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[Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, October, Sophomore Year] – Visceral Reaction
Lyn was so skittish and tightly wound up. If only he could loosen up around Brad. But I get it. He was so young amd scared and hiding on so many levels. Alexander remains the rock. -
There is a very tense dynamic developing and Lyn, to his surprise, is the prize. What exactly is going on with Brad?
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That was a fantastic read. I loved it. Bearpaw is a land of legends. Hopefully we see more of it in the future, as well as Larkspur. 💋 😘
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Farley & Wolf is a quick and captivating read; a twist on a theme that will leave you smiling.
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A lovely short story. It would be a dream to have this experience in real life, wouldn't it.
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Hermit is a sweet short story, perfect for a cold winter's afternoon.
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The federal agent angle took me by surprise. Hopefully Coop can play the stockmarket with what is left.
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As did we all. 😆
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Those years were so full of angst. Trying to come to terms with who we were in a world that didn't quite allow for it. I'm about 10 years ahead of you, with university being in the late 80s. God, I was naive. Your story brings back so many memories and to some extent regret for experiences not lived. Nevertheless, we cannot walk 2 paths at once, so we try to appreciate what we have and what we did rather than regret the wrong choices we made. What to do, as the Egyptians say.
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Eastbourne Tales is a collection of glimpses into the life and soul of the author. The little slices of life that are revealed, speak to anyone who has been young, uncertain and scrabbling to keep his nose above water. A must read.
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These slices of life that eventually make up a whole. ❤️
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On a river bank in Africa, and in the back of a car at the drive in. But not on top of a muddy cliff in a rainstorm at 4am. This was a very poignant chapter for me. I could feel the anxiety and trauma of that 17 year old. I never got that close to topping myself, but the thought of being gay and not wanting to be, consumed me like a relentless bush fire at that age.
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All the adventures of youth. Fabulous.
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The days of easy going hook ups. If not why not?
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Loving this and making me think back to university days in the 80s.
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It sounds like you had amazing friends. 👏 Having only finally emerged from the closet later in life and living in the Middle East, those kinds of friendships have eluded me.
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Some poignant back stories here that resonate on many levels with a lot of the readers.
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What a journey this has been. I have loved every moment. Now for Higo and the two Stokers to have some repeated relaxation. 😉
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Two of every one. Wow. At least Miller is dead, although I thought he had died in the hallofmirrors. Can't wait for Alec and Hugo to be together again. What of Reed? And Henry?
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Dottie had to be killed or the cycle of destruction would never end.
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Another brilliant chapter with resolution in sight. I hope Dottie gets her cumuppence.
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This was a superb chapter, so pleasing to read! I'm really looking forward to how Ariel faces off against a cucumber sandwich eating demon. 😆
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How he loves his hat!
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That is a particularly pleasing line!
