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I think your writing a story rule book says you have to have a minimum number of a-holes in it.I think it's rule 2A. You got rid of all of them in the epilogue now you have to create brand new ones for book 2....Can't wait😄

There is one fairly gross "present" a character received for Christmas. Hopefully it won't make any of you sick. I was halfway through breakfast when I read that and said to myself "Oh great" but it wasn't so bad. WHAT I'm about to write is going to be more graphic ten what you feared what you wrote would be but I think it's a valid point Mel involuntarily gave three other residents of the Muscogee RYDC a Christmas present of his own. He spent an inordinate amount of time showering afterward. His ass also hurt for almost a week. Don and Sandy's presents from their fellow residents weren't quite as bad. Don discovered he didn't like the taste of cum. Sandy's gift would have been worthy of inclusion in a remake of Brian De Palma's 'Carrie.' However the dozen or so tampons tossed at Sandy were all used. One thing I think that should be stressed to School kids a whole lot more is what goes on at places like Muscogee RYDC like mentioned above. Sure the people in those places are stupid and arrogant enough to believe they will never get caught but if you show graphic depictions of what happens there and then end it with a statement "Are you sure you'll never get caught and end up in a place like this?" Along the same lines smugglers who transport their illegal drugs by having someone swallow a baggie before boarding a plane and then later pass it out.Authorities should post a PSA that show the stuff being passed out of someone's bare ass and then state "This is where the drugs you buy come from...are you sure you still want to take it?" I apologize if I was too gross

uh...........Isn't that enough🤔

I guess all these words you have in your head (and Skylar says) have been said to other people you interact with so of course you have this free time to write and read😄

You just ticked off all of @Jeff Burton UK followers

Mike and Carole ? Good for Mike. I have to say Tony sure knows how to make an announcement (when he does next chapter that is)

Uh from San Diego. I guess you were thinking of the song from Dionne Warwick with San Jose in the title

This just might be the funniest story I ever read on GA😄 “You need to talk to Father Matthew. You need to pray. Confess. We’ll burn those anime drawings, and we’ll throw out the fitted jeans. We will save you.” I laughed out loud at that but it was somewhat tempered because while it was brilliant satire I honestly think some people believe that “Skylar Jordan River Montgomery!” For a hardcore Catholic no christians names are there🤔(Well I guess Jordan sort of counts as the River is in the Bible....OH River I guess Skylar's Mom thinks that counts also) Seriously how did she miss putting Keanu in with all those names?

Where did you get that can of 3D soup?

“That’s true, and it’s why they had to come up with a different plan. What they’re doing now is saying their son is working for them in one of the family businesses.” “One of the family businesses?” Mom questioned. “You mean they have more than one?” “Yes, they have different businesses. Gramps and Pops own and operate two of them, And Pa has his own accounting business, Aaron McCaskill, C.P.A. He helps companies keep their books, gives tax advice, and does their taxes for them. He also works with individuals with various financial concern, such as investments, and he does their income taxes as well.” I think I'm beginning to understand something .Warren Buffett is a shifter also huh?🤔This is how he made all his money😄

I'm impressed how you can do three stories as varied like this one,Encrypted and Just Maybe at the same time So you probably think this is the part of the story where I’m walking through the hallways, minding my own business, when I bump into someone, some perfect new kid with tragic eyes and indie-band hair. The kind of guy who says something weirdly poetic like “You look like a Tuesday” and suddenly we’re trading slow-burn glances and subtle wrist brushes until one of us caves and kisses the other under a bleacher somewhere. You know the story. We exchange awkward small talk, a few deep emotional confessions, maybe he’s got a camera or a sketchbook or a dark past. By Chapter Two, someone’s got their pants around their ankles and they’re moaning someone’s name while soft indie music plays in the background and the text fades to tasteful ellipses. Do you realize how many GA authors you just made crumple and throw away their outline of the story they were working on and now they have to start over?

I hate to go there but the items Toby found in the bathroom did Charlie or Keiran clean them already? At least they didn't tell Toby where it has been while Toby was holding it

"Fuck. Beaten by a couple faggots. Dad's gonna be pissed at me." Sounds like dear old dad put him up to it.That fact should be revealed to the right person Didn't think it was possible but Lewis Huber is now in contention for the dumbest ass in the story and that's saying something When I started this, I had no idea where it was going, And this different from your other stories how?🤔Kidding😄

you'd think among all those smart beings someone will hit on something🤞

‘Family is important,’ he simply replied. While Aaron was talking about Tony's family I hope this also foreshadows Aaron finding his brother

One thought I have .Is it proper to use a 16 year old boy in a project like this.Is it even legal? Though it's not hard to imagine the CIA being unconcerned about what is legal. Was Josh programmed to do something immoral or illegal? And if he was how will he react when he finds out?

Pretend what never happened🤔

Elion doesn't that moron know that denying Ash and Desmond helps out Oeus🙄 So while Ash is telling everyone at the meeting what he thinks Helmsfirth's next move will be he is feeling out Desmond's erection now THATS mixing business with pleasure

Then the comment "My house" was incredibly arrogant

I have the makings of a GREAT political or sports analyst

There is one thing that seems obvious to me that Lyn refuses to consider apparently.He keeps referring to Alexander as straight. why doesn't Lyn think Alexander is bi?

Was just about to comment on Trace and your comment gave me the perfect gate way to do it. Trace found Joel at very potentially fatal moment so is action were consistent of that of a compassionate man. Now that he knows more was the thought of taking Joel in ever on his radar?And the family? I guess Trace has to tell his wife about what happened with the gory details. But does he tell the kids that or does he leave out the "He's a faggot" part? What will these changes do to the family dynamic and if Joel thinks he's a burden does he make plans to leave?

We don't really have to know the name of the town .It's rural and has it's share of idiots we already know Joe's mom and this John Lundst Jr guy as a couple of examples of that. Every town has those of course but it seems like it has more impact in these rural settings. So what will Trace do and could he cross a line? I could picture him going to pick up Cody and taking him to visit Joel I bet that would go over well with the incubator.If I were Trace I would have a list of things ready to tell CPS if things start to get more confrontational

Kawisps is a munchie as a kid I use to have it as a breakfast cereal .Those of you who go that far back might remember the commercials for Kawisp and Quake cereals....... Oh wait that's Quisp and Quake never mind. I bet that's where @Geron Keesgot the name for The Kawisps