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  1. Like thats ever been a problem for you
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    Abducted

    “Pleading the fifth, are you? Fine—” she started, Since you like using courtroom terms Elenore who the HELL! appointed YOU!!! judge and jury? Im picturing an an opening Josh will notice and will have no idea how he noticed and then be able to escape again not knowing how he knew what to do
  3. “I suppose no one has ever really told this guy how pretty he is,” Quinn said, Not true the guy in the club just did why did Quinn call Brad ‘his jealous husband’? It's one thing to be clueless about Brad up to that point but that comment Lyn really should have been smart enough to know what they meant by that. If those jocks know that them Alexander knew that
  4. Well I was right only I thought Ryan would talk Dylan into it here he pretty much physically forced Dylan to. Ryan knew that Dylan knew he couldn't stop him from doing so this was rape and not the statutory kind. “I could tell you were a cocksucker the moment I saw you with Billy.” One has to wonder if Ryan forced Billy also😢
  5. I haven't quite finish the chapter yet I'm at the part where Lexi and Amanda are leaving after Ryan pissed her off . My guess what would happen after this point would explain why Ryan would invite Dylan who is three years younger to a party. Ok now to see if I'm right
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    Chapter 44

    Christian Peen® must really be something if it's trademarked “Atta boy,” Stinky said. “My little barnacle menace. And did you know that barnacles’ penises are up to eight times their body length? It’s the largest penis-to-body ratio in the whole animal kingdom!” I looked that up expecting Google AI to answer "Perv" but it's absolutely true and there is a name for it called phenotypic plasticity. I'm picturing @LittleBuddhaTW finding this out and saying to himself "I have to put that in a story “You catch it, we cook it,” she said. “Sides are fries, coleslaw, fries, or fries.” I choose the fries no ,no make that the fries on second thought I'll have the......you get the idea
  7. On the way out, Michael said to Stephen, "Hopefully that will be enough to keep those losers in line and they won't bother us again." "Yeah, we can hope." If the four boys have parents who say " You let those sissies get the best of you"? Then they WILL bother them again hope I'm wrong
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    Chapter 23

    Ok they kissed step one they did what they did in this chapter step 2 I guess all the readers will be anticipating step 3 now. Earlier in the chapter “You dressed?” Davin asked NO NO NO! Davin you don't do that you walk in and if you see what you hope to see say "oh....sorry" “Two more and by tomorrow after school,” she repeated Celia you don't know what you're asking for .What if Joel ends up inviting Rissa and Lance from his lunch tableWell at least the party wouldn't be dull maybe not fun but not dull
  9. I wonder if Logan came clean (no pun intended) with Toby when Logan went outside to get some "fresh air" I like Oliver and I want to continue to like him but this makes it very difficult “This is really good,” Logan said, taking a bite into a slice of black olive pizza. “Where’d you get it from?” “I made it myself,” I put a few slices on a paper plate for myself The only thing worse then black olives on pizza is black olives with pineapple on pizza How can you do that with pizza?
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    Chapter 22

    I always wondered why we almost never see politicians write fiction stories (Unless it is their autobiography)
  11. they won’t hover, but they’ll always be within range. Think of them as… subtle.” Oh yeah subtle all right...subtle as a nuclear weapon “That was… weird,” I said, watching him disappear. “Do you two know each other?” Oh yeah they know each other I had my Washington Commanders hat, Shiloh sported a Ravens one, Shane had the Nationals, and Shawn the Orioles. The Nationals🤔.....Shane must have gotten the short stick
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    Chapter 8

    There has to be a way we can crack the passwords and get in to have a look around at what you lads used to get up to.’ In Tricky Ricky case wouldn't he just use the 'Forgot Password ?" feature all the sites have and then re-set it? I'm glad @Summerabbacat comment came up while I was typing this so I could read it before finishing mine .I was about to say a similar thing to what he and also @akascrubber wrote about the two murders being preceded by a rape first. To add more fuel to the killer following Rick he would have saw Rick interacting with Alexis. They should check if the business Alexis worked at had cameras and any other security or ATM cams that might have picked something up perhaps the guy who's face Rick can't place. Another reason why it was good @Summerabbacat posted before me is because I would have stolen some of his thunder which may have resulted in a different and yet LONGER comment from him😄
  13. Now you'll have to think like a Ukrainian but I'm looking forward to it This is the first time I saw the picture on the story page. Now I know why it was so hard for them to let go. Sometimes if you love something enough, you have to set it free, that would make a great bumper sticker....Oh ...wait
  14. If the bruising gets worse Jake might have no choice then to tell his folks
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    Chapter 43

    Oh so Stealing Home is going to cross over into this story? I just started reading SH I guess I better be sure to finish it
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    Chapter 43

    A busker played the Jerry Jeff Walker classic, “Mr. Bojangles,” Walker's version was the first but most people know The Nitty Gritty Dirt Band version and a few others like The Sammy Davis Jr. version you may have alienated a few fans @LittleBuddhaTW
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    Chapter 7

    To me the film's contact did NOT live up the controversy media drummed up. I left the film thinking "that's it?" "this society has a long way to"
  18. What's scary is I didn't realize I did that and I have no idea HOW!!!! I did that
  19. Carter did a number on Ace but Leo just might be the right antidote
  20. ? What’s the protocol for meeting your ex-boyfriend on the 40th anniversary of Pride that you haven’t seen in two years? I bet if you typed that in Google AI you would would get a response I’m a clean freak and Konstantin is a fucking slob. I suppose you could have called this story The Gay Odd Couple
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    Chapter 7

    If @CincyKris is right about Martin then maybe that guy Rick keeps seeing but can't place might be a connection IF not the killer himself.If I remember right Rick described him as older so it is not a former classmate maybe this guy is the father of one of the victims perhaps HE thinks Rick did it. After showers, coffee and some toast smeared with Vegemite,...Vegemite!...Why do I think @Summerabbacat will use that as an excuse to post the Men at Work song.
  22. It's amazing how you can pivot from that one story to this story At least Lex didn't name his conquest Mitsubishi
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    Birthday(s)

    Lot of times Road trip in title of chapters mean chaos But Darren and Luca are too young for that right.....RIGHT?????
  24. An hour later and after one of our biggest fights, he made me promise that I would stop sharing my journal regarding stories about our relationship with Susan. Well now that promise was broken the minute you started posting this story wasn't it This chapter, by far the most experimental I've ever written, grew so big, I broke it up into two parts. Okay so this chapter was 3,885 words so that means you end up writing somewhere between 7,500 to 8,500 words........ That's a mini chapter for @Krista
  25. I think that comment serves as a pretty good brief epilogue .Thank you
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