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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 31

    “You festering dumpster troll of a crusty, perv-soaked pedo freak – go crawl back into the sewer from where you were spawned, you swamp-scented disgrace to hygiene and decency!” That’s when Satan’s henchman knocked on the door, “how does someone smell like human excrement, Limburger cheese, and a dead raccoon at the same time?” OK @LittleBuddhaTW you can't fool us any longer you're really @Summerabbacat aren't you
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 31

    She stepped forward and smiled, and the energy of the room shifted immediately. Her energy was... warm, larger-than-life. Big. Comforting but commanding. She was a large Black woman, possibly in her mid-to-late 40s, with long, gorgeous dreadlocks that reached the middle of her back. She wore oversized glasses, a colorful, patterned cardigan, chunky costume jewelry, and carried a crocheted handbag with a stitched image of a dog on the front. So the new house parent is.......Whoopi Goldberg🤔
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    Chapter 31

    First off thank you for getting rid of Johnston I was afraid that problem was going to linger......and not just his odor. Oh and remember his quid pro line? I shudder to think what he had in mind. On a more serious note I really hoped we could work on that – on him not seeing Tommy as a threat. Tommy was a friend, OK there's a reason that line was in the chapter and it may not be good. Nick did say he'll be coming back for the summer. Doing things that teen boys do I can picture Nick and Tommy "trying" some alcohol and in a drunken state they cross the line. Now Nick would have a dilemma would he tell Jack? (assuming Jack doesn't catch them) and also Nick will tell himself he's no better than Noah. If this happens I think it would be in the sequel. I hope it doesn't but it would make for good drama
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I'm sure a lot of people have an similar story
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    Epilogue

    I loved the references to the current events that you mentioned and the products that you mentioned I do wonder about one place you mentioned Frisch’s Big Boy in California there used to be a places called Bob's Big Boy do you know if there's a connection? The relationship between the characters of Jeff and Paul is purely fictional. Be that as it may it worked really well in this story
  6. You reacted to my comment so I know you're here @drpaladin. Can't wait to see what you say to @mastershakeme😄
  7. Wow talk about a wicked curve ball being thrown after 26 chapters. “Mistake? He used to be quite generous with you, if I recall correctly.” “You do. But not everything in life is about money. That sounds like Blanche actually has some kind of value system something that has not been apparent up until now. Another reason for this stance might be she knows something dangerous about this guy. The short exchange Lyn had with the new guy sounds like Brad although I would think that would have been made reference to by now. Whoever this guy is must be gay for him to actually know Lyn's name as if he made a point to find out,If it's not Brad then it was someone who he had a bad experience with
  8. Well it could have been if the flash drive had all the info Riley needed BUT NOOOOOOO! And what's with Darius (he no longer goes by D) and company doing everything isn't that Riley's job?........Forget what I just typed. Actually that might be the most realistic part of this story
  9. Darius shook his head, still kind of out of it, but the corners of his mouth twitched upward. “Fine. Twenty percent.” The way Josh buys snacks that should last a month....maybe two “Sure. As long as you finish what Leon started. Take down Hollis in Charleston. Find that shipping yard in Miami. Flip the accountant. Bring me the Carillos and you get your key. After that, Georgia’s all yours. You’ll be a free man with a fat bank account. Sooooo like.....22 more chapters🤔
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    At Work

    The way the director and photographer spoke about Peter I wonder if he would get an impressive offer to model full time.While Peter has other goals in his life that would be something. “Christ, on some of them I’ve even got to cover up the needle marks,” Am I missing something? The issue about the hearing aid.Can't they just air brush it out? This chapter describes very well what hard work modeling is. Here's another thing those SI swimsuit models who are always modeling on some beach, it may be sunny and bright but because of what time of year it is and it is usually early morning on these shoots a lot of those times the model is freezing
  11. better then a certain something else freezing
  12. Geez less then a couple months out of Florida and you're already an wuss(kidding😄 I DO!!!! remember humid days in Mass.)
  13. weinerdog

    Aberration

    Josh doesn't trust the FBI? What government organization or any entity working with the government can you trust? while Elise had gone into politics. And absolutely don't trust her
  14. weinerdog

    Aberration

    From what I can tell there would have been no reason for you to delete it and I'm glad you didn't
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    Oh don't be so cynical. The reason why they had their flashers on is this is the hour Krispy Kreme takes them out of the fryer
  16. Just a bit?🤔
  17. Stanford wow I'm impressed I'm not suggesting something like this would happen but say Bret and Jeff had some chemistry would being cousins albeit by marriage be a hurdle to that given the times
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    Chapter 30

    We lounged around in just our underwear, Why so overdressed🤔 “Minnesota Twinks.” I bet when the Minnesota Twinks travel to San Francisco to play the Giants a lot of citizens who don't go to baseball games will buy tickets “Buy me some peanuts and crack cocaine…” At Chicago Cubs games the great announcer Harry Carey used to off-key sing that during the seventh inning stretch.Since he passed they continued that tradition usually with celebrities(Ozzy Osbourne didn't know the words) but not always ,Note to Cubs PR dept. don't EVER let Jack sing it. “Or rather, we were asked to leave a day early because of Jonah’s shenanigans. How come I 100% believe that?🤔 He casually dropped that his dad could probably score tickets for one of the Comerica VIP boxes. Now that would be insane – our own private room up on the mezzanine, with catered food and the game spread out below like a giant TV screen come to life. I couldn’t even begin to imagine Jonah’s unfiltered chaos mixed with Jack’s sarcastic play-by-play echoing off those glass walls. You have to write about that in the sequel @LittleBuddhaTW
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    Chapter 30

    This was a great and very happy chapter so I apologize for raining on it but I have to mention this while it is on my mind and the reason why I'm thinking of this is because of a couple IRL stupids things that happened. Jack mooning the camera. I read of an incident where a school teacher was put on administrative leave pending investigation because of a sexual offense incident.Turns out when he was a HS senior he shot the moon out of a bus window on a school field trip(Some Karen who was a chaperone probably complained) Another one happened to friend of mine .He was interviewing for a job and was asked about a being on a sexual offense registry,He had no idea.When he checked it out it came from an incident when he was on spring break with friends acting like drunken idiots and you guessed it he shot the moon. Some of you might guess why I bring this up. I could see Jack's mooning pic being on Emery's camera phone (heck I would keep it😄) And that jackass Johnston finding out about it and with trumped up charges trying to expel Jack AND maybe Nick. I REALLY hope I'm wrong.
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    Chapter 16

    True enough so......Johnny?
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    A New Look

    The Modeling shoot is one thing but has Peter ever done a fashion show? There I understand since there are so many wardrobe changes in the back room most people are walking around naked......... Now I would to go with Peter and Marty to THAT
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    I read up on them also @Summerabbacat I guess you could only have them under certain conditions but it should not be a problem for Finn given where he's located. I also read that even when you have them from a pup like Finn did their hunt and kill instincts will still kick in. So I guess with your cats you would not want your neighbor to have one.
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    Chapter 16

    I wish you were writing the story. And I bet that's exactly what you would have happen😄 (I'm kidding @Krista❤️ I'm loving this story)
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    Chapter 29

    Yes I would like to know that also
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 16

    Hey Lisa I hear there's a gay student at the school Cody goes to what are you going to do?Forbid him to go to school?🙄 “if you do end up going, I want your knuckles to come back the same way they left the house.” “So, use your feet,” Trace offered, and I smirked when she slapped his shoulder rolling her eyes. AND since Joel will be wearing footwear they'll be no evidence he used his feet so GREAT advice👍 I saw two police cruisers pull out and head down the bypass. Damn I hoping that were going to pick up Wesley🤷‍♂️
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