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  1. Doha
    This chapter is a masterpiece in its own right. Bobby is allowed to be the kid trusting the adult, and Nick quietly takes charge in the gentlest possible way. It seems that the physical breaking of Adrian is going to be the trigger of Bobby and Nick's personal development.
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    Chapter 10

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Let's see how this goes.
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    Chapter 9

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 9

    There are going to be a whole lot of follow ups to this. For sure. 🔥
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    It Is Enough

    Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It Is Enough

    Both Ryder and Danny have had a taste of happiness and I don't think either will be able to walk away from that.
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    It Is Enough

    Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It Is Enough

    @Al Norris you may just be onto something here. 🤔 could it be that Cassandra is cursed and by sending Ryder to Pembroke, and perhaps his dearh, she may be able to have the curse removed. So many alternatives.
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    Chapter 15

    Doha commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Keith needs such a good smack. I'm hopeful that while Jim is away, Keith and Jon will get to know each other a bit and perhaps some loosening up will happen.
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    What a pity that the break through with Bobby had to revert to the same routine of dominant daddy and suppliant son. They might have reached a crossroad and raken the wrong turn. The start of this chapter with a frail Adeian, who is probably 45 at that point is a sad moment. Where did Bobby go and where is Nick. Do they go off together?
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    "Do you hate me?" Adrian whispered into Nick, his head diving inside his lover's chest. "No," Nick whispered back. "I just hate how much I want to believe you." How many of us have been in that precise position; of loving but knowing it was unhealthy, doomed, ultimately unfulfilled, but recklessly holding on anyway. Nick, come on, you're cleverer than this, unless it is the quiet, unnoticed power you actually love. Interesting years ahead for them both. I wonder if they will feel like wasted years?
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    Chapter 8

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Nope. Not even a little bit.
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    Chapter 5

    Doha commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 5

    The hunt is well on its way. I'm sure that if Josh starts posting on social media in search of Wipee, something will come up.
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    So a struggle for dominance is under way. It probably has been bubbling for 12 years. As for the "I dont bottom" line, Lyn has another thing coming with Alexander. I've no doubt that he will be screaming with pleasure at some stage in these 10 days.
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    Alexander is an interesting character and these three are quite a mixture. But who is the garlic in the fruit salad?
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    Alexander is a dark horse. And a muscular one at that. Let's see what goes down between Lyn and Alexander. Brad is a lot more wiley than Lyn gives him credit for.
  14. Doha
    That smell of sweat when you're plastered can be a big turn on. Puke, on the other hand ...
  15. Doha
    OmG. I missed this for weeks. Glad to find it now.great start. Loving the story already. So a triangle going on with Bella the outlier. Let's see how this goes down.
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    Chapter 7

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Two guys having fun. 🔥
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    Bobby has taken shelter within the walls of his indifference and cruelty. He probably learnt to do this at a very young age. Nick, however, unlike Adrian, sees right through this armour and with a very calm authenticity calls Bobby out. Bobby, unarmed, is still a little boy looking for his anchor in the world - an anchor Adrian cannot be.
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    Wow, that was hot. They are getting closer and the connection is growing stronger. 🙌
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    Chapter 6

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Brad is loving this. So is Cody. So am I.
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    Chapter 5

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Wow. That was a walk on the wild side for Brad, but then maybe it isn't... who knows.
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    Chapter 4

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Well sure, Brad is leaking. So am I. 😆 This is proper hot. 🔥
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    Chapter 3

    Doha commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Wow! What a great time to be an amateur film producer. I hope he holds it.
  23. Doha
    This was an intriguing chapter with a side to Nick emerging that we had not suspected, but perhaps we will see more of in the unfolding story from 5 years previously. I do wonder when Nick bought the truth inducing drugs, but suspect that he has known for some time what Adrian and Bobby were up to and came to the beach prepared for this "showdown". Bobby is being dismantled, Adrian is being seen for who he is and Nick is emerging as a master of induction. Let's see how it goes. Ps. They all have huge cocks. 😉 😜
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    Agreed @A Pal. This sentence is so poignant as that boy sees the throne for what it is and the winds of reality blowing it down.
  25. Doha
    We are really witnessing the emergence of some type of character evolution in Nick. How it will develop is what I'm interested in seeing.
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