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  1. Nice chapter But then you write "Back to school and more trouble " It never ends with you does it😄
  2. As long as Wencel The weasel gets the short end who cares
  3. And I hope I can still surprise you a bit with the resolution - which is coming, I promise. Oh I'm sure you're going to surprise most of us.And you're definitly going to surprise me. Why? Because I have no friggin idea what you're going to do🤔
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    Chapter 49

    singing YMCA, by the Village People. I didn't know @Summerabbacat was at the party
  5. Ah you're full of .... uh never mind
  6. "Teens still like to hang out at malls. Some things never change." I have heard it is not like it used to be as far as hanging out at the mall "Ha! Teha didn't get none on her date. Who would if their father was 6'6 275
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    Chapter 5

    "What about our disguises?" Kippy asked Charlie smiled. "We'll do that now. Amtapora? How much will Charlie charge for us to use Amtapora's abilities. I have an idea for the next Halloween costume party I'll go to.
  8. Since when do you need a plot to have a foursome🤔
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    Chapter 48

    They can sing that one also (Although the Title is December 1963...I think)
  10. Uh....what did @Cane23 say?
  11. Ewan sounds like he would be a great manager for a rock star I'll be OK with a foursome but I agree with @PeteyNO!!! six way (BTW is there a name for a six way?..orgy I guess) “What was that?” Rory chirped beside him. “Nothing!” Kieran barked. “Just thinking about strategy.” Well that was true enough only it wasn't about the war😄
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    Chapter 13 S3

    It all looks good,” Devin confirmed after she’d placed everything on the table, “so I’m going to try a little of each.” “You’d better have more than a little of each, or else my husband will be stuffing himself with what’s left.” geez can you imagine what she would be like if they went to a Buffet together
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    Chapter 4

    I hope you get well soon @Geron Kees🙏🤞 "I was placed here, and told to wait, that someone would come for me. No one ever did." "There was one larger class of vessel, approximately three times the diameter of this ship, in my shipmaster's home fleet. That class of vessel would be considered a battleship in any navy." Rick whistled. "I'd hate to meet that one in a dark alley at night!" "Some of my technology is placed under a secure lock. I cannot allow that to be scanned. But even if I could, I sense that your equipment would be unable to breach the security in place. You are in command here unless or until a member of my shipmaster's species bearing the proper credentials appears to make claim." All of these excerpts sounds like stuff Geron can keep in his back pocket for use in future stories (if not this story)
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    Chapter 47

    It was good to know that there were some good genes in our family somewhere. Not from the Monolith thats for sure
  15. I can't add a thing to anything all the smart reviewers have already stated .I'm just adding another five star review so readers notice how many 5 star reviews this story has and will be motivated to read this.Please do
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    Epilogue

    I was right the epilogue explained everything very well done❤️ Just want to get your take on something.If War and Crime stopped just like that would The economy collapse and take awhile to recover? Because a lot of businesses and occupations are suddenly obsolete
  17. Josh may already be enrolled at St Augustine the way he impressed The Headmaster. A full chamber ensemble was arranged at the head of the ballroom, all dressed in formal black with just a hint of silver trim. Their instruments gleamed under the chandeliers as they played a waltz that floated across the space like snow. You could feel it in your chest. Rich, sweeping, elegant. Music for another century. So much for my idea of getting a Metal band I know booked there. “I know, but tonight at least try to be civil. I don’t want a war breaking out right here in the ballroom.Oh I don't know it would be a good way for Josh to break in his new cane.....preferably on Reed I loved the banter about the Hastings by The Kincaid's.Hilarious😄 “Priscilla. William. So glad you could make it.” LIAR!!!!!!!😄
  18. So will Dan's in-laws be the horror trope?🤔
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    Chapter 3

    Juacarvo. Forgot to mention I could have sworn I saw something on a fancy Mexican restaurant menu that said that.Maybe they made it to our planet
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    Chapter 3

    My first reaction is with this ship being so old and predating the empires that it has features nobody has ever seen before and that could come in handy if the gang comes across any hostility
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    Chapter 3

    Well it doesn't take a genius to speculate the trip "home" will not go well seeing that we just met the new characters. Since the twins play baseball I would love to see their reaction once they realize who Joel is.
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    Chapter 3

    And then you make another comment an hour later....Hmmp .No seriously comment all you want you have a lot of great stuff to say
  23. Call me stupid but I don't yet understand all of Alexander's motivations and actions......yet. But my guess is it has something to do with Brad
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    Gilded Shadows

    It was meant to be reassuring, even playful. But something about the way he said it made my chest tighten just a little. Not out of fear, just the weight of the implication. Foreshadowing an incident maybe?
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    Gilded Shadows

    I guess I should check my blood sugar before reading it
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