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I'ts not that difficult with me
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Outside, Val's voice rang out across the camp: "LLOYD! JULIAN! Get your useless selves over here! We need to talk about *appropriate behavior in shared quarters*!" Great, now half the camp knows.” He shook his head. “Jokes aside, I need to tell her to stop, we don’t need the priest’s poking their noses around.” I need to stop Val before she makes that too difficult, there’s also the station thing. Lloyd’s not of the same station as Julian, and there’d be a fuss.” Val...The inspiration for The National Enquirer
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Just think gay horniness might save the world
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Great story.But you never said what planet Emily lives on
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Charlie's face went crimson. "That's NOT—we weren't—it wasn't like THAT." It wasn't like that?....Is Charlie related to Darien from the other story?
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"It's—someone I met. Recently. He's—" He stopped. What could he say? *He's a cherub who nailed me in a mall bathroom and told me Taine was a tool?* Yeah that would be weird nothing like being dead then undead and in Taine's younger body while Taine is in his
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Okay you wrote that the attacker checked for a pulse.If he didn't kill Scott why did he check for a pulse?
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Congratulations Jamal
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It will be interesting to find out how Atreus died and if that means Darien has some unfinished business
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I have deliberately be vague in this review lest I reveal too much of the story. But what happens in this story happens in a lot of GA stories and sadly we hear of this IRL also. This story conveys and helps you emphasize with that situation.The plot develops on a slow pace which some readers commented on but I believe that was the right way to do this very nuanced and you understand and relate to all perspectives.Highly recommended just be patient
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Oh they definitly will be in my memories. I don't know @Tony S. if you are familiar with a story called A To Z by @Parker Owens or if many followers of this story know that story.But Matt and Kitt reminded me of Andy and Zander of that story.There were differences in the circumstances of course but I kept thinking of them while reading this story.I mean that as high praise.
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Reconciliation and Loose Ends
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Reconciliation and Loose Ends
We turn into voyeurs once again to watch the goings on. What do you mean turn into voyeurs? Isn't that a permanent condition of most (If not all) of us readers? -
Reconciliation and Loose Ends
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Reconciliation and Loose Ends
Coming from you that statement is relative. Anything short of armageddon is not anything too bad -
Mrs. Hartley set a plate of food in front of him without being asked. Charlie looked at it—roast vegetables, potatoes, gravy, no meat—and raised an eyebrow. "Experimenting," she said serenely. "Eat." Did Pip somehow get in her head? At the church Charlie said "What are you 12"? And here Pip is described as 17 so did he change his appearance?
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Maybe Vegan sex will become a thing
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The fact that Killian mentioned that Kane and Tad were having a lengthy conversation and they didn't notice Killian and his Mom walk by I see that as a very positive sign
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"How does Kendall and Novak Investigations sound?" Putting the Kendall name first? One reason could be because it might be better for business since Kendall's name has been out in the media.But I also wonder is Novak thinking of retiring sooner rather then later? Or at the very least stay on just as an advisor? "Let's say ten? Is that too early?" "That's perfect. I get a feeling a big breakthrough will come from this
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Not to sound like a broken record but @Philippe gave me an opening. And what he wrote is spot on. And this could morph into something more. Imaging Killian and Jacy perhaps BF or maybe not for the time being just close friends (eventually leading to more)working on a case with Chris joining them more often than not. A series of stories involving those three on cases would work out well. As I said, you haven't been on your own since you were sixteen. Date some different guys, Ooh ooh ooh I have a suggestion and since Killian's actual birthday is next week then Jacy could give him his present....I wasn't suggesting that....Or was I
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Not to be a kill joy but will a jealous Ethan try to sabotage Charlie?
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I have to admit I have pretty much forgotten a lot of the story.I hope it fills in fast. Anyway Welcome back
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He turned to Radoslav. "Your Majesty. The gold is yours. Distribute it as you see fit. Oh geez telling a king that
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Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
weinerdog commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
me getting slapped by Madison Taylor-Blake from every possible angle. Slow motion. Hmm🤔 The people who run the NFL replay system must have done that- 28 comments
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You couldn't have written this chapter any better than you did
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So how much time will pass until Gabriel finds out something happened to Scott? And while the intruder did delete his breaking in but is there another backup even somewhere else?
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He looked at the plate, at the brain, at the smear where Charlie's fingers had touched it. Then he smiled. Why do I think Charlie touching it was the key mistake he made
