Truth, Dare, and Consequences
Even if this Truth or Dare kiss didn't happen most of this chapter was Hunter talking about Carlos so I saw this happening anyway. Ricardo doesn't seem to have anything devious about him so I have to wonder what the hell was he thinking with that dare? Sure he thought it was just a game but he still should have realized what could happen. “Why aren’t you sitting with Miguel and his amigos?” That tells me Yeison already knew Carlos somewhat. -
Well they were beating around the bush for a long time finally. Oh and Happy New year to you
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I get why Uli is doing what he's doing don't agree with it but I get it. Fidel on the other hand saw that kickboxing sign. Well it's too late to do anything for the private school problems but I'm guessing he's planning on how he will handle future problems but I'm not sure this will do it either
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OutstandingYour cup runneth over
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Well that depends on what exactly is "too straight " if it's Colt I agree if it's the other thing I'm thinking of there is no such thing as "too straight "
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, then called me a dumbass. I ignored the text until he told me that he needed help with Calculus Uh Roy why are you asking a "Dumbass" to help you with calculus Perhaps Jax isn't as dumb as your usual football jock he was very pragmatic about it. BUT he did make the excuse about being drunk so there was some macho pride there. So do people think Joel is gay because he sits at the gay table? “Since most of you are failing my class, it would do all of you good to focus on your lessons.” Hey Mr. Swindell have you considered that it's because maybe you're not a good teacher
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Right now based on his last comment in the previous chapter comments I'm seeing @Jeff Burton doing this
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Made your day didn't it
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Chapter 11: Spring Out Of Middle School
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 11: Spring Out Of Middle School
The Principal sounds like a moron The bully wanted to pick on the one white kid in the reform school. Only one white kid? That right there tells me the system is corrupt and I bet no rich kid was there -
Last Year? My how times flies I seems like it was just last week?
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Since nobody really dies in your stories it could be JFK or John Lennon for all we know
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I'd like to see who you all think our mystery guest is, we have met them before. I'm probably wrong but I'll guess TJ
