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  1. I'm with you on this. I think that Ray has de-vampired the vampire.
  2. Loving the dialogue between Ray and Wolf. Now a vampire appears. 🧛‍♂️ let's see how our guys handle this.
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    BigPaws

    Although I've only read 3 chapters so far, I have to say this story is gripping me. It has humor, drama and I'm predicting a dollop of shifter romance soon. Highly recommended.
  4. It was the best he had felt for as long as he could remember - which was yesterday 😆 🤣 😂 Im really enjoying this. A lovely quick chapter and let's see where the wolf leads him.
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    Act I - Shelter

    I love the wolf 🐺. He doesn't suffer fools gladly. I'm glad Ray finally got to a shelter. Now why does our Lycan, live in a cave on his own?
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    Act I - The Chase

    An excellent start. I'm delighted I've come late to this story as I don't have to wait to move to the next chapter. Brilliant writing and build up of tension.
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    Act I - The Chase

    An excellent start. I'm delighted I've come late to this story as I don't have to wait to move to the next chapter. Brilliant writing and build up of tension.
  8. Bob and the Biker is a brilliantly written snapshot of a life changing encounter for Bob, one that he will remember into old age. A quick but poignantly powerful read.
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    Chapter 3

    This was a wonderful "moment" and one that Bob will love off of for the rest of the summer. It will give him the courage to be himself and the confidence to go for what he wants. Brilliant.
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    Chapter 3

    Agreed. A perfect summer holiday encounter. The biker will ride on and Bob will remember this moment for the rest of his life.
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    Chapter 19

    Kate the Bride, has emerged as a real friend to Hugo. She has nursed him, shared what she has with him, confided in him about her private hell, and now faces the danger of the stalkers. As someone who experiences a repeated version of love that is forgotten as soon as it begins, she is throwing herself into helping Hugo find his real love, Alec. She is simply lovely. 😍
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    Chapter 2

    Well that bike got great rundown, while Bob and I had a little meltdown. 🔥 🥵
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    Chapter 1

    What ahreat, tantalizing start.
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    Chapter 18

    Nice to know you're no threat. Poor but very lucky Hugo. So the mechs are a man-made war machine designed to take over a static stream - an invasion. Sounds very human. As for Stoker, perhaps he is already having that cup of tea with the monster hive queen, discussing the finer points of Grouse hunting..... At least i hope he is.
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    Chapter 17

    What a delight filled chapter and much needed food for the next leg of the journey they are about to undertake. Alec and Hugo have finally declared their commitment to each other. And the short-k8ng is in charge. Even during my university days in the late '80s, the current freedom was unimaginable, but so very welcome.
  16. OK, so they are both getting ready for each other. When it happens it's going to be 🔥 🥵
  17. Go for it Gavin. Live a little!
  18. A great start. Rory and Matthew will have an interesting time. I wonder if there is more than meets the eye, to the dislike between their dads?
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    Chapter 16

    I am very glad Hugo took the knife. As Sinjin said Stoker would give his life for Hugo, so don't let him give it needlessly because of pride. Excellent lesson! How did Alec get a shotgun 100 years out of its time? Who had visited him or where had he visited previously and forgotten?
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    Chapter 16

    That bothered me too.
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    Chapter 15

    I love this! ❤️
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    Chapter 15

    A very interesting, indeed disconcerting, view of the devil. A creation of our own making that reflects back to us our deepest shames, greatest fears. Very poignant as you mentioned in one of the comments. This gives me pause for thought.
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    Chapter 14

    This story really is a masterpiece of imagination - somewhere between Gilliver's Travels and Coleridge's Xanadu.
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    Chapter 12

    I'm in a plane from Cape Town to Doha. Heading back to work after a long summer holiday. So this story has helped the time on-board to fly by. On-board Wi-Fi is grand.
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    Chapter 13

    Good thinking to get rid of the Witch Hunter at least for the time being. They will need to get their watches or chronometer though.
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