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Henry did well and is gaining self-confidence. I’m glad he is doing this. Nico and Ivo are an interesting couple. Where will this end?
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Another Brick in the Wall
Doha commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Another Brick in the Wall
What a great start! I love Henry already. Although older, I can totally relate 😂. -
The story has brought my a sense of joy to me today and the post script tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing something so profound. I also have that man who helped me deal with coming out and getting divorced when I was certain that I was the most undeserving cretin God ever breathed life into. Even though, the relationship was brief and we both moved on still appreciating each other, it helped me to see that life was good and that I was OK. Thank you again for reminding me of my own Gil.
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A lovely Christmas Eve and heat under the tree. 🌲
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Oh they have whole week to practice and recharge 😜
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A first date on the horizon and an unknown visitor. Can’t wait for the next chapter to land.
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This AI generated story is definitely worth a read. It highlights the literary devices commonly used in AI generated story telling, equipping you to spot it in other stories on the site. Hats off to Ken for taking the initiative!
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What a way to spend Christmas Eve. I could learn a thing or two from this group of guys.
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That was a sex scene very well written! Wow! 🤩
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It was certainly attraction at first sight! 🔥
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I enjoyed that opening chapter immensely. Let’s see how this unfolds.
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The ending was good. I got a little choked up I must admit. It certainly had a much better feel. Perhaps a lot of guidance given to the AI author. I look forward to your next story.
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You’ve hit the hard, steel nail right on its flattened, coin-like head.
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Let’s see what the next few chapters do. As the chapters shorten, the final two may well be a few paragraphs each. 😂
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😜 AI is certainly ensuring that our two protagonists are kept as safe as can be.
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A most interesting experiment indeed. As AI becomes better at mimicking human writing and story telling, it could become very difficult to identify whether a piece of writing is AI generated. I know that for drafting work documents, policy writing and speeches I need to give very clear instructions, upload tons of my own writing and give guidance on style, grammar, vocabulary suitable for the audience and to keep description and one liners to a minimum. In the end, it can take quite a long time to get your product just as you want it.
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Agreed. I think AI is great for creating frameworks and breaking down the chapter into parts to be covered. It is also good to keep all the threads of the story remembered, but I really want to see the hand of the author and hear his/her voice in the text.
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I can’t comment on what might be bothering you Gary, but as an author, I love what you write. The style, the characterisation, the thematic approach, the true-to-life diction and vocabulary all come together to create stories that are both enjoyable and spiritually uplifting. I hope you have many more stories in you that can’t wait to be told.
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As for sex scenes, I agree with @peter rietbergen and @Carl Accolla, they are immensely difficult to write and generally not very interesting to read. For me the best stories on GA use them very sparingly.
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As most of the previous comments have noted, AI is relatively easy to spot. And also a bit disappointing when it is spotted. The formula is the same: lots of marathons and similes, every sentence seems to want a punch of its own, brief bursts like “That matters!” and “it quietly settled”. And the pendulum approach to statements: “the rains came, not pouring, not in torrents, like a quiet mist that settled over the emerald green valley”.
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Quite a lot of writers on this site use AI. The style is relatively generic and so it becomes quite clear which are generated by AI and which have had more author input. i see no reason to ignore AI but I do find that I feel just a little bit less enthusiastic about stories when I realise they are largely AI generated. I guess it is the loss of the human touch.
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Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
Doha commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
Well done Shir! And just as well done to all the men of Two Spirits Ranch who put their hands up to stand watch. -
Gary I’m not enjoying this, I’m absolutely loving it, lapping it up!
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I’m sure that Augie and Fletch will find a way to assist Willy James and Runyon. Who knows there could be a safe haven developed in Warrenville.
