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@dhphllps stole my thunder about te Get Smart references ‘Nothing. I didn’t like the look of ‘em.’ I guess Rick And Helen thought Shane wasn't going to tell the "cops" anything but they still should have reminded Shane not to say anything.An idea I have is they could have Shane tell them some disinformation like he knows where Jimmy is hiding and when they go there they grab them. Helen should ask if these two also asked to see the CCTV. Well I was in the right neighborhood when I wondered in my last chapter comments if Adam would take the boys.Adam's parents sounds like a great Idea. Perhaps when the dust clears Rick and Adam could be their guardians if not Adam's parents
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Honestly I forgot most of it but I do remember this Due to the lengthy dry spell since we last did this, you call THAT a dry spell Mac?You don't know how good you have it. Of course among the more cynical among us some would call that dry spell marriage
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I'm glad you're feeling better @Bill W AR-15's? WTH ??? That takes my mind off everything I was about to say
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You know Pam had that dream that Bobby died.It was also mentioned on that spin off show Knots Landing.Was Pam also dreaming about Knots Landing? You heard of crossover episodes was Pam also doing a crossover Dream about Knots Landing?
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Sam and Shaun like each other now? Well I'm sure most straight men can overlook some some flaws ig said person cam get hot women to flash their kitties at them. My bf thinks I'm weird for sitting in front of my laptop screaming and laughing, You just described what ALL GA readers do when they visit this site
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I can’t say for sure that there is a leak coming from within, I could hear @Summerabbacat thinking it's Joe the bent cop but then they started talking about the higher ups so its probably them especially now that Shane might be missing (I hoping he's hiding somewhere in the hospital) Megan, who worked for some high-powered law firm in the city. I hope her services won't be needed for something like the higher ups framing Rick She looked across at me and frowned. ‘Yeah, I see your point. Got any better suggestions?’ ‘Just let me think about that for a while,’ I said, as the beginnings of an idea started to form in the back of my brain. Hmm🤔 Adam's place maybe?
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Like thats ever been a problem for you
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“Pleading the fifth, are you? Fine—” she started, Since you like using courtroom terms Elenore who the HELL! appointed YOU!!! judge and jury? Im picturing an an opening Josh will notice and will have no idea how he noticed and then be able to escape again not knowing how he knew what to do
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[Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
weinerdog commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, November] – Strategic Mistakes
“I suppose no one has ever really told this guy how pretty he is,” Quinn said, Not true the guy in the club just did why did Quinn call Brad ‘his jealous husband’? It's one thing to be clueless about Brad up to that point but that comment Lyn really should have been smart enough to know what they meant by that. If those jocks know that them Alexander knew that -
Self-Hatred....Yes Please
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Self-Hatred....Yes Please
Well I was right only I thought Ryan would talk Dylan into it here he pretty much physically forced Dylan to. Ryan knew that Dylan knew he couldn't stop him from doing so this was rape and not the statutory kind. “I could tell you were a cocksucker the moment I saw you with Billy.” One has to wonder if Ryan forced Billy also😢 -
Self-Hatred....Yes Please
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Self-Hatred....Yes Please
I haven't quite finish the chapter yet I'm at the part where Lexi and Amanda are leaving after Ryan pissed her off . My guess what would happen after this point would explain why Ryan would invite Dylan who is three years younger to a party. Ok now to see if I'm right -
Christian Peen® must really be something if it's trademarked “Atta boy,” Stinky said. “My little barnacle menace. And did you know that barnacles’ penises are up to eight times their body length? It’s the largest penis-to-body ratio in the whole animal kingdom!” I looked that up expecting Google AI to answer "Perv" but it's absolutely true and there is a name for it called phenotypic plasticity. I'm picturing @LittleBuddhaTW finding this out and saying to himself "I have to put that in a story “You catch it, we cook it,” she said. “Sides are fries, coleslaw, fries, or fries.” I choose the fries no ,no make that the fries on second thought I'll have the......you get the idea
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On the way out, Michael said to Stephen, "Hopefully that will be enough to keep those losers in line and they won't bother us again." "Yeah, we can hope." If the four boys have parents who say " You let those sissies get the best of you"? Then they WILL bother them again hope I'm wrong
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Ok they kissed step one they did what they did in this chapter step 2 I guess all the readers will be anticipating step 3 now. Earlier in the chapter “You dressed?” Davin asked NO NO NO! Davin you don't do that you walk in and if you see what you hope to see say "oh....sorry" “Two more and by tomorrow after school,” she repeated Celia you don't know what you're asking for .What if Joel ends up inviting Rissa and Lance from his lunch tableWell at least the party wouldn't be dull maybe not fun but not dull
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Chapter 4: April Showers
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 4: April Showers
I wonder if Logan came clean (no pun intended) with Toby when Logan went outside to get some "fresh air" I like Oliver and I want to continue to like him but this makes it very difficult “This is really good,” Logan said, taking a bite into a slice of black olive pizza. “Where’d you get it from?” “I made it myself,” I put a few slices on a paper plate for myself The only thing worse then black olives on pizza is black olives with pineapple on pizza How can you do that with pizza? -
I always wondered why we almost never see politicians write fiction stories (Unless it is their autobiography)
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The Word That Changed Everything
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in The Word That Changed Everything
they won’t hover, but they’ll always be within range. Think of them as… subtle.” Oh yeah subtle all right...subtle as a nuclear weapon “That was… weird,” I said, watching him disappear. “Do you two know each other?” Oh yeah they know each other I had my Washington Commanders hat, Shiloh sported a Ravens one, Shane had the Nationals, and Shawn the Orioles. The Nationals🤔.....Shane must have gotten the short stick -
There has to be a way we can crack the passwords and get in to have a look around at what you lads used to get up to.’ In Tricky Ricky case wouldn't he just use the 'Forgot Password ?" feature all the sites have and then re-set it? I'm glad @Summerabbacat comment came up while I was typing this so I could read it before finishing mine .I was about to say a similar thing to what he and also @akascrubber wrote about the two murders being preceded by a rape first. To add more fuel to the killer following Rick he would have saw Rick interacting with Alexis. They should check if the business Alexis worked at had cameras and any other security or ATM cams that might have picked something up perhaps the guy who's face Rick can't place. Another reason why it was good @Summerabbacat posted before me is because I would have stolen some of his thunder which may have resulted in a different and yet LONGER comment from him😄
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Now you'll have to think like a Ukrainian but I'm looking forward to it This is the first time I saw the picture on the story page. Now I know why it was so hard for them to let go. Sometimes if you love something enough, you have to set it free, that would make a great bumper sticker....Oh ...wait
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Chapter 4: Independence Day
weinerdog commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 4: Independence Day
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Oh so Stealing Home is going to cross over into this story? I just started reading SH I guess I better be sure to finish it
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A busker played the Jerry Jeff Walker classic, “Mr. Bojangles,” Walker's version was the first but most people know The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band version and a few others like The Sammy Davis Jr. version you may have alienated a few fans @LittleBuddhaTW
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To me the film's contact did NOT live up the controversy media drummed up. I left the film thinking "that's it?" "this society has a long way to"
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...I Can't Figure It Out
weinerdog commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in ...I Can't Figure It Out
What's scary is I didn't realize I did that and I have no idea HOW!!!! I did that
