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It looks like some progress what made with Tad I'm guessing baby steps with perhaps with a step back for every few steps forward.Having Tad meet Jake (That was his name right?) Is a good way to have Jake in the story and that's good but if I recall he wasn't in the most stable of places himself
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“You’re out a lot,” his father said without turning. Kitt paused, fingers tightening minutely on the strap of his bag. “Swim season’s busy,” he said. “Busy is one thing,” his father replied. “This looks like you’re hardly home at all. Less time for church. Less time for family. Less time for your studies.” You know it's not like Kitt's staying out after midnight going "Yeehaw Party" His dad must have been the dullest person in the world “What’s this B-minus in chemistry?” he asked. OMG Kitt's becoming a juvenile delinquent Neither knew that promise would be tested sooner than they thought. And I think all the reader's know who will be testing it
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Great story❤️❤️❤️ I didn't cry during Jamie's scene..... I DIDN"T!!!.....Somebody thoughtlessly left an onion on my desk next to the computer....Yeah thats what happened
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Excellent chapters the combination of knowing all the secrets tunnels and I hope along with the warlocks assistance that can come up with a strategy. ‘Ahhh . . . but a boy’s rod, now that is unbreakable Ah that is a line begging for a response but I won't go there
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Yeah it seems more like slightly less then 3 years(05-01-2023 was the Date of the chapter they went to freshmen orientation)
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If Bobby and company are planning something for the show the rest of the crew who are on Shaun's side will be there I bet they will do something. “But Shauna and I are buying you condoms today. Looks like you have some editing to do
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Only ONE!!!!
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Good catch. I love that song
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You weird?🤔.......Nooooooooo!
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I'm judging by @Josh Aterovis reaction to my comment I'm not even close......OR! He's downplaying my thought so I'll think I'm wrong...yeah I'll go with that😄
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We will audit Alistair Merrick’s soul. How can you audit something that doesn't exist?🤔
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Remember my comment and your response in the Chapter 8 comments? Are you going to have a scene where Clovis beats up Brick?Or better yer Denton?......Can you write one🤞 i will give you a Clovis scene, our Grizzly Bear is going to avenge his best friend. Well this highly exceeded my expectations Yes that's me😄
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I'm out of my league when talking about relationships and my history is proof of that. So I won't guess what I think might happen.Emotionally I'm rooting for Jacy. We had a homicide last night. Drug related, most likely. Around here, most of them are. I'm thinking that comment is a clue of some kind .What's that you ask? (And I'm sure most of you asked) Well since you asked I'm thinking Wallace used someone who needed to support their habit to kill someone and gave him a gun to do it with and after getting the gun the back buried it on Indian land before any thought of a excavation happening. Now that there is a dig going on the gun may be found which is the reason why there is evidence of something going on overnight at the site.
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Well progress was definitely made with Kitt and Matt it's still going painfully slow for me but going in the right direction. One thing I came away with was Kitt's impression of Riverbend. This meet got him noticed by coaches who were scouting for talent. If Kitt gets offered a scholarship from a college close to Riverbend I think he would jump at it.BUT guess who will probably have a problem with.
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The way they got rid of Denton makes me recall the old Bond movie Goldfinger for any of you that saw it you know what I mean. Beautiful If law enforcement suspected something like that could modern technology check for that? I believe that's how they got rid of Jimmy Hoffa
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The part Hank knows up to the point of where he busted his ankle Merrick and Brick will be told that part but can they go to the police? Sure the corrupt chief would arrest Andrew on some kind go trumped up charge but any good lawyer would get Andrew off with Questions like "And Why were you and the deceased chasing Mr. Highmore?" etc. Testimony might expose things that lead to Merrick and co. If I have any of this wrong please tell me. OF course they'll use other options but this I think would not be one of them.
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They might think twice about Denton
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Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
This was back in the 90's so things may have changed but I heard there is some kind of system used where competitors from other countries have their travel covered in the Olympics. So I'm curious about the arrangement to get to Brisbane. Good chapter -
Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
This one is a bit longer than the rest in this story, but I think none of you will mind its lengthiness. Even so, I didn't get beyond the LA Paralympics, so I changed the title again. WHAT!!! You didn't go to Brisbane?????? I was so looking forward to that -
While Walter would be involved in the literal clean-up It has to be Tanaka to get rid of the body I would think. I thought Denton would last until the last chapter.This story is awesome
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Do you own a cat? Maybe you're typing while the cat jumps on your desk and you then type Kitty
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Why is Wallace even on the council? Everybody knows he a boorish ass. "Do you have a boyfriend?" what was I getting myself into with Jacy? What was his motive for offering? Was he just being helpful or was it something more? Wow I bet @Summerabbacat is taking those as clues and is running with it. I admit that thought has come to me also. Is there any appearance or mention of Skye in this story? That could be another factor in Jacy's question
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And everything is still pretty much the same I get the feeling Kitt and his dad will have a conversation soon that won't be so calm
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Frosted Hearts: The Talk
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Talk
Well somebody is going to be hurt when none of them deserve to be hurt.......Why couldn't Michael be the one to get hurt -
Being the classy guy I am @Topher Lydon I say thisUSA beat Canada in gold medal game. Seriously it was a great game
